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A long road to Eden Pt1
War, War never changes
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Liam pulled up the bike and surveyed the scene he had to admit, it wasnt much. A run down house and a dead body, still there might be something of worth in the house.


Flipping up his visor and yanking the sawn off from the side of the bike Liam looked around


With a slight sigh he stepped down and began to walk towards the door of the house.


stopping by the body he looked it over. The body was old, Liam could tell, no one used money any more it just wasnt worth anything, also judging by the machine pistol in its other hand Liam came to the conclusion that te person hadnt come by the money by honest methods.


looking around the shack the only real thing of intrest was the cuboards on the left with a few cans rolling about in them


Liam began to stuff the cans in his pockets, in this world any food was good food even if it was pre-war cans.


A sound made him pause before shoving the last can into his back pocket.


Grabbing his gun he went out side to invesigate the cause of the noise


Liam heard the sound again causing him to look to his left. Before him was a mutaded creature, one of the countless that roamed the wastelands.


Liam turned to run hopeing to get back to his bike before the thing reached him.


To his horror in his haste to get way he tripped falling to the ground heaverly


Rolling over still winded he lined up the barrels of his shotgun with the soft underparts of the creatures neck.


Then pulled both triggers sending a jolt up his entire arm and throwing the creature away from him


Standing up still shaking from his near death experience liam took of his helmet and wiped the sweat from his forehead


Taking a long breath he once again jammed the helmet back on his head, reloded his shotgun and walked stiffly back to his bike


Storing the cans in one of his saddle bag and getting onto his bike with a wince Liam took one last look. Then drove off.


-ok that didnt go to bad for my first time hopefully adding more to this comic comments are much appreciated thanks
Joe




Comments

 I like it 
  October 14, 2011
Cool start. As others, I suggest to use a background...
 I like it 
  October 11, 2011
someones been playing fallout anyways good work i like the concept and build
 I like it 
  June 10, 2011
Good work, but you should get a new background. Also, you need to get people involved in the story, maybe make a signup, get people in the series, maybe give them choices. Just get people involved. Also add this to groups.
 I like it 
  June 7, 2011
Nice scene, yeah, a white background is better than nothing butfor begin it has potential
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Hmmm... This looks pretty good! And about the background, try using a white sheet.
 I made it 
  June 6, 2011
Quoting Nufalak of Mythada Not bad. The build is decent, and theres a good concept going here. Do you have a full plot planned out? At least most of one? I would also suggest a different background and experimenting with some more camera angles. Other than that though, not a bad start.
yep got full plot planned out apart from that the background is the best i can do
 I like it 
  June 6, 2011
Not bad. The build is decent, and theres a good concept going here. Do you have a full plot planned out? At least most of one? I would also suggest a different background and experimenting with some more camera angles. Other than that though, not a bad start.
 
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