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The Spherus Chronicles-Episode 1, Humble Beginnings
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This is the first episode of my new series called- The Spherus Chronicles!!!! Omni just crashed landed on the Bara Magna section of Spherus Magna. Enjoy!
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Omni:Ugghhhhhh...




Omni:Where am I?




Omni:Well, I better get going, nothing is going to happen just sitting here. But who is I?
He looked upon the landscape, and this is what he saw.




A long desert, slowly sloping upwards, then turning into a grassy table land.




He walked and walked, pondering on who he is and where he is. He decided that heading for the grassy area was best option.




Omni looks at a boulder for a minute, but then it moved!




He stares at it, making it shake and move very violently.




Then the boulder flies off into the distance.




After a while of walking, Omni sits to rest and contemplate.
Omni:Hmmm, I have power over rock, I seem to remember something about powers......?



It starts to rain while Omni trys to move some rocks, but the rain falls horizontaly instead!
Omni:AMAZING!!!




WHOOOSH!!!
He then bends all of the rain!
Omni:This is most interesting, TWO powers? Why stop there?




He walks further upward, closing in on his goal, all the while considering all of his newfound mysteries.



Omni:I will test my theory, WITH A POWER SURGE!!!! Hmmm, I seem to have power over rock,water,wind,fire, and metal.



Omni:I have a great power, and with great power somethin somethin, blah blah blah, whatever, something like that.




???:Who goes there!!!
Omni:I dont know, exactly, guess you can just call me "all", or Omni(which sounds cooler). And who might you be?



Cossix:I am Cossix, appointed by Mata Nui himself to seek the Leader!!!!



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Master N  the Making
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  May 23, 2011
epic!
Master N  the Making
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Chaos Master
  May 23, 2011
nice story so far. can't say much yet, seeing as it's chapter one. everyone seems to be doing a comic now, have you noticed? they are quite popular.
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  May 23, 2011
Quoting Gregory Keegan DUDE!!!!
DUDE!!!!
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  May 23, 2011
your photo editing needs some work but that landscape really looks great!!! and the "with greta power comes blah blah blah" part is hilarious!
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  May 23, 2011
Quoting Baron Von Ben ~ Cool story! Oh, and being a Latin student, "Omni," with that ending is either Dative (Translated as "for all") or Ablative case (object of a prepostion, with a lack of a preposition). Just thought you'd like to know. :P
I HATE grammar, but love learning etymologies, so thanks!
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  May 23, 2011
Quoting Ben Cossy You don't have to remind me every time you've posted something, You've in my Favourite builders, so due to my rules, I have to comment on your stuff, weather I like it or not :D Anyway, great intro to your comic! I think you needed to say more about how Omni knew nothing of his past, and that he doesn't know how he got there, apart from that, Great work :D
Oh, sorry about that. You dont have to comment on all my stuff if you dont want too. And the bit about the memory loss thing, the reader is supposed to be just as mystified as Omni is.
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  May 23, 2011
DUDE!!!!
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  May 23, 2011
Cool story! Oh, and being a Latin student, "Omni," with that ending is either Dative (Translated as "for all") or Ablative case (object of a prepostion, with a lack of a preposition). Just thought you'd like to know. :P
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  May 23, 2011
Awesome! Love some of the effects! :D
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  May 23, 2011
Oh and how did I forget to say this! Thanks for including me :D
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  May 23, 2011
You don't have to remind me every time you've posted something, You've in my Favourite builders, so due to my rules, I have to comment on your stuff, weather I like it or not :D Anyway, great intro to your comic! I think you needed to say more about how Omni knew nothing of his past, and that he doesn't know how he got there, apart from that, Great work :D
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  May 23, 2011
Epic chapter,will Destrin be in teh next chapter?or teh next chapter after dat?Or teh one after dat one?
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  May 23, 2011
Great! More!
 
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