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The Forgotten Tale Part 7: The Recounted Tale....
Callan, Davix, Helad, and Korr have found the planet of Bara Magna! But with Gaturahk's return to finish his job, will all of our friends make it out alive?
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Present Korr: Now, I'm afraid my story is near it's end, and you might not like what you hear. But on I must go....

After about a month of searching, we finally found Bara Magna. This was probably about the time Makuta was on his way to Bara Magna. We searched the sand for life when....

SMASH!!! Something had hit our ship! And we all had our guesses on what that thing was....

It was Gaturahk! He messed with our engines until the ship started to go down...

Present Korr: Helad had to get us out quickly, so he did something he had planned on doing sooner....
Helad: It is time we depart.... here my young friends, take these stones, I'm sure they'll save you from your fall....

Callan: How will they do that?
Helad: You'll find out soon enough.....

Helad: Just in case, take these Kanohi masks of Power. I have used them in the past, and they are very suitable for you...

Callan: But how can we use these masks? We're only Matoran!
Davix: Thank you, sir....

Helad: Trust me, Callan, everything will be fine. This may be the last time I see you, so please use your power wisely....
Callan: What power?! What's going on?!?

Helad: THERE'S NO TIME!! Jump, Callan!
Callan: Yes sir!

Callan: I know what happened next.....

Callan: I must have fallen a long way when I realized...

Callan: That stone was a Toa Stone! It turned me into a hero!

Callan: But the pressure I was feeling combined with the impact of hitting the sand head on must have broken my mask... and erased my memory....

Ta Matoran: What was that that just fell?!?
Ko Matoran: It looked like a body to me!

Ta Matoran: A toa? How did he get here?!?
Ko Matoran: Don't ask m... hey, he's moving!

Callan: Oh.... my head.... where am I? WHO am I?

Ta Matoran: Don't know you're second question, but you're on Spherus Magna! Mata Nui just saved us all from Makuta!
Ko Matoran: Think you Kohlii head! If he doesn't know who he is, how's he gonna know who Mata Nui is?
Ta Matoran: Oh... that makes sense...

Ko Matoran: Do you remember anything?
Callan: No... wait.... Callan... Callan... it must... be... my name!
Ta Matoran: Well okay, Callan! Looks like one of those masks over there's broken, but that silvery red one looks good! Put it on!
Callan: What?! Oh... okay...

Callan: Here goes....

Callan: WHOA!!!

Callan: I feel stronger! And what's that thing?!?

Callan: Ha! A weapon! Looks like I've got some general memory, but I don't know a thing about how I got here!

Ta Matoran: Well we better get back to all the other Matoran..... you wanna come?
Callan: Sure... I got nowhere else to go...

Callan: I met Davix a little later. He must have hit his head too, cause the only thing he remembered was his name and me. I recognized him as well. But back to your story, what happened to Helad and yourself?

Korr: Well.....

Past Korr: We best be getting off now! I can break your fall and repair myself as you made me!
Helad: No my friend! Go! I still have business to attend to! I'll catch up with you soon!

Present Korr: I could tell he was lying, for he had made me well. But not one to disobey when ordered, I jumped. But thanks to a camera installed in the ship that I was connected to, I could see what happened in the ship before I crashed into the sand...

Present Korr: I saw him throw out any valuables off the ship, then he simply sat down.
Helad: Any second now.....

Gaturahk: Ah, old one, I hoped you'd be here. I saw your friends evacuate and I just wanted to let you know that I'll be killing them next.... but you're my first target. Ready to die?
Helad: Almost, Rahkshi, but I have one last thing to attend to.

Gaturahk: And what is that, old fool?

Helad: This!
*Self destruct activated! 3....2.....1...*

Present Korr: My theory is that that Rahkshi has powers over steam and can turn into it at will. That's why we saw the steam speed off when Davix saved us. In that case, that would mean that the Rahkshi probably survived....

But the explosion did exactly what Helad wanted it to. It separated the Rahkshi's molecules so that it would take a long time to put itself back together.....

Callan: So... did... Helad...?

Korr: Yes, Callan. He sacrificed himself to stop Gaturahk. He saved us all.

Davix: I... I can't believe it. I've heard so much and it is very late.

Callan: Davix is right. We must rest. Thank you for telling our story, Korr, we will talk about it more in the morning....
Korr: I understand.... your minds are full. Try to sleep, and I will see you in the morning.
Vyron: Uh.... cool tale, man. That's fictional right?
Korr: *Facepalm*

And so ends the Forgotten Tale. But do not fret for here is a sneak peak into my next story, coming soon!

The War on the Rogue Sneak Peak


This very same night in a new OoMN base on Spherus Magna....
Jordan: Sigh.... where are they?!? We can't stay up all night!!

Cossy: Right here, slow poke, how did you not notice me?!?
Jordan: Huh? Hey, I know you got here with that mask of yours!
Cossy: Darn it!

Cossy: So a new mission, eh? It really has been getting boring around here. So how many men on this mission?
Jordan: 3.

Jordan and there's our third member....

Kustolf: Here, Jordan. So we're on a new mission? Great. Just great.(He's being sarcastic)

Kustolf: So are we going to kill a few Fikou Spiders again? Or maybe this time we'll assassinate a rock. Those are VERY dangerous...

Cossy: If you know what's good for you, don't talk to Jordan that way! If it weren't for him, you'd be Muaka dinner. How about you kill yourself since you love killing so much!

Kustolf: Please, if anyone of us is dying, your going to be the one, fire-spitter!

Jordan: Hey! You're both going to be dead if you don't shut your mouths and listen!

A few minutes of arguing later....

Jordan: Finally! Alright, let me explain what we're going to do and why.

Jordan: We recently intercepted a transmission between the Shadowed One and one of his most feared underlings: Magmagear. Listen to the tape....

Cossy: What are you waiting for? Play it!

Magmagear: Master, please let me explain what happened!
TSO: I have no intention to listen to you explain your failure. You've been one of my best hunters for years all to be ruined by a few Matoran who pushed you into a vat of Energized Protodermis! I half wished that it had killed you, but somehow you survived. And for what?!? You're less than half the size you used to be and you'll be lucky if I don't feed you to some Morbuzahk!
Magmagear: Please Master, you don't understand! I have power over Proto...
TSO: ENOUGH!! Forget it. But since you have served me well in the past, I will give you a chance to redeem yourself. You must take over a small group of Dark Hunters on Spherus Magna who have been little more than a nuisance. Only if you prove you still got it will you get real missions again.
Magmagear: Thank you Master, you won't be sorry. I'll kill Tahu for you!
*Phzbzszztt!*

Kustolf: So we're gonna hunt down this Magmagear and kill him, right?
Jordan: Not quite, we need him alive. He may know the location of the Shadowed One
which just might lead to the destruction of the Dark Hunters.
Cossy: But there's only three of us?!? If Magmagear is so powerful and he speaks of having power over Protodermis, why would only three members go after him!

Jordan: We won't be alone. We have plenty of help on this surface. Gringat may be able to help, maybe we can convince the 230th Ardike to help us, and maybe we can get help from those two Lords, Callan and Davix!

Cossy: Alright! So we leave in the morning?

Jordan: Yes. I just hope nothing bad happens by then......

Somewhere in the dessert area of Spherus Magna....

Spike: I don't understand! Why do we have to sit around all the time doing nothing!

Veneno: You fool! Let's just go attack 20 Toa at once and kill them all! We have to attack with cunning and strike two Gukkos with one stone!

Spike: I'm tired of you ordering us around! Why don't I just kill you and take over this band myself?!?
???: Because he isn't in charge anymore.....

Spike: What in Mata Nui?!? Who said that?!?

???: I did. Now, you can all submit to this change in authority and be spared pain.....

Magmagear: Or suffer the wrath of Magmagear!!

To be continued.....



Comments

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  June 4, 2011
Great story! i like the ending!
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  June 4, 2011
Thanks Lego Obsessionist! :D
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  June 4, 2011
That was an epic ending! Well done!
Caleb Lang
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Yoshi the killler
  May 25, 2011
I loved the forgotten tale! The suspense of this new story!!!! I love reading!!
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  May 22, 2011
I like the smart head design for Korr, very nice.
Caleb Lang
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Cheesy Q
  May 21, 2011
Maybe a certain yellow Toa with a sniper rifle could join their team and help them at one point.
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  May 21, 2011
Awesome I loved the stories! And I cant wait for this new one.
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  May 21, 2011
"so.. its fiction, right? *facepalm* hilarious! and that part where he is like "or maybe we can assasinate a rock" is funny!
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  May 21, 2011
Quoting Cheesy Q Maybe a certain yellow Toa with a sniper rifle could join their team and help them at one point.
I MIGHT add Knoxus in the story, but that's an enormous if since I don't even have him built yet. Cheesy is definitely going to be in the story, but his role wasn't going to be big. I may change that.
Caleb Lang
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  May 20, 2011
then i come and kick their butts!
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  May 20, 2011
"Then Knoxus becomes visible behind the 3 heroes and says, 'I heard everything, and I want in." Haha, JK JK. But that would kinda make sense BC he was a OoMN member around that time. ;)
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  May 20, 2011
Quoting Commander Spencer, Ultimate Bionicle Fan Cool! I think you should you make a series where Gaturahk returns, Callan and Davix rebuild Helad, and Gaturahk makes an army of rahkshi. If you do make it, I would be happy to see it!
As interesting as that sounds, there are a few problems. First, Gaturahk is back and he's a part of a small group of Dark Hunters called the Rogue. Second, Helad is a robotic AND organic being, so rebuilding him the same way he was would be impossible. Especially since his body was incinerated in the explosion. Still, thanks for those tips! :D
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  May 20, 2011
Cool! I think you should you make a series where Gaturahk returns, Callan and Davix rebuild Helad, and Gaturahk makes an army of rahkshi. If you do make it, I would be happy to see it!
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  May 20, 2011
Awesome finale, and the new series looks great!
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  May 20, 2011
Great ending for a great story! Can't wait for the new one!
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  May 20, 2011
A great ending to a brilliant tale! Great stuff Callan! I can't wait for your new comic to start too :D It's funny, The third series of A Story Reborn, will be 'Rise of the Dark Hunters' :D And It'll be based on The Shadowed One's return after Teridax's death :D It's epic how both our comics will work together :D Again, great work on both comic's! Thanks for putting me in it ;)
Caleb Lang
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Chaos Master
  May 19, 2011
EPIC please make the next sires soon! i NEED to read the rest! (btw this upcoming story looks like it might be your best so far!)
Caleb Lang
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S.E.D. (The Editor)
  May 19, 2011
Awesome story! But why are there so many ?
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  May 19, 2011
Sweet! I see a hint at a Temporal Varient of Aridike in there...:D Can't wait! Oh! And guess what I found in a new box of pieces I got...:P
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  May 19, 2011
Looks like I'll be needing to step up my writing game :) Great finale and preview, looks to be the best yet. Oh, and Kenaz could help too, I'm just sayin' ;)
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  May 19, 2011
Looks like a brilliant new story...with me in it! Can't wait! XD
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  May 19, 2011
Epic conclusion, I will have to make this for my self moc since nothing is known from how he used to be, but i guarantee it will be a dark and strange tale. Anyways, I love how you incorporated toa stones into your story, and how everything fits! Very great job bro! New story looks cool, but well..... i don't know.....
  May 19, 2011
Yeah, I guess that makes sense. Looking forward to the next part =)
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  May 19, 2011
Quoting Skorp TS Helad died for a good cause. That preview seems interesting. I don't think TSO is very forgiving, though. I mean, he chopped off Lariska's arm and disintegrated many Hunters with his awesomeness =P
Meh, but look what Magmagear has done for him in the past? It's not like he's giving Magmagear a great mission. Besides, Ben made up that TSO sent Magmagear to lead the Rogue, I'm just filling in the details.
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  May 19, 2011
Helad died for a good cause. That preview seems interesting. I don't think TSO is very forgiving, though. I mean, he chopped off Lariska's arm and disintegrated many Hunters with his awesomeness =P
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  May 19, 2011
Quoting S.E.D. (The Editor) Awesome story! But why are there so many ?
Sorry about that, our new mac is kinda weird like that when writing " ' " apostrophes.
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  May 19, 2011
Quoting Toa Phosphorus I always did like the forgotten tale but the next one looks like the best yet!!!! And i'm in it!!!! woot and his personality totally fits my real life one! What that didn't sound like something kulstof would say well that would be something phos would say.
Uh.... different personalities for different universes? XD Thanks a million guys! :D
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  May 19, 2011
I always did like the forgotten tale but the next one looks like the best yet!!!! And i'm in it!!!! woot and his personality totally fits my real life one! What that didn't sound like something kulstof would say well that would be something phos would say.
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  May 19, 2011
Great story, but why the fancy symbols?
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  May 19, 2011
Epic story and storytelling, I'll make sure to be tuned in to the next one!
 
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