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The Forgotten Tale Part 6: Time is running out...
Resurrected!! I'm finally going to finish this series, so enjoy the second to last part! :D
About this creation
(NOTE: This episode will be narrated by Korr. Enjoy! :D)

Present Korr: As I was saying, we were attacked by natives of Bota Magna as we were searching for fuel as well as the inhabitants of this planet that had found us. It looked as if they were going to kill us when....

Callan and Helad arrived! We were very relieved....

Helad told the natives that we had found their village and had been welcomed by these native's friends. Helad proved their friendship with a blazing red dagger made by the natives, given to Callan as a weapon and a gift.

Somewhat assured of our friendship, the natives escorted as back to their village...

We soon found the fuel we needed, but it would take a long time to transport it all into the ship. So the natives accepted us into their village, where we made ourselves at home while spending time each day transporting fuel into the ship.

Callan and I had daily training exercises, although Callan didn't improve much....
Present Callan: Hey!
Present Korr: It's the truth!

Anyway, Davix met a native named Crisbec, who taught Davix to love music. Davix became quite good at his guitar, and performed to us every night!

Day by day we got more and more fuel. It had been a couple months since we arrived, but it felt like we had been there for years. But we soon found out that time was something that we didn't have...

Makuta: Ah, Gaturahk, it is good to see you have been completed. It was very hard to create you, so I believe you may just be my only son of steam..... Anyway, you know your orders...... go and find those fools who barely escaped me, and crush them....
Gaturahk: Hisssss.....

*Gaturahk leaves Makuta's body in search of Helad and his friends...*

Korr: Ahem.... anyway, a strange Rahkshi attacked our village6 months after our arrival.... a few of our native friends were murdered, and many were injured.....

Davix was no where to be seen, and as I was sprawled on the ground, I saw Callan continue to battle this beast... he was quickly disarmed...
Present Callan: Come on!!
Korr: Stop interrupting!

Anyway, as the beast was about to kill Callan....

Davix arrived with his guitar! I was surprised that Davix was playing it rather than using it as a weapon....

But Davix continued to play, which in the end....

turned out to be the beast's weakness! I could hear it's kraata scream in agony!

The creature quickly disappeared into thin air, as we strangly saw steam speed away from us....

Callan and Davix were celebrating the creature's defeat, but no one else was happy, not even Helad. Helad knew it was a mistake to take our time here, and blamed himself for the creature's appearance more than the villagers did. Helad had us quickly finish filling the ship with fuel. We were leaving.

All of the natives had rejected us except the two who had attacked Davix and I. They intended to see us off. We would miss them. Helad told them to prepare for more of Makuta's allies.....

After our goodbyes, we shuffled into our ship, all of us were gloomy. We only hoped that no more destruction would befall our new friends.

And so we took off of Bota Magna....

Our last expedition had begun....

Please comment and rate if you like it! :D



Comments

 I like it 
  May 21, 2011
5/5 this story is awesome.
 I made it 
  May 19, 2011
Quoting Chopperskull (Luja) I love how you fit in more of Callan and Davix's personality into the story! i just can't wait till mid June, so i can continue my story! 5 on 5, i love this story cuz it's really different, yet soo bionicle!
Well gosh! Thanks Chopperskull! The last one is coming today!
 I like it 
  May 19, 2011
I love how you fit in more of Callan and Davix's personality into the story! i just can't wait till mid June, so i can continue my story! 5 on 5, i love this story cuz it's really different, yet soo bionicle!
 I like it 
  May 16, 2011
Awesome!! This is a great story! ,Shadow
Caleb Lang
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Chaos Master
  May 15, 2011
cool! can't wait for the next one!
 I like it 
  May 15, 2011
Great story so far! Can't wait for the next!
 I like it 
  May 15, 2011
Very good for the reverse Lewa Nuva Kanohi, odd that it didn't seemed to me in January :D
Caleb Lang
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  May 14, 2011
finally!
Caleb Lang
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CAPS LOCK PIE
  May 14, 2011
And I thought I take forever with my series.
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
YUSS!!! It's finally back :D And you did not disappoint Callan! A nice long and intertesting chapter :D Loved all the parts when Callan interrupted :P And Nice idea for Gaturahk weakness :D Great stuff Callan ;)
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
Yay! It's back! Can't wait to see the ending! :)
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
COOL!!!!!
  May 14, 2011
Nice so awesome!!!! Are you fimiliar with my story?
 I made it 
  May 14, 2011
Quoting Ahpolki Ihu So Gaturahk 's weakness is sounwaves? Intresting, and it kinda makes sense. Sound does tend to make moulcles vibrate, so it must've disrupted Gaturahk's control over Steam.
You just explained how it's his weakness and I just said that because it was convenient! Thanks! XD And thank you all who've commented! The final part will be out in a few days! :D
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
So Gaturahk 's weakness is sounwaves? Intresting, and it kinda makes sense. Sound does tend to make moulcles vibrate, so it must've disrupted Gaturahk's control over Steam.
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
I've been anticipating this! Nice job!
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
Nice work! I almost forgot about this series, but it's back and as good as ever!
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
ABOUT TIME CALLAN! Suspenseful though.
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
Glad to see you continued this =)
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
really cool. (btw) im the first one to comment. :) (besides legobob>:( grrrr
 I like it 
  May 14, 2011
Nice!
 
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