Raxonax has been taken to Help The order against A wave of BOM attacks. Right now, Apis is about to make the 1st strike...
About this creation

Sah: This is our Army?

Apis: we have make the best of what we've got!

Ihy: i have Been sent by Darzoron to review your peformance.

Apis: MOVE OUT! you won't be dissapointed, Toa!

Morack: ...and Decrosh called you a nutter.
Raxonax: what?!

Morack: so, what have you been doing?

Raxonax: stuff i don't want to talk about...

Morack: This is not including Galia, right?
Raxonax: no. sadly, she will know what i'm talking about...

Cossy: GUYS! WERE UNDER ATTACK!!

Soka: there are Freaking Millions of them!

BoM Enforcer: Get the big guy with the gun!

Cossy: Soka!
Soka: AAAARRGGGH!

Cossy: he's out!

???: YOU!
Ihy: who-

Airies: HOW DARE YOU HURT MY FRIENDS!
Ihy: AAAAAAAAGGGHHH!

Jordan 2444: Come on!
Vilogax: That girls a loon!

Khonsu: What the hell is Soka doing!?
Cossy: he got blasted!
Khonsu: take this guy to the sick bay!
Hila: yes sir!

Morack: Eat poison, tin man!

Raxonax: Morack! NO!

Cossy: supersonic flight, time to work your magic!

Cossy: i'm gunna taake some of that weight of your sholders!
Airies: thanks, i could do with some help now!

(the battle rages on throught the night, until..)

Airies: leave while you can, Makuta scum!

Sah: leg it!

Cossy: Casualty report.
Raxonax: no deaths, two ingured!

Cossy: >ahem<, you did well...
Airies: (Blushes) thanks...

(Hala stares at them, wondering what there thinking...

...While Raxonax sits in thought)

Raxonax:(thinking) one battle, two down. what is this world coming to?

(meanwhile)
Darzoron: Report.

Ihy: i-i'm sorry, my lord, we lost. i lost another arm, and had it replaced....

Darzoron: You just need better soilders, maybe some Rahkshi... (laughs sinisterly)
TO BE CONTINUED....
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July 24, 2011 |
*whistles* jeez really awesome chapter cant wait for the next one!
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May 22, 2011 |
Quoting S.T.S .
Awesome chapter,do you mind if Raxonax is a REALLY bad butt warlord.
ok then :) thanks! |
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May 22, 2011 |
thanks for the comments :D |
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May 22, 2011 |
Quoting S.E.D. (The Editor)
Cool! More! Isn't it your B-day tomorrow?
no, its the 11th |
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May 15, 2011 |
Awesome chapter,do you mind if Raxonax is a REALLY bad butt warlord. |
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May 15, 2011 |
Awesome chapter,mind when I make Raxonax if he is a EPIC WARLORD OF EPICLY EPIC EPICNESS. |
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S.E.D. (The Editor) May 14, 2011 |
Cool! More! Isn't it your B-day tomorrow? |
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Eathuis 305 May 14, 2011 |
Nice vilogax is init!!! |
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May 14, 2011 |
AWESOME!!!!! |
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May 14, 2011 |
:D |
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May 14, 2011 |
YAY! ME! 'Morack: ...and Decrosh called you a nutter.
Raxonax: what?!' Heh heh. Definitley the best chapter yet! :D |
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May 14, 2011 |
Quoting Ben Cossy
0.0 Cossy hitting on Airies! Anyway, I'm so happy to see more of front lines :D I've been waitng so long and it's finally here :D Great Chapter bro! Can't wait for more :D
thanks :D if you want the Cossy and Aries thing to stop then say STOP NOUGH! |
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May 14, 2011 |
Quoting Eathuis 305
Nice vilogax is init!!!
INIT BLAD? |
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May 14, 2011 |
Quoting The PURE *___*
Pure shoulda have said that to Airies not cossy!, anyway great story cant wait for the next chapter!
meh, i hadn't made u yet, but me upload you now! |
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May 14, 2011 |
0.0 Cossy hitting on Airies! Anyway, I'm so happy to see more of front lines :D I've been waitng so long and it's finally here :D Great Chapter bro! Can't wait for more :D |
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Pure shoulda have said that to Airies not cossy!, anyway great story cant wait for the next chapter! |
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