I love the legs and the torso is good but, It's still not right, I think you've used too much HF on this. Like the head, I'm sorry but I don't like it, maybe change is too something like this
http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItemPic.asp?P=64327 but in Yellow, Other than that it looks great, sorry I was so negative, you did tell me you wanted feedback. Anyway, good luck with future verions :D