Well, spring break is over and I was rushing trying to make v2 of my self moc. I updateed a lot of things including the bio. Credit goes to Morgan Herman for the feet design and shoulder design.
About this creation
Species: Dual Element Toa/ Matoran
Alignment: On a scale of 1 to 10 with 1 being ultimate good, he is a 2.5
Occupation: Rahi Hunter; Defense General; Coliseum Warrior
Elements: Ice; Electricity
Mask Power: Kanohi Kryta (Mask of Thunder Riding)
Weapons: Thunder Blade; Ice Turbine Blaster; Ice Crossbow
Shard was a matoran on the ice planet of Ava- Nui. He was a natural with the sword. He always went to the local coliseum and fought until he couldn't lift his sword. Then he rested, and got back up again. Ava- Nui was at peace with other worlds. Suddenly, one day, a great evil descended upon the ice planet bringing evil shadow minions with them. The minions were almost invincible. The Great Beings however had witnessed Shard in the arena. His skill and perseverance made them decide that he was one of their last hopes. They sent six strangers to people that they thought could save the planet. However, these six stones had been mutated. Instead of providing one element, it gave them two. Shard formed a band of toa that vowed to defeat the evil.
Ladies and Gentlemen, Shard, the Thunder Spartan!
Detail of the Thunder Blade.
The ice crossbow.
The front of the ice crossbow.
Scope detail on the crossbow.
The ice crossbow attached.
Shard's new head. I had no ideas so I figured i would do something like this.
The new shoulder armor of awesomeness.
A close up of the new parts I added to make the legs less floppy.
Leg detail. I moved the ice crystals to his lower leg to give the ice shooting up his leg effect.
Thunder Rider mode. A few color replacements and a few parts moving around.
The Ice Turbine Blasters
Thunder Rider head mode.
Detail of some updates to the back.
I love the legs and the torso is good but, It's still not right, I think you've used too much HF on this. Like the head, I'm sorry but I don't like it, maybe change is too something like this http://www.bricklink.com/catalogItemPic.asp?P=64327 but in Yellow, Other than that it looks great, sorry I was so negative, you did tell me you wanted feedback. Anyway, good luck with future verions :D