About this creation
Its finally here everyone! The first episode of the SWTCW Story is finally aired! Now please give alot of credit to the people that helped me work on this. Also, sorry about the delays guys. I can't upload anything on my computer due to Sprint Internet causing me money. So I finally did it at a friend's house. So anways, here are the people that has helped:
President: Witressian Jedi Master Kydan Witress (Me)
Vice Presidents: Commander Gree & Cloud Blaze
Writers: Charty Fett (SGT) & Cj Cutrone9
Manager: Capt-Sting***
Alright, enough talk and reading every little word that I say, let Episode 1 Part 1....... BEGIN!!!!
"When in danger, don't do it alone. Don't be afraid to ask for help"
Clone Troopers in peril! As the war rages throughout the galaxy, many Clone Outposts are put to the Republic Systems for stationing more Clone Troopers!
On the raging battle going on on Dantooine, a Clone Outpost has been intercepted by the elusive Separatist. Unable to get contact from the Outpost or any of the Clone Troopers, a team of Clone Commanders and Jedi Generals are prepared to take back the Outpost and its valuable item, the Comm Disk..............
(On board the Venator Siliance......)
Admiral Wullen: I'm glad that all of you could come. We recieved word that one of our Clone Outpost has been under attack recently a few days ago. We lost contact with the Outpost for the last 72 hours ever since.
Rigel: Hmmm....... thats seems odd for the Outpost to not send any contact to us what so ever.
Admiral Wullen: Yes well...... the Outpost has been getting jammed from time to time recently but we didn't expect something like this. We've tried to track the jamming ratings, but no luck of where it is coming from.
Kydan: Well, you know who could be behind this. Whenever any of are own are no longer transmitting, theres always the Separatist that get involve.
Admiral Wullen: Hmmm...... point taken General.
Kydan: Now then, I will explain our mission on what we have to do. Admiral, if you could?
(Admiral Wullen pushes the button on the Holo Computer and shows a projected hologram)
Kydan: This is the map of what the Clone Outpost looks like on Dantooine. Thats our destination to it. Our primary adjective is to recapture the Outpost and collect the Comm Disk from inside. The Comm Disk needs to be back into our hands. If the Separatist gets inside there, our ground and fleet battle plans will be vulnerable.
Charty: So all we have to do is to go in, recapture the Outpost, get the disk and then return to reindevous point?
Kydan: To put it simply as you said..... yes. Its shouldn't be hard to do with us and the commanders on our side, as well as the Will of the Force.
Tunic: This will be a piece of cake! Like you said, with us and the commanders on our side, this should be an easy task!
Kydan: *Smirks* Don't get too confident Tunic. We haven't even started yet.... and who knows what will lie ahead.
Admiral Wullen: I have your Gunships ready to be deployed already sir. I have also taken the liberty of contacting the ARC Commanders as well. They are wating for all of you down in the Hanger Bay.
Kydan: Very good Admiral. Wait for us to contact you until we done with our adjective in the Outpost.
Admrial Wullen: Yes sir!
Kydan: Alright! Lets get to it guys! Hustle!
(A few hours later after being deployed and landing on Dantooine, the Jedi and the Commanders make their way to the Clone Outpost, unaware that the Separatist are already securing and protecting the Outpost......)
Droid Commander 16-7832: Sir, we have incripted the Comm Disk that you asked us to do.
Mandalorian Sergeant: And......?
Droid Commander 16-7832: Well, umm........ the disk could not be incripted due to its high security that is programmed into it.
(Mandalorian Sergeant yells out loud angry)
Mandalorian Sergeant: Fine! I'll have to take this back to CZ to incript it myself. In the meantime, stay here and protect the Outpost at all cost. The Republic must not discover us nor recapture the disk. Understand?
Droid Commander 16-7832: Roger roger!
(The Mandalorian Sergeant walks to the side of the Mando Speeder....)
(....Gets on it....)
(....And back to the CZ)
Commander Scare Crow: So wait! Lets go through this again: We secure the Outpost, detroy any Separatist forces that are here still, grab the Comm Disk and the Separatist Leader, and then get out?
Kydan: .... Yep!
Commnader Sparks: But sir, how are we gonna grab the disk and the leader if we have to protect the Outpost at the same time?
Tunic: Don't worry Sparks, you just leave that plan to us.
Commander Sparks: .... I knew you were gonna say that sir.
(Everyone smirks at him and starts laughing a little)
Kydan: ............ Hold up!
Kydan: *In a quiet voice* Just as I thought..... Battle Droids!
Charty: *In a quiet voice* This should be easy Master. There just Battle Droids.
Lypel: *In a quiet voice* Yeah, but if the Battle Droids are here, then the leader is here as well. So we have the leader already!
Tunic: *In a quiet voice* Easier said than done Lypel.....
Rigel: *In a quiet voice* So what do we do?
Kydan: *In a quiet voice* Well, like we always do Rigel....
Kydan: ....Destroy them!
Battle Droid: Are you almost done with that Generator yet?
Droid Engineer: Almost done! I just have to adjust the wires and we're ready to go.
Battle Droid: Ummm......... you better hurry up with that!
Droid Engineer: Why?
Droid Engineer: (He turns and finds the Jedi and Commanders) Uh-oh! Blast them!!!
(The Droids fire at the Jedi and Commanders....)
.... But were deflected right back at them)
Battle Droid: Hey look! Its the Jedi and Clones! Get 'em!
(The Droids start firing at them while Sting, Sparks, Flyer and J try to blast the Battle Droids away.)
(Then Sting throws a grenade at the remaining Battle Droids standing....)
(....It lands right in front of them....)
(....And then it blows up....)
(....Destroying the Battle Droids)
Battle Droid: ....Ummm....I....
Battle Droid: ....Surrender?
(Blaster shot comes from the troops and heads straight for the Battle Droid)
Commander J: The area is secured sirs!
Kydan: Excellent Commanders! Stay here and secure the area, as well as keeping an eye out for more reinforcements. We'll take out the remaining Battle Droids left here in the Outpost.
Commander J: Yes sir!
Kydan: Ok guys, lets finish this.
Battle Droid: Alpha 712? Do you copy? Omega 455? Respond!
Battle Droid: Sir, none of our Patrol Droids nor Guard Droids are responding.
Droid Commander 16-7832: Exo 119! Go find out what happened to the others!
Battle Droid Exo 119: Roger roger!
(Droid walks to the entrance of the damaged Outpost. As he just abouts enters the Outpost....)
(....A lightsaber out of nowhere stabs the Battle Droid's body)
Kydan: Lets take them out boys! Charge!
(Blaster bolts start flying at the Jedi as the Jedi deflect them back right at them)
(Kydan deflects one of the blaster bolts from the Battle Droid and Force Push's the Battle Droid down to the ground)
(Rigel uses the Force to hold up the Battle Droid in mid air as Charty jumps off the ground into the air....)
(....And slices the Battle Droid into pieces)
(Lypel, with his fast reflexes, quickly attacks the Battle Droid and slices off his right arm and then goes for the head)
(Tunic confronts the Super Battle Droid and Battle Droid alone as they about to shoot him....)
(....Tunic uses Force Speed to make them slow down....)
(....And with one swift slice, the Battle Droid and Super Battle Droid are destroyed)
Droid COmmander 16-7832: Ummm....I think I better get out of he--
(Droid Commander 16-7832: (Kydan appears right in front of him) Uh oh! Umm...do "you" take prisoners?
(Kydan, once more, uses Force Push on the Commander, destroying him as well)
Kydan: Nice work guys!
Charty: Like Tunic said, this was too easy!
Tunic: And I was right, right?
Lypel: You could say that.... for now.
Kydan: Alright, Charty! Try to hack through this computer and transmit the Comm Disk.
Charty: Got it!
(Charty starts hacking through the Computer Network and tries to hack through the data)
Charty: Well I have good news and bad news....
Lypel: Whats the good news?
Charty: The good news is that the base has taken too much damage, but the generator is 95% undamaged but it was hit about 5% so we don't need to worry about that.....
Rigel: And what about the bad news?
Charty: The bad news is that the Comm Disk's data is gone. Its because that in the past few hours ago, there was a Mandalorian Sergeant, leading this operation, has taken the disk back to the CZ, or what they call it Camp Zero, and he is sending reinforcements back here to give the Outpost a more secured place rather than destroying it. The maximum time limit before they get here is 12 hours tops, which means just about midnight.
Kydan: Hmmm..... this could complicate things...... the only thing we can do is fight back with everything we got. But we need to make sure that the Mandalorian Sergeant is taken alive and that we get the Comm Disk back.
Rigel: But theres so many of them....
Kydan: It doesn't matter Rigel, we have to capture the leader and retrieve the Comm Disk, so we WILL capture the leader and the retrieve the Comm Disk.
Tunic: So how are we gonna do this?
Kydan: Well first, we need to find if there are any vehicles and ammo that are left here in the base, but I doubt that there are any left here at al----
Commander Scare Crow: *Coughs a little* I think we have have what your looking for sirs. Theres at least a couple of BARC Speeders in the back, as well as a couple of AT-RTs as well. And there are a fresh batch of ammunition back there too.
Kydan: Great! Sting! Have you and the boys pick what you want to use. We gonna need every inch of fire power left here in the Outpost. Also, have the men hide the broken Battle Droids somewhere in the woods so they don't expect us here.
Commander Scare Crow: Yes sir!
Kydan: Rigel! Charty! Tunic! Lypel! Come with me! We need to plan out what we have to do....
Kydan: ....Cuase this is gonna be one tough mid-night fight....
To be Continued.......................
Well guys, what do you think? I know its very long and it didn't come out like any of you think, but this is the best I can do. So I hope you enjoyed it. I am thinking of doing this with all the other episodes so be sure you can stay wide awake for them.
PLEASE COMMENT AND RATE :)
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June 19, 2011 |
Quoting MarshallsLEGO UK
This is great i love the story, the Jedis and clones look really nice and the force speed was a good idea, nice work on this :)
Thank you :)
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June 19, 2011 |
This is great i love the story, the Jedis and clones look really nice and the force speed was a good idea, nice work on this :) |
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June 17, 2011 |
wow reminds me of the old days :) |
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June 16, 2011 |
Quoting Cody G
Nice work! A couple of tips though: for the laser blasts, you should follow Areesta's GIMP tutorial to make them look better. Also, making your pictures a size larger when uploading would let the viewer see all the details you put into the builds.
I can't really do anything with the pictures getting bigger so I'll have to wait until I get a new one or something and I wouldn't know where Areesta's GIMP would be, so could you tell me where I could find it? Also, thanks for the comment :D |
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June 16, 2011 |
Nice work! A couple of tips though: for the laser blasts, you should follow Areesta's GIMP tutorial to make them look better. Also, making your pictures a size larger when uploading would let the viewer see all the details you put into the builds. |
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June 13, 2011 |
Quoting Danika Mitchell
im not rly into star wars but this is pretty cool and was fun 2 read. good job :D
Thank you :) |
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June 13, 2011 |
im not rly into star wars but this is pretty cool and was fun 2 read. good job :D |
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Hey its me Samthelegoman from flickr. You commented on one of my photos! Can you check out my creations? |
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June 3, 2011 |
Quoting Bob the almighty
Finally! This is worth the wait. Ep. 1 and there's already battles? But are any of the clones going to die?
Yes there will. It'll probably be on Episode 2 that it will start having clones dieing. Also, the next Part of this Episode will air next week and I PROMISE, and I mean PROMISE everyone, that it will be aired. |
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June 3, 2011 |
Finally! This is worth the wait. Ep. 1 and there's already battles? But are any of the clones going to die? |
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Just wanted to point something out. "Charty: Te bad news is that the Comm Disk's data is gone." - it should be the word "The" to start off that sentence.
The figures could do some work (e.g. some minifigures have a flesh tone of skin whereas others have a yellow tone). The capes are in a bad condition; I usually keep my capes separate from the plastic pieces. Just a suggestion.
The holograms are good. I like the shapes of the buildings; you did a good job of making them a micro-scale for the hologram.
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June 2, 2011 |
Thats real good! it need bigger pics though. |
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June 2, 2011 |
Quoting LEGO Lord
Just wanted to point something out. "Charty: Te bad news is that the Comm Disk's data is gone." - it should be the word "The" to start off that sentence.
The figures could do some work (e.g. some minifigures have a flesh tone of skin whereas others have a yellow tone). The capes are in a bad condition; I usually keep my capes separate from the plastic pieces. Just a suggestion.
The holograms are good. I like the shapes of the buildings; you did a good job of making them a micro-scale for the hologram.
Yeah, most of those capes that are on there are back when I was about 6 or 7 and I kept them since. And yeah, some people wanted to use yellow heads rather than flesh so I gave people that option. And thanks for commenting :D |
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June 2, 2011 |
Quoting Aidan Moon
Looks cool!
Thanks :D |
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June 2, 2011 |
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Looks interesting! :D
Thanks :D |
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June 2, 2011 |
Looks interesting! :D |
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June 2, 2011 |
Quoting Legofreak2444 ~
Nice, could use bigger pics though. :/
Yeah I know, working on that. Until then though, it'll have to be like this :| |
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Nice, could use bigger pics though. :/ |
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Patrick Lowe June 1, 2011 |
Really good, I like the build and storyline! I'm waiting to read the next one! :-) Oh and are you going to enter the contest in the ultimate starwars group |
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June 1, 2011 |
Quoting Patrick Lowe
Really good, I like the build and storyline! I'm waiting to read the next one! :-) Oh and are you going to enter the contest in the ultimate starwars group
Thnaks and probably will :) |
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May 26, 2011 |
Quoting michael k.
i love it! can't wait till the next one. keep up the great work!!
Thank you :) |
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May 26, 2011 |
i love it! can't wait till the next one. keep up the great work!! |
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May 17, 2011 |
Alright guys, I made thhe edits onto the comic. So now this comic is oficially COMPLETE! Hope you enjoy reading it fully now ;) |
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cj cutrone9 May 13, 2011 |
Aresome. I just has one question. Am I tunic? He looks like the character in bio. |
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May 13, 2011 |
Cool! When do I come in? |
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May 13, 2011 |
Quoting cj cutrone9
Aresome. I just has one question. Am I tunic? He looks like the character in bio.
Yes. The one witht he two blue lightsabers is you :) |
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May 8, 2011 |
Good first episode! Sorry I didnt get to it earlier. |
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May 8, 2011 |
Nice! I'm wanting to start a CYOA comic, do you have any tips for me? And will I be in the next episode? |
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April 25, 2011 |
this is nice kydan. i can't wait until you show my episode. keep building great creations. long live the republic>charty fett |
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April 21, 2011 |
I like the descriptive writing and nice use of blurry motion for the force but I have 2 questions...
1.Can you make the pics bigger an
2.What episode am I coming in? |
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April 21, 2011 |
Excellent job! |
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April 21, 2011 |
Quoting Sergeant Gril
This is EPIC!!!!! Great story so far.;) When will I come into the story? Anyways I can't wait till the next part comes.
You will be in Episode 2 and a few other ones as well. Everyone will be in there (or those that signed up ebfore the closing). Also, thanks man! |
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April 21, 2011 |
This is EPIC!!!!! Great story so far.;) When will I come into the story? Anyways I can't wait till the next part comes. |
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