Eothain : Episode Two: A LEGO® creation by Night Hawk

Eothain : Episode Two

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Episode 2 of my fantasy series. Enjoy. Previously: Arathorn came home to find his Uncle dead and was attacked by a couple of Nazrak. A Ranger named Eric then came in and saved Arathorn. Following that they fled the village.

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Eric: Ok lets stop for a second.
Arathorn: Sure.

Arathorn: Where are we headed again?
Eric: To a village called Eth.
(Sudenly a harsh voice breaks the silence followed by the sound of soldiers marching)
Perstian Captain: March!

Eric: They're coming towards us. Get of the road.

Perstian Captain: Keep moving you maggots we dont stop until the plains of Telther

(The soldiers then marched off down the road)

Eric: That complicates things. We're going to have to take a different route to Eth. Follow me.

(Arathorn and Eric then reached Eth)
Eric: Hoods up Arathorn.
Arathorn: Looks like Persta is here already.
Pertian Sergeant: Put the bodies in a pile over there and get the living civilians in their houses!

Eric: I've got to visit someone so you stay here and dont get into trouble.
Arathorn: Shouldn't be hard.

(Later)
Perstian Sergeant: Look what we have here, take her to the alley boys.
Woman: No. Please.
Perstian Sergeant: Take her I'll be there in a second.
Woman: No.

(The Sergeant then walks into the alley and Arathorn follows)

Sergeant: Ok lets get this over...
( Arathorn then shoots the Sergeant with an arrow)
*Thwap*
Perstian Sergeant: *Hurk*.

Perstian Soldier: After him!
(Arathorn then runs into the streets and the soldiers chase him)

Perstian Soldier: Dont let him get away!

(Arathorn then fires arrow after arrow at the pursuing soldiers)
*Thwap*
Perstian Soldier: Ah!
*Thwap
Other Perstian Soldier: *Hurk*.

(Arathorn then runs into Eric)
Arathorn: We have to go now.
Eric: What did you do?
Another Perstian Soldier: After him!
Arathorn: Run!

(Arathorn and Eric then run)

(Later)
Arathorn: I think we're safe.
Eric: Good. While I was in town I got you these. They're a Rangers basic clothing.
Arathorn: Why'd you get me these?
Eric: They provide a bit more protection than civilian clothing.
Arathorn: Thanks.

(Later)
Arathorn: Where are going now?
Eric: To Eldthrain.
(Suddenly a voice calls out)
Perstian Soldier: I found them they're over here!

(Perstian Soldiers then surround Arathorn and Eric)
Perstian Sergeant (other): Thought you could escape us did you?
(A shadowy figure behind a bush then loads an arrow in his bow.)

To Be Continued...

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Bryan Graham

May 29, 2011

Nice, cool fight scenes. I like how you did the arrows. Can't wait to see the "mysterious character"!

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Yapdap "Cyber-Tiger" The Unggoy

April 18, 2011

Hey Night Hawk sorry I didn't comment on this sooner. So far I'm lovin' this. When I heard him say take her to the alley I thought 'no not that' and then I saw her with her pants off and thought 'you pervert!'. Anyway it's great!!!

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Night Hawk _

April 18, 2011

Quoting David May when will the the third one come out

This weekend.

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David May

April 18, 2011

when will the the third one come out

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Mr Viking

April 17, 2011

Other than that, it was awseome! Can't wait for next part!

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C.k .

April 17, 2011

Nice story!!! I love cliffhangers! :o from C.K

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Robin Longstride

April 17, 2011

Really cool!

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Billy Bob

April 17, 2011

Nice cliffhanger!

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Michael Kringe

April 17, 2011

Cool episode! AAAAHHH! Cliffhanger!

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Night Hawk _

April 17, 2011

Quoting Mr Viking Yeah, thats why I was thinking he went overboard on it a little bit.

It was suggesting something else it only looked like that because of the picture angle.

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Night Hawk _

April 17, 2011

Quoting Gondabuggan Hicburry woah no... why do you think there was a parental lock on this earlier? >:) great job cant wait to see the next one!

The scene was kind of sexually suggestive so I put a lock on it but I took it off because I realised that it didn't suggest sexuality that much.

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Lwc guy

April 16, 2011

Great episode! Better than episode one methinks.

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Stormbringer .

April 16, 2011

Man, your series is really something! This story of yours is quite inspiring. I need to do my own sometime. To the comment below, I don't think he went overboard. He did it just right.

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Mr Viking

April 16, 2011

Yeah, thats why I was thinking he went overboard on it a little bit.

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Gondabuggan Hicburry

April 16, 2011

woah no... why do you think there was a parental lock on this earlier? >:) great job cant wait to see the next one!

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Mr Viking

April 16, 2011

It looked like they were gonna cut off her legs.

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Night Hawk _

April 16, 2011

Quoting The Timinater ! nice creation. I am quite enjoying these- do you make the stoies up, or are they from a book?

They're all my original creation.

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The Timinater !

April 16, 2011

nice creation. I am quite enjoying these- do you make the stoies up, or are they from a book?

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A Monkey

April 16, 2011

Some pics of the overall creation would be nice.

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Mr Viking

April 16, 2011

Well I understand but what were they gonna do? (I think I know but I wanna hear it from you)

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Sam Knavel

April 16, 2011

This is getting good..... Can you check out my CYOA if you get the chance too?

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Eric 'Hawk' Mickle

April 16, 2011

Great episode. Some nice action and a build to back it up. >Eric

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Night Hawk _

April 16, 2011

Quoting Mr Viking Hey cool, but did you have to put that part in with the girl? sounds a little overboard to me.

I wasn't going to make him kill some Perstian for no reason I had to make Arathorn have a situation where he had to kill a Perstian to save someone. ( It was either that or make him save himself).