Makuta has now landed on Bara Magna, However he has suffered injuries after Tahu used a strange golden mask against Makuta! Makuta, wounded from the masks strike, sent out his Rahkshi army to fight for him, as we speak our friends are on the run from the hordes of Rahkshi that are chasing them!...
(The Toa are on the run for Makutaís Rahkshi, as the Rahkshi draw ever closer, Glatorian and Agori are attacked...and killed)
Takanuva: Come on Frigus, grab on!
Frigus: I...Iím trying
Puka (Green Matoran on Takanuvaís shoulder): Itís so much fun up here, come on you can do it!
Kiina: Eat this Rahkshi!
(As Kiina is about to fire at the Rahkshi Lewa interrupts)
Lewa: Kiina thereís no time, KEEP MOVING!
(Kiina starts running again)
Kiina: Fine, LETS MOVE IT BOYS!
Cossy: Ackar, Iíll get all the Agori on my back, weíll fly to safety!
Ackar: Not a good idea, first of all, *pant* you donít know where weíre going and not to mention, if Makuta spots you, youíre dead!
Cossy: Alright you win!
Lewa: Cut the chit chat and keep moving!
(Meanwhile Makuta is watching from afar!)
Makuta: HA HA HA! Look at those Toa run! They stand no chance against my armies!
Makuta: They will pay for doing this to me! Whatever that mask was it must have been powerful! I must have it!
(Makuta stops looking at his injuries and looks off into the distance)
(Vezon emerges out of nowhere, returning from Aqua Magna [Vezon can do this due to the new mask power Makuta gave him])
Vezon: Greetings, my Master!
Makuta: Vezon how are things on Aqua Magna?
Vezon: Everything is going according to plan Makuta! The leftover Toa are dying and the Matoran slaves are doing as we want!
Makuta: Look at those Toa Vezon; they are NOTHING against my armies!
Vezon: WHAT! You launched your army! That wasnít part of the plan!
Makuta: The plan needed to be changed Vezon! I have perfected it Vezon! Now the Toa will die before Mata Nuiís eyes, Then I shall destroy Mata Nui and you can kill...
(Vezon interrupts Makuta...)
Vezon: ...No Makuta, You cannot change the plan! Donít you see! If you donít call off the army our whole plan will crumble!
Makuta: Are you questioning me Vezon!
Vezon: No, Iím correcting you!
Ackar: GO GO GO! Theyíre getting closer!
Cossy: Where did all this grass come from?
Ackar: Weíre at the very edge of Tesara Iím hoping the change of landscape will confusion the Rahkshi!
Raanu: *sigh* This is too much, I canít go any further!
Mossdeep: Come on you can do it Raanu, just a little bit more
Ackar: Come on around the corner!
Ackar: Come on Strakk MOVE!
Strakk: Hold your Vorox! Iím getting there!
Mata Nui: Just take a left from here and keep moving Gresh
Gresh: On it!
Cossy: Guys! Theyíre getting closer! HURRY!
Ackar: Hurry up Strakk, follow Gresh!
Strakk: Give me a break, Iím getting there!
Ackar: THEYíRE HERE!
Cossy: Iíll hold them off, you two get out of here!
(Meanwhile back with Vezon and Teridax)
Vezon: Even you know that Golden mask was powerful! And you want it, donít you?
Makuta: Yes, and I will get it, once I kill that Toa and all the others!
Vezon: As true as that may be, perhaps only that Toa knows how to use it! If you kill him and the others, weíll never find out how to use it
(Makuta stops and pauses to think)
Vezon: You must order the Rahkshi to stop Makuta! If we kill them, it WILL jeopardise our entire plan!
(Makuta continues to think...)
Makuta: ... Fine...
Vezon: Youíve made the right decision, my Master!
(Meanwhile Cossy, Ackar and Mata Nui, have lured the hordes of Rahkshi into the crack in the canyon, this way itíll be easier for them to take them all down... Or will it?)
Cossy: Here they come!
Tahu: Well looks like weíre going nowhere!
Ackar: Weíll get to safety soon, letís just delay the Rahkshi!
(Ackar leaps forward and slams the Rahkshi down with his sword, While Cossy does the same)
(Ackar aims his thornax launcher at another Rahkshi)
Ackar: Suck thornax!
Cossy: Mata Nui, go with Ackar and get everyone else to safety! Iíll keep the Rahkshi at bay!
(Mata Nui nods in agreement)
Mata Nui: As much as I donít want to do this, we must leave, Cossy can handle himself!
Tahu: Iíll stay; this mask might be able to help us!
Ackar: We donít know what that mask can do Tahu, we need to go now! Cossy can handle himself!
Tahu: *sigh* Alright!
Mata Nui: Alright everyone, GO!
Ackar: What the?
(All the Rahkshi have now retreated and Cossy, Ackar and Mata Nui are discussing the situation)
Cossy: This isnít like Makuta, Why would he make an entire army that he sent to kill us retreat!
Mata Nui: I suspect he has something better in store for us!
Ackar: Mata Nui is right, it's best we get to safety before Makutaís...ísurpriseí arrives
(Mata Nui and Cossy nod in agreement)
Ackar: Follow me, were very close to our hiding spot!
(Everyone sets off, Meanwhile Makuta and Vezon are watching as his army returns)
Makuta: You better have been right about that Vezon
Vezon: I promise you Makuta, That decision will win you this fight, and you will finally rule the universe in peace!
(The last few Rahkshi re-enter Makutaís body while the two of them speak)
Makuta: Alright Vezon, We shall proceed with the next part of our plan
Vezon: Ah yes I remember...
Ackar: Well everybody, weíve arrived! Inside this cave is our hideout until we take down Makuta!
Mata Nui: This cave seems like the perfect place for an ambush Ackar, If Makuta finds us...
(Ackar interrupts him...)
Ackar: ...He wonít find us, donít worry Mata Nui, everything is going to be ok!
Cossy: Wait Ackar, this isnít everyone, weíre missing some people...
Cossy: Takanuva? What happened to everyone?
Takanuva: Some of the other Toa tried to delay the Rahkshi...and failed...
Takanuva: And some of the Matoran...I tried to help them but...the Rahkshi...They were too fast!
Cossy: I understand Takanuva
Takanuva: Iím sorry...
Cossy: Donít be Takanuva! ...
Cossy: ...They will all be remembered...
Ackar: Alright everyone, Mata Nui, Cossy and Myself will all be going inside the cave to great, an old friend of mine...Oh Gelu, you should probably come too
Gelu: Um ok...
Ackar: Itís best you all stay here; I donít want to get you all hurt
Cossy: Alright, letís do this thing!
Gelu: Thereís something odd about this place...
Ackar: Iím surprised you donít remember this place Gelu
Gelu: Why exactly did you want me to come here?
Ackar: Youíll soon see why
Ackar: Malum, show yourself!
Gelu: WHAT! I remember now, why the heck are you trusting him! Youíre as crazy as he is!
Ackar: Malum trusts me and heíll help us!
Gelu: He lives with Vorox! How do you even think heís sane! Besides Iím sure thereís probably Vorox all over this place just waiting for Malumís signal to attack!
Ackar: This will work Gelu, MALUM! SHOW YOURSELF!
Cossy: Are you sure he is even still alive? Donít you remember Makutaís blast, It killed everything!
Ackar: True, Fine letís go inside guys
???: Ackar, Itís been awhile!
And thatís another chapter :D
If you have any questions, please donít hesitate to ask :D
Iíll be posting, Chapter 5, Volometix, my latest Star Wars diorama and a few other things in the coming days/week :D
Anyway I hope you enjoyed the latest chapter of A Story Reborn
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o.0 HOLY CRUTIBLE! YOUR RIGHT OWL! Thanks a billion everyone for getting it up on the Explore page :D I couldn't have done it without you :D And Pure, Ok can't wait to see them then :D Cyberfrank :D Sounds sweet, can't wait :D
Thanks again everyone ;) Red lego, Cheesy won't be aparing until some of the last chapters :/ Although I will be doing a preveiw of what happend to him in Chapter :D So in a way your right Chessy :D Nick, You'll be in the next chapter but... I can't ruin the cliffhanger :P I promise you though, This Firday or early Saturday, Chapter 6 will be up :D and Cyberfrank :O So glad to hear you bought meltdown :D Are you gonna have him trash your city like I'll be doing soon?
I like it
March 28, 2011
I think that cheesy will appear soon. Either that or in chapter 7, when most other self-MOCs appear.
so much material! i want you to be the first to know... i bought 'meltdown' today! why? to go with my 2 hazmat figs, why? to entirely redo my recycling facility and municipal garage! i doubt i ll use the rest of the squeleton of the robot, but, i d need a loader like aliens for my stories, so, you never know!
thanks a lot for your comments ben!
Thanks everyone ;) Glad you like it Cody and A minute ago... :D Wertman, I can post the ones I used in this comic, but sadly not the others, They had to... sacrifice there lives :'( Still I'll gladly post these guys ASAP :D And Mr. Pie, You have it wrong, Mata Nui was trapped inside the mask of life after Makuta stole his giant body (so you were right their) He then crash landed on Bara Magna and the the 4th bionicle movie took place, my story is based after the 4th movie, but is an alternate ending to the offical bionicle story :D
I like it
Commander Fed's Pie
March 27, 2011
Isn't Mata Nui in the giant robot? And Makuta in the Mata Nui Robot?
Thanks so much everyone ;) Shadowflame, I'll be on FB soon, and I can't wait for the next cliffhanger in your comic, you do rock at them :D Glad to hear you like it, Oh great storyteller Kenaz :D Good to hear you'll be doing some more stuff soon :D Pho and Jareroden, You'll both come in during Chapter 7 :D Master N, I'm still not 100 percent curtain when you'll be coming in, but it's be soon :) Also glad to see you liked this chapter! Nick, You'll be in the next chapter, Chapter 6 :D Sergeant Gril so happy to hear you've made some bionicles, I'll have a look now :D Thanks Nitrex, and thanks everyone else ;)
WOW!!!!! Great job!!! I love this story so far. I am really happy!!! Because I found some bionicle pieces and I made a few and posted them. So could you check them out? Anyways I think that you are a great writer and this story is spectacular.
nice I love it! that is pretty cool! I forget, when is Nitro going to come in? can't wait for the next chapter! my story is coming together very slowly. I have the next five chapters plotted out but still have to take the pictures. I am addicted to your story it is the best!!!
In what chapter does my self-moc come in at?
I think this is a very good and well consrtucted and set-up series. I always appreciate it when someone can make a story as good as their bionicles. For me a bionicle moc is only as good as its back story. Well done.
My writing skills feel mediocre compared to thins... Sorry that I haven't posted anything for like, a month. I'm really busy. But rest assured, when I post something it will be a mega-episode of the Rift Chronicles! You are doing a great thing here!
Thanks guys ;) Legobob, I'll only be posting them tomorrow and next weekend :/ I never have time on weekdays, I hate school and homework :/ Oh and before you ask, I'm not on spring break, I have mine in like...4-5 weeks :/ that's cause of the whole different Australian schooling thingy :/ S.E.D, Every Self MOC I've made is gonna be in it :D You and many others will probably show up during Chapter 7 :D If not then, then In the sequel to A Story Reborn :D And thanks a million Callan, When will the next chapter of your comic be coming out? Oh and Mr. Kringe