About this creation

These monsters, the Csek,
hey hunt night and day
with glowing red eyes
and bodies of grey.

Don’t judge them for size;
their speed tops the ranks.
Your mechs are useless,
and so are your tanks.

They don’t waste time,
they move like a flood.
And behind all they leave
is a river of blood.

The Csek are fierce,
their tactics are swift.
They’ll swarm your friend,
then to you eyes shift.

With countless strikes
of razor sharp blades,
few have survived
to tell of their raids.

You’ll think your worst fears
have all become real.
Your fortress will crumble
as they tear through steel.

They’ll haunt your dreams.
They’ll wonder your mind.
If you hide, they’ll seek;
and trust me, they’ll find.

To take one down
would be a great feat,
But more will come
to stop your heart beat.

From mountain to valley
they’ve slaughtered the rest.
Rise up Dawn Forge!
This is your test…
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May 7, 2013 |
You___are____a_____poet___
Great job ! I cant see the pics tho they did not load. |
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May 7, 2013 |
You are a poet
Great job ! I cant see the pics tho they did not load. |
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July 16, 2011 |
THAT IS COOL. |
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July 4, 2011 |
This is fantastic!!!! |
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July 1, 2011 |
awesome |
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June 22, 2011 |
Wow, that's amazing!!!!! |
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Tyler Dillon June 17, 2011 |
This is realy cool, and those Csek are awesome! |
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June 5, 2011 |
Great action and explosions! |
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April 20, 2011 |
I really like this setup. You can really feel the action and the intensity. |
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March 26, 2011 |
I'm liking your take on smaller csek. It makes them look weaker, but it also adds to the feel of a swarm of them. The pose of the one attacking through the glass is pretty cool, too. And I like the hidden (trap?) door on top of the base. Just realized it was there. Anyways, great job! Keep it up! |
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March 25, 2011 |
I love the poem! Did you write that yourself? The concept is great(if a bit cliche)--the unstoppable technologically-advanced robots attack, not even the military can stop them, and nowhere is safe! At least, that's the impression I got. Love the detail! |
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March 25, 2011 |
This makes me think of zombies on CoD. Anyway, it's still great! |
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March 24, 2011 |
In regards to instructions...
My Csek here are pretty simple, I think the pictures available give you enough views to put them together. If you still can't figure them out you're more then welcome to create you own and show them off :)
thanks for the comments! |
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March 24, 2011 |
Yeah can you please post instructions for the csek? |
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March 23, 2011 |
Wow. |
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March 21, 2011 |
Could you possibly post instructions for the Csek? thanks, I just can't figure it out. |
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March 20, 2011 |
Die wierd monsters die!!! |
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March 20, 2011 |
Rhymes are kinda wierd..but cool. |
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March 19, 2011 |
reminds me of jurrasic park but 90x worse |
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March 18, 2011 |
Quoting Spaztastic the Diabolical
What is that scientist doing outside at a time like this?
His doctor always said those smoking breaks would be the death of him... |
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March 18, 2011 |
...Disturbing... |
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March 18, 2011 |
Truly epic! |
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Spaztastic the Diabolical March 17, 2011 |
What is that scientist doing outside at a time like this? |
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March 17, 2011 |
As always, your aliens are the best of all!!! i'm specchless!!! Congratulation!!! |
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March 16, 2011 |
this is sweet!! it somewhat seems you're the spirit of dawnforge :) |
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March 16, 2011 |
This is incredible! The poetry gives it a great feel! |
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March 14, 2011 |
Have you got the skills,
to survive all the way?
We'll soon find out,
when dusk ends the day... |
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March 14, 2011 |
tis a chilling tale, but not with out hope, for a hero shall rise againist the foes.... |
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March 14, 2011 |
Wow! The carnage is about to happen. |
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March 14, 2011 |
Those creatures are really neat! |
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March 14, 2011 |
Fun, action packed and full of cool effects? Csek. Sweet stuff.~H |
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March 14, 2011 |
This is a perfect diorama. That is all I can say... wow. |
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March 13, 2011 |
Again you have proven your skill as a MOC builder. Your poetry on the other hand... ;-) |
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March 13, 2011 |
Sweet! Those look awesome! Could you make instructions? |
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March 13, 2011 |
They look a bit like Dark Augusto robots. Nice work! The poem was really good, too. :) |
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March 13, 2011 |
Quoting JC REX
Wow! Could I use a Csek in one of my MOCs
absolutely! build away! they're pretty simple as you can tell... for some larger, more complicated ones you might want to check this out:
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/86639 |
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March 13, 2011 |
Wow! Could I use a Csek in one of my MOCs |
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March 13, 2011 |
Beautiful...simply beautiful... |
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March 13, 2011 |
Sorry, I've just discovered this "Dawn Forge" stuff until now. Man I've been missing out, seriously I have never heard of this theme before. |
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March 13, 2011 |
Dr. Suess meets Robert Heinline. The posability of your agressors is really something. The one stabbing through the window is a special delight. Attack! |
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March 13, 2011 |
0_0 Oh - my - gosh. Totally cool! Sweet robots, great action, and perfectly enhancing poetry. All in all a killer build. |
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March 13, 2011 |
Quick, get an EMP bomb...NAO! |
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March 13, 2011 |
pretty freaking awesome! |
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March 13, 2011 |
this is awesome,nice poem |
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March 13, 2011 |
There is nothing to say, it's awesome |
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March 13, 2011 |
This is a combination of so many cool things, like landscape, setup, the explosion (one of the best I've ever seen) and other things. The Csek remind me of raptors: fast, strong and deadly. Great work! |
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| SAIDO DIEONO March 12, 2011 |
EPIC |
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Dominick S March 12, 2011 |
Great! First visitor, first comment. It sort of, not really, looks like mine. But better. Love the splendid details. Keep on coming, and yes, rise up Dawn Forge! |
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March 12, 2011 |
Its pretty amazing how uniquely expressive each of the robots have even though they are all the same build. The explosion, rocket, and sword going through the wall are spectacular. And the word wielding isn't bad either, great moc! |
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March 12, 2011 |
I don't think any Dawn Forge scene will ever match Zero Hour or Nineteen Seconds (should the next one be Thirty-Eight Minutes?), but this is definitely one of the best Dawn Forge scenes I've seen that didn't have Brain Kescenovitz himself directly involved in constructing it. I like the launching effect on the rocket launcher... simple, yet quite effective. |
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March 12, 2011 |
Stunning! The base looks so amazing! |
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March 12, 2011 |
Quoting Dominick S
It sort of, not really, looks like mine. But better. Love the splendid details. Keep on coming, and yes, rise up Dawn Forge!
yes it's pretty similar, and except for the addition of the Csek, i still like yours more!
Quoting Stormbringer .
This is a fantastic alien-machine-invasion-type build. I've heard of these "Csek" before, but didn't Mondaynoodle come up with them?
Yes he did, along with Dawn Forge... |
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March 12, 2011 |
This is a fantastic alien-machine-invasion-type build. I've heard of these "Csek" before, but didn't Mondaynoodle come up with them?
Nah.. doesn't matter. The carnage that is ensuing reminds of dead space. |
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March 12, 2011 |
This is just awesome, i like the monsters' designs. |
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March 12, 2011 |
Very nice work here |
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March 12, 2011 |
Nice display and landscaping. |
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March 12, 2011 |
I love the Csek ever since the first time I saw them. Hope you continue making more. |
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March 12, 2011 |
There are so many little details that make this great, something I have yet to do well. But you have mastered it.. Wonderful work! |
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March 12, 2011 |
The fear they strike,
Leaves no hope alive,
Oh what a plight,
Fight only for pride.
Your build is divine,
Rhyme and reason,
A ballet frozen in time,
A MOC for all seasons. |
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March 12, 2011 |
Very nice, I love how one of teh robots slashes through the glass from the bunker, great work |
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March 12, 2011 |
Congrats on a great Moc. Your ability to put rhyme and pictures together is amazing. The detail in this Moc is impressive, and I especially like the base (I'm guessing that it's a military one). Keep it up. |
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March 12, 2011 |
It's rare you find a creation in Lego that had such an epic feel about it. Ignore the yellow bar next to my comment, I don't like it.... I love it! |
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