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Moc-Athalon WIP Charlie
Construction has started on the City.
About this creation

The main reason for these WIPs is for feedback, but I haven't gotten any suggestions on what to do, or change.


I've built a few buildings and a port. the buildings are inspired by the ones in New Alexandria.



The glassing route hasn't changed that much.



A recently built highway cut into the land.



A small house and forest at the foot of the mountain.



"Civilian Transport away!" Random guy in Halo Reach.

Rate and comment if the mood strikes you.



Comments

 I made it 
  March 17, 2011
Quoting Aero ! Mate, I know it's a WIP. You've asked us for feedback. We've given you feedback. No one else had suggested studless. It was a suggestion, OK? How were we supposed to know you don't like studless stuff? I understand your point with the natural look, but massive cylindrical lumps aren't natural.
I asked for feedback, not a rediculous request. The way you said it was like you had expected it, with no different options other than studless. Feedback is full of the word maybe, not should.
  March 17, 2011
Mate, I know it's a WIP. You've asked us for feedback. We've given you feedback. No one else had suggested studless. It was a suggestion, OK? How were we supposed to know you don't like studless stuff? I understand your point with the natural look, but massive cylindrical lumps aren't natural.
Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
 I like it 
Izak Felder
  March 12, 2011
Nice.I love the the mountain 5
Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  March 11, 2011
sweet!
Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
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Sam Knavel
  March 11, 2011
nice little city, if you get time to, may you please check out my city I am making?
Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
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General Asher S.
  March 11, 2011
Coolios
Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
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General Asher S.
  March 11, 2011
Coolios
Eric 'Hawk' Mickle
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Commander Fed's Pie
  March 11, 2011
Awesome.
 I like it 
  March 11, 2011
Great city! Adding more one or two brick high buildings makes your skyscrapers stand out, creating more of a realistically city effect. If you were going to do that then disregard this.
 I made it 
  March 11, 2011
Quoting MR. LEGO nice, yeah maybe studdless that would look nice! check this out if you have time http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/257304
The city is studless, because it is neat and human made. The green-lands are not because they were made by nature, and nature is not tidy. You studless-freaks really bug me.
 I made it 
  March 11, 2011
Quoting Aero One (formally Aerofighter 52) It's pretty cool, though it looks a bit untidy. Maybe less black, as that creates too much contrast to my eye, and try to make as much of the dio as possible studless, I reckon. That'll make it look a lot better (in my opinion at least.) Anyway, nice job.
It's a WIP, that means not done. There is way more green/grey/white than black. The city IS studless, but the green lands aren't for a reason, the ground is NOT smooth. I understand this is feedback, but please give useful feedback. Something like "That would look better it it were here," "This could be a bit taller," "You could add more of this for effect," not stuff like "Make it studless so you please me," or "That color hurts my eyes, change it."
 I like it 
  March 11, 2011
nice, yeah maybe studdless that would look nice! check this out if you have time http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/257304
 I like it 
  March 11, 2011
It's pretty cool, though it looks a bit untidy. Maybe less black, as that creates too much contrast to my eye, and try to make as much of the dio as possible studless, I reckon. That'll make it look a lot better (in my opinion at least.) Anyway, nice job.
 I like it 
  March 11, 2011
Nice.
 I like it 
  March 11, 2011
Nice dio, I'd love to see it finished!
 
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