Quoting Kriss Olympis
Sweet idea!!! You could easily find the text online, just Google it! The room was indeed black, but it was heavily lighted in red, thats kinda missing here. And a bit more action would be nice, like maybe having that room and the room before it, and hes crossing from one to the other. Also, the grandfather clock stood in the far corner of the black room. I do love that story though, nice job with it. =)
I knew I was missing something! hah, thanks. I may do a second version after the MOCathalon. maybe. I'll keep you posted. :)