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The Rift Chronicles Episode 4: Captured!
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Hey, sorry for the delay and shortness. I had a boatload of homework, so I'm kinda lucky to have gotten this much done. I promise that there will be a double episode soon! I promise! Oh, and I'll post the rest of the Sins this coming week.
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(present day)
B: Wait, dangerous? Real heroes wouldn't be afraid of danger!
K: Then you know nothing about heroes, Let me tell the story, 'k?

Ak: We need to get out of here!
K: What?
Dy: There's a tribe of natives here... we saw them carry off a rahi... A big one. 3 matoran-sized beings took down a beast the size of a Kane-ra bull, and we didn't see a scratch on them!
U: Oh no... Were these islanders red?
Ak: Oh yeah. Redder than Callan when he's talking to Madura.
C: Hey!

U: Oh no... no no no. Guys, I think that Glacies and Skorcol were captured by the native Haka Laka tribe. The name IS a bit silly, but they are all hardened killers. They may be boiling our friends as I speak.
Al: Then what do /we/ do?
Da: I think we find these Haka Laka guys, and get our teammates back. We can't fight the sins without them.
K: Well then, how do we find them?
U: THat's easy,

U: Follow the blood.
Dy: Let's get to it then. We don't have much time.

Ak: The blood ends around here... good thing. We've been following that grisly trail for miles.
U: Yep.
Al: /Wait, /I/ hear something.
Da: What is it?
Al: Computing... Here's a sound byte. /hakalakalaka../
U: Looks like we found 'em. Hope we're not too late.

K: Alright, here we are, I can hear the chanting clearly now.
Da: Let's get them!
C: Yeah!
???: Not so fast.

K: YOU! It's you!!
Flare: Hello, Kenaz.






Remember flare? If you don't, look back to my Xmas special.



Comments

 I made it 
  February 19, 2011
Quoting Mandragora Helix Nice! Oh,and may I inquire: when are you going to post Flare?
I will post him along with the entire Haka Laka tribe. Let's see, that'll be soon.
 I like it 
  February 7, 2011
Nice! Oh,and may I inquire: when are you going to post Flare?
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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Ahollow Darkfiend
  February 6, 2011
"Redder then Callan" Lol XD
 I like it 
  February 6, 2011
XD LOVE that joke! And the comic is AWESOME! Can't wait to see the next one! :D
 I made it 
  February 6, 2011
Quoting awesome kid i feel like u copied the shaka lakas from mh3 but loven the story so far keep it up! d'_'b
Um... Shaka Lakas? No idea what you're talking about. I got the name while running around my house yelling "HAKALAKALAKALAKA!"
 I like it 
  February 6, 2011
'Oh yeah. Redder than Callan when he's talking to Madura' XD, another brilliant comic :D and a great cliffhanger, can't wait for more! ;)
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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L. Nguyen
  February 5, 2011
pretty cool so far
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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Toa Oblivious ,Master of Earth
  February 5, 2011
Funny joke!
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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Peter Crasher the Powerlord
  February 5, 2011
Awesome episode! I like that part with Callan and Madura. That was funny! XD!
Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night
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Chaos Master
  February 5, 2011
great episode! and as many said the callan joke was funny, no offence to callan.
 I like it 
  February 5, 2011
Finally! a fight scene! I just gor Fire Lord, so I'm making a new villain. I have a whole wave of MOCs and MOComics.
 I like it 
  February 5, 2011
i feel like u copied the shaka lakas from mh3 but loven the story so far keep it up! d'_'b
 I like it 
  February 5, 2011
Great! I like the madura joke.
 I like it 
  February 5, 2011
Great! I like the madura joke.
 
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