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Legends of the Airio Chapter 2:Chilling Victory
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When I began the photoshoot for this chapter,I realized I was very limited in what photos I could take,as the story include two Dark Hunter that I don't have models of.I decided to just incorperate certain scenes,like a novel with a few picture,in future chapter I will most likely only be using characters that I have moc/set of so they will include detailed scenes,unlike this one.
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Toa Renedox held his ground as the Dark Hunters approached. The smoke had dispersed and debris along with smoldering ashes were scattered across the area. As they approached Renedox recognized the duo. The Larger one was Gladiator, an immensely powerful being with whom Renedox had crossed blades with during a vicious Dark Hunter raid on the Airioís home island. Renedox at first didnít recognize the other being, but he loosely matched a description Toa Zatano had given him of a Dark Hunter called Gatherer, whom he had crossed paths with during their recent trip to Xia. He then saw a gash in the beings armor, where Zatanoís blade had gashed him. The Dark Hunters were only about a dozen meters away. Renedox was never one to be easily intimidated, though he wasnít a fool either, he knew couldnít defeat both these Dark Hunter on his own."I don't have a chance of taking them both down, at least not in this condition." Muttered Renedox to himself. "But I donít have to take them down; I just have to hold them off until the other's get here".At that moment Renedox did something drastically out of his usual strategic, analytical character, he charged them head on.


Toa Laneus ran as far as he could, for what seemed like hour, though it had only been a few minutes. But the pain had gotten to him and he now struggle to walk shift his weight on his staff. For once he was actually glad the Great Spirit gave him a staff as his Toa tool. He was now back in the camps main area and the Toa Airio's operations base was in sight. Upon sight of it he forced his way up the road, using every bit of willpower he had. As he approached he heard the sounds of weapons clashing. He stumbled through the entry of the base. Unlike the other dwellings the base wasnít a makeshift structure of scrap parts, when the Great Spirit have new life to Spherus Magna the terrain shift caused many odd natural formations, this was one of them. Apparently for huge trees, each about a third the size of the one that used to stand in Teresa had grown together creating a large, four walled structure with a foliage roof. One of the Toa discovered it on patrol through a small hole (one a Toa could still easily fit through) in the between two of the trees. There was natural dwelling in the structure as well as a spring in the far corner .As Laneus approached the center of the base he realized the sounds he heard were that of a sparing mach between the teams two female Toa, Laya a light hearted Toa of Stone and Cristou your typical water Toa, except for her stubbornness.
Far off in his usual corner Toa Grift, the Toa Airio of Ice was working on some contraption, which Laneus could only speculate its uses.Laya and Cristou had stopped sparing and walking over to greet Laneus. As he walked towards the others he couldn't hold any longer, he collapsed. They both rushed to his aid, at which point he told them about the Dark Hunter attack and that Renedox had sent him for help."Zatano's not here right now so that puts me in charge."Ē Stated Cristou in a loud and sure voice.Ē"Laya I need you to go and provide immediate assistance to Renedox. Iíll have stay here and help the rookie, his wounds are critical and he already lost consciousness."




By the time she finished her sentence Laya had activated her Kakama and was gone."What shall I do?"Asked Grift who had came over during the commotion."I need you use your communicator to contact Zatano."After that I need you to help me with the kid, he has been through too much, for us to let him die now."Ē



Back at the battle:"What a fool, do you still think you can handle two of us on your own, Toa."Growled Gladiator, who know held the Toa in a death grip. In a low tone Renedox simply replied,"I never did; besides there is only one of you now." Gladiator turned around; during the dialogue Renedox had been choking Gatherer with an earth hand. The Dark Hunter wasnít dead, but he was out cold. Upon seeing the look of astonishment on Gladiatorís face, Renedox attempted to draw his sword but, Gladiator Tightened his grip."Your won't be pulling that trick on me Toa." Hissed Gladiator. Renedox struggled as the Dark Hunter tightened his grip. As the Toa began to lose consciousness, He heard Gladiator let out a horrible cry of pain. Renedox took the opportunity to draw his blade and thrust it into the Dark Hunters chest. The Dark Hunter lost his grip and dropped Renedox to the ground. Renedox made it to his feet just as the Dark Hunter began to fall. He made a quick leap to his left,dodge the body. Renedox looked to see what had caused Gladiators collapse, and sure enough he seen Toa Laya cleaning her energy siphon blade."Got here just in time, didnít you?" Muttered Renedox in a rhetorical fashion."Better late than never." Replied Laya. "How is the kid?"ĒAsked Renedox. "Cristou and Grift are working on him, but last I heard he was critical.""Letís take the Dark Hunters in and go check on him."Ē Said Renedox,who was obviously very worried about his friend. Laya nodded and the two Toa headed towards the Dark Hunters, then something strange happened the beings began to fade, not the sense a color or memory does, they seemed to be litterly vanishing from existence.


"I sure hope Zatano is headed his way, because we have some explaining to do."Said Renedox as chills went down his spine.




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  January 25, 2011
agree with nitrex, love your writing style but a little too long , but its alright . Its a little confusing , but very creative ! I am going to reread them when i have more free time LOL
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  January 25, 2011
Quoting Andrew Cleary i think it's great, although i do prefer the chapters the size of No1, your writing style works great in little lumps but not so much in big long chapters like this.K? i would reccomend Bioniclestory.com for inspiration.
I agree,I much perfer to write smaller chapters,I only increased size because on BZP I was getting complaints of the chapters being too small,to keep both audiences happy,I'll try to split chapter on here in to two different parts,possibly three parts for mega chapters like 3.
 I like it 
  January 25, 2011
i think it's great, although i do prefer the chapters the size of No1, your writing style works great in little lumps but not so much in big long chapters like this.K? i would reccomend Bioniclestory.com for inspiration.
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  January 25, 2011
Quoting Alpha AI Hmmmm.....possibly some immensely powerful being is toying with their minds?
I won't say that is out of the queston,but keep in mind that Laneus recieved some very real wounds from the blast,so at the very least the exsplosion was real.
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  January 25, 2011
Hmmmm.....possibly some immensely powerful being is toying with their minds?
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  January 24, 2011
Great I'll be looking:)
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  January 24, 2011
Quoting AMT Guardian of Earth cool story. i have one too called Missions of Glorious Doom.
Thanks,I'll be sure to check your out tonight.
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  January 24, 2011
Quoting Toa Nitrex I love your writhing style! I started really getting into the story that when I blinked my eyes started to burn XD Anyways, AWESOME story! When's the next chapter coming out by the way?
Probly tommorow,all I have to do is the photoshoot.
 I like it 
  January 24, 2011
cool story. i have one too called Missions of Glorious Doom.
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  January 24, 2011
I love your writhing style! I started really getting into the story that when I blinked my eyes started to burn XD Anyways, AWESOME story! When's the next chapter coming out by the way?
 
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