THATS AWESOME!and...my dog looks exactly like yours!

WOW that is totally awesome could you give some instructions?

Thanks guys! If I edit this and make a V2 I will definitely try o fix the problems you guys have spotted. Thank you for the criticizing and complimenting and I hope I will become a much better builder because of it. Thanks!

:O Epic!

Nice but the bottom and sides need greebles

The cockpit looks a little long and the wings look too far back but otherwise really good.

You should try angular plates on the sides, that fills up quite nicely.

Nice!

nicely built.

Thanks everyone!!!! Actually the gap in the cockpit was almost unfixable. Since the whole cockpit area had to be sloped the two windshield pieces didn't fit together correctly so had to space them out a bit. That's probably the one thing I really don't like. As for the colors, I really don;t see what the problem is, everything seems to be in the same color pattern so I won't bother with that. The slanted area has a few gaps and that might be why you think it looks a little thrown together but it's very hard to fill in the area sine the upper part is slanted. Anyway thanks for all the comments and I'm sure I will continue to improve in my building skills because of the encouragement. Thanks!

EXCELLENT shape !!!

Cool build, Dude!

Cool, the boarding area is really nice. Good job!

Nice looking ship! It does look cool, but a little rough. Cheers!~Swift

Nice job Trixe! Love it!

Halo never really attracted me, especially now, because of how much of it is there on MOCpages, but from time to time I find a cool creation like this that makes me like Halo a bit more every time I see one.

There's something to be proud of here, but it just seems like it was thrown together in an hour. Try to color coordinate more, regardless of how it looks in Halo. It'd be better that way.

Nice work, Trixe! I'm not a fan of halo, but this looks pretty cool, although you should fix the gap in the cockpit.