Part 2 of the retaking last comic. kodiak squad get stuck in a recovery mission.
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Ok, DOG we're leaving you in command of the ship, get her out of here safely.
Scorpion: Kodiaks, we have intel that a honey badger has been abandoned with valuable info in it, we need to retreive this info before the enemy, move out!
Scorpion: honey badger in sight, right lets grab the info and get the hell out of here.
Lance: whoa, these guys didn't stand a chance.
Scorpion: right, i'll get the van, lance, keep watch. storm, rookie scope out the situation.
Storm: nah, these guys are long dead.
Scorpion: hey, i'm watchin the surveillance footage, the enemy came from the front, but the camera got shot from behind.
Lance: movement!
Scorpion: it's a trap! get outta here!
Scorpion: lance is down!
Storm: we can't go back.
Marine: and thats how i got a tank out of the sea using just my....
Scorpion: link up with those friendlies!
Scorpion: marine! get to your vehicles and follow us.
Scorpion: alright from the vans radar, lance is being held in a yellow lorry. marines go through the tunnel and engage on my mark.
Scorpion: kodiaks, go back the way we came.
Scorpion: both teams go, marines keep the enemy busy.
Marine: can do. FIRE!
Marine: light em up!
Marine: hmm?
Marine: marines, keep your ground, we'll pull back.
Scorpion: lets roll.
Marine: yee haa!
Scorpion: take the dirt track! i hope lance dosen't find it too bumpy.
Storm: is that...
Rookie: High Hopes.
To be continued.
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March 6, 2011 |
this is AMAZING its detailed well built has a good story line.
well done 10/5
plz check out some of my creations |
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January 23, 2011 |
i love your stories! they re well structured, full of action and cool vehicles, the scenes are quite convincing considering what you have! bravo! there is a bit of confusion though, it comes from the fact that it seems that the enemies have the same vehicles color, i hope you ll use the black ones to clear the frendlies from the foes, an informative pic at the start of the mission would be cool and would clear this! excellent show in progress!
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January 22, 2011 |
this really good i'll tune in for the next one |
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