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The Forgotten Tale Part 4: The escape...

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Korr tells the three toa how tense he and his partners had been the moment they escaped the Makuta Robot, and reveals where they went afterwards..

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Present Korr: Now the four of us were very quiet as we traveled to our only exit. We were in the "space" of the body, and tried our best not to think of what would happen if we failed.

In the ship....

Callan: Sigh... I can't take it much longer! Korr, can you tell us the percentage of the chance of our escape?
Korr: Calculating.... about 95%.
Davix: Really?
Helad: Unfortunately, Korr is just trying to make you guys feel better. His programming can't calculate that fast!
Korr: Cover blown....

Korr: Approaching exit, no joke.
Callan: I can see it!
Helad: Take cover, friends! This could get pretty bumpy!

All: SCCCCCCCCCCCCCCCRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMM!!!

Callan: Wait..... WE'RE OUT! That wasn't so hard!

Helad: What a relief... well I might as well tell you what we're exactly going to do now that we're out. We are headed to a planet called Bara Magna. There is life there that will need to prepare for Makuta, so we must get there as fast as we can!

Callan: So Helad, do you think Makuta noticed our escape?
Helad: I certainly hope not, but he might have.

Later.....
Korr: Bad news, Helad, the ship is running out of fuel....
Helad: What?! But we're getting fairly close! What do you suggest we do!
Korr: We have enough fuel to get to Bota Magna, maybe we can find some more there.
Helad: Hmmm......

Helad: It seems we're changing the plans, let's hope we can warn any inhabitants of Bota Magna while we refuel...

Present Korr: So we all headed towards Bota Magna. If only we had escaped Makuta's notice, things might have gonna better than they did.

Makuta: It seems these fools are trying to warn the other forgotten planets. I'm a bit busy at the moment, but maybe this will be a good chance to deploy my new Space Rahkshi.....

To be continued.........

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Nick Nitro Brick

January 31, 2011

hey callan show davix this MOC http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/178906

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Commander Spencer

January 17, 2011

Nice take on the two-mysterious-eyes-floating-in-the-middle-of-a-dark-and-mysterious-area. Also, can you do a how-to on helad's ship?

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TeagleSTRIKE X

January 8, 2011

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Rahkshilord2 .

January 6, 2011

OMGSH! thats awesome! i love this storyline! Mind checking this out for me? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/245834

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Connor Hoffman

January 5, 2011

Can't wait for the next part! BTW I'll probably be starting Knight of Nights soon. I dunno when exactly tho. :)

exedra 2.0

January 4, 2011

oohhh space rakshi sunds fun!! : )

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AMT Guardian of Earth

January 4, 2011

awesome, can't wait to see these new space rahkshi.

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Chaos Master

January 3, 2011

space rakshi...wow. you would've thought he would made those before. then again, he never needed to get into space. anyway, great job! love this comic, it keeps getting better, never disappoints!

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Yoshi the killler

January 3, 2011

Awesome!!! I can not wait for the next one!!!

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Cody G

January 3, 2011

I love the use of the trash can for a ship hull!

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Angelo Delgado

January 3, 2011

Great story. Would you mind checking this out? http://mocpages.com/moc.php/245471

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Peter Crasher the Powerlord

January 3, 2011

Epic chapter! BTW, I'm typing at my cousin's laptop because I'm at his house due to my aunt's birthday party.

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Bob the inconceivably invincible

January 3, 2011

Uh -oh!

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Christian Pughe

January 3, 2011

very cool. i see you took my sugestion about traveling to bota magna. i cant wait to see what happens next.

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Owen Netzer , Bishop of the White Night

January 3, 2011

Because of this series, my writing skills feel mediodcre. Great job, it's getting better with every installment! Oh, and sorry for the delay on the Rift Chronicles. I'll find time soon!!