Titles: Ex Makuta, Ruler, Overlord
Status: Plotting revenge
Quote: "What happens if I ate a tart lord Narrsahk?" "You won't wake up in the morning tomorrow"
My Opponent's entry Lava Dragon Vote Here
Built for the biobuild offs contest I really think this is one of my best. And below is the mandatory story bio told in comic form.
Once there was a Makuta long ago who ruled the Ninth Kingdom, a small group of islands near Mata Nui's left foot, with an iron fist
He held the Matoran population as slaves for himself and treated them as dirty rotten Mahi. Many Toa had tried to free the matoran in the past, but Narrzahk defeated them all.
Until one day a Toa of ice came to challenge Narrzahk not for the freedom of the matoran but for the leadership of the kingdom.
Narrzahk was confident he could defeat one little Toa of ice seeing as he had defeated countless before.
But this Toa did something different. instead of pulling out a weapon she pulled out a small orb.
She hurled the orb at Narrzahk. Narrzahk caught it with ease and laughed at her attempt to injure him.
Then suddenly the orb started to emit a strange green fog and then suddenly the fog was gone.
Narrzahk suddenly felt drained of energy.
Quickly the Toa of ice snatched the orb out of his hand and fled, never to be seen again.
Later in the day Narrzahk tried to punish a matoran for stealing a tart but none of his powers worked.
Discovering that the makuta was powerless the matoran ran off and spred the word of freedom to all the other matoran.
News of this reached Teridax and Narrzahk was summonded to the brotherhood Headquarters.
There he was striped of his crown, weapons and worst of all his title as a makuta
He was then teleported to a deserted desert corner of the M.U. and left for dead.
He wandered the land for ages searching for a way to destroy the brotherhood for outcasting him
Until one day he came upon a legendary Rahi know as The Tar. The Tar would eat anything in contact with a zuzu fruit
So Narrzahk created a small wooden slingshot for a zuzu fruit. His luck continued to improve and about a week later he arrived at a small city with advanced technology. He tested it out on a Matoran and it worked with great success!
Nothing could stop him now. (except for a distorted picture oops)
He decimated half the city and took control of the head office. Once in control he blackmailed the top scientist to make him a gun to fire the zuzu fruit and a cage to hold The Tar
With The Tar growing with every bite nothing could stop him!!!!!!!!! The End
An interesting concept this moc proved quite a challenge.
I had limited pieces and i also had never created a Makuta before i was flying blind.
I love the kk crown and the legs have to be my favorite part.
The golden arm cup says good by!!!!!!
Thanks for looking and Please rate and comment!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice job dude! Good luck against me ;) Anyways, I like how you depicted him as a king and all, but the crown seems too far off his head, maybe making a cutstom head to work with it would be better :/. Besides he looks better without it lol. The keetongu orange is really distracting, I suggest removing it too. Those cups seem to kinda stick out of the MOC's arms. Also speaking of the arms, maybe making custom limbs would let you be able to make them cooler. As the lower arms seem too slim for the upper arms :/. Nice job on using thepiraka limb to attach the head and kneck ;). Also the feet seem a little small (redundancy lol). Overall cool MOC dude, but you could improve it ;). Again good luck against my Lava dragon! :D