Chapter one is here! Sorry for the wait, folks. I was busy with homework and my parents were hogging the computer all this week, so I'm just posting it now. Enjoy!
About this creation
Kenaz: Well, young Boreal, I was running along, keeping myself limber and ready for a fight, when it happened.
Boreal: What happened?
K: You'll see in a minute.
*jog jog jog*
K: Whew! I'm beat! Training sure is hard someti-
Voice: Kenaz, Bishop of the White Night. Heed my call.
K: Who the what?? Where are you?
Voice: You are needed in the Universa Privaron.
K: SHOW YOURSELF!!
Voice: It's no use fighting me. I'm merely projecting my being from the realm where I currently preside.
Voice: Come to the Universa Privaron. You are needed there. Seven other warriors will accompany you. The Rift is getting out of hand..
K: If the great beings command it, it is so. Take me to this so-called Universa Privaron.
Voice: Good. You will be transported shortly.
Suddenly, Kenaz's necklace starts to shine!!
K: What the-
*flash of light*
K: So.. The Universa Privaron. But.. Where am I?
Voice: You are in the God's Council. The other Seven have yet to arrive. Be patient.
K(to Boreal): And that's how I got to the Universa Privaron. But the others were soon to follow, and shortly after a life-changing decision was made: The Leader.
Link to Callan, Lord of Fire's prologue. It fits with the story well, and then the rest will start!!
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January 30, 2011 |
...Well I was right Chapter 1 was AMAZINGLY EPIC :D Can't wait for more :D...Oh right its already here XD |
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January 21, 2011 |
Sweet story,looking forward to the next chapter. |
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January 7, 2011 |
It's fine. And it's great to hear that you're better! As for the business.....Tel Est la Vie. |
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January 7, 2011 |
Quoting Alpha AI
You better yet? When's Ep. 2 going to be up?
Eeh! I'm so sorry everyone, i've been super busy. I promise ep. 2 will be posted on Saturday. I promise. |
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January 6, 2011 |
You better yet? When's Ep. 2 going to be up? |
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January 1, 2011 |
Sweet, I can't wait for episode 2. |
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December 20, 2010 |
Quoting Hank Hansen
I have the perfect Moc for wrath and I'll have it up soon.
Coolio! I have a prototype wrath built (he kinda looks like Anubis mixed with Meltdown XD), but this sounds cool. |
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December 20, 2010 |
I have the perfect Moc for wrath and I'll have it up soon. |
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Oh, and don't forget to post the Rift Chronicles in the Writer's Collective. |
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December 19, 2010 |
Quoting Mandragora Helix
Epic! Could do with being a little longer, though.
The later episodes will be longer. This is just an intro. Once I start with fight scenes, they'll be much longer. |
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December 19, 2010 |
Epic! Could do with being a little longer, though. |
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December 19, 2010 |
im gonna ask this oddly have u read amulet and u still get 5/5 |
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Chaos Master December 18, 2010 |
finally! another epic story! one thing though: why does he say "where am I" when the voice told him? anyway, i can't wait until we can see more! |
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A.D Lord of Darkness December 18, 2010 |
I like it Please check out my newest MOC. |
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Ahollow Darkfiend December 18, 2010 |
Awesome
"Where am I?"
"SPARTA!" |
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December 18, 2010 |
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Awesome! But one thing you should fix is that there are SIX other warriors waiting for him. :D
You'll remember that this is just before your intro. At this present time, there are 7. And I've found a way to make the 7 Sins have 7 members + Daegolaz again! There's two sins that are matoran size, and they can combine :) |
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December 18, 2010 |
Quoting Skorp TS
Great start! Question: Are you going to post this for every character, or do we have to do that ourselves?
You'll have to do it yourself. Sorry, I just don't have time for all of the intros. |
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December 18, 2010 |
Awesome! But one thing you should fix is that there are SIX other warriors waiting for him. :D |
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December 18, 2010 |
Great start! Question: Are you going to post this for every character, or do we have to do that ourselves? |
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December 18, 2010 |
chapter 1 was pretty cool! cant wait for the rest |
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