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clone wars episode 3: the great escape
this is the third installment of my lego starwars series, this is my commando squad, squad 17`s first appearance.
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sleet: here they come.

blackout: i heard they got.

general grevious: i hate you republic scum!!

lieutenant tuc: move it grevious.

captain zim: hello sleet blackout.

blackout: hello sir.
sleet: diddo blackout.

blackout: sir we got another mission.

captain zim: great just when i got back.

captain zim: i got another mission general

jedi master zim: i permit you to go captain.

captain zim: i`ll go get my armor.

blackout: ok, then meet us on the bridge.

LATER
captain zim: hey guys.

blackout: well captain you took your time.

sleet: yea sir you did take while.

captain zim: i had to find the right outfit.

admiral crank: if you are done fooling around i`ll brief you on your mission.

captain zim: shoot.

admiral crank: kashyyyk is under attack.

captain zim: go on.

admiral crank: we`re sending you in to liberate a base.

sleet: sounds pretty tough sir.

admiral crank: nute gunray is believed to be at this base.

captain zim: if we get gunray we`ll have two important separatist leaders and we could end the war.

admiral crank: correct captain, now i`ll show you to your ship.

admiral crank: here`s your shuttle.

admiral crank: may the force be with you.

clone pilot: sir the ship`s preped and ready.

captain zim: let`s do this.

sleet: ok guys we`re out a the hangar.

sleet:we`re entering kashyyyk`s atmosphere.

captain zim: hmm.

captain zim: i always did think this planet was weird.

blackout: i must admit it to be strange.

captain zim: reminds me of endor because of all the trees and stuff.

captain zim: look a wookiee.

lieutenant tuc: i can`t believe the war is almost over.

clone one: yep i didn`t think it would end this soon.

general grevious: it`s not going to end as soon as you think.

general grevious: what`s taking them so long

clone two: sir incoming transmission.

clone three: admiral there`s an unidentified ship requesting to board the ship.

admiral crank: let them on but send some clones down just incase.

clone three: yes sir.

admiral crank: trooper i want you to join the troopers in the hangar.

clone two: yes sir.

clone two: it`s a separatist class shuttle.

clone three: here they come.

clone two: be prepared for anything.

clone two: droids!

clone three: agghhh!

BLAM! BLAM!

clone four: aagghhh!!

battle droid one: die republic dogs.

BLAM!
clone three:NO! agghh!!

count dooku: make way.

count dooku: find grevious!
battle droid one: rodger rodger.

battle droid two: rodger rodger.

clone one: i just heard blaster fire!
lieutenant tuc: me two, i think it came from the hangar!

clone one: look droids!

BLAM! BLAM! BLAM!
clone one: ugghh!!

lieutenant tuc: no! die clankers! BLAM!

battle droid two: nooo!

BLAM! BLAM!

battle droid one: aahhh!!

lieutenant tuc: phew! that was close.

lieutenant tuc:phew aggghh!
general grevious: take that clone! now to get out of here.

MEANWHILE
blackout: can you lead us to the separatist base.

gggggg.

captain zim: what did he say?
blackout: he can lead us to the base.

captain zim: good i want you to follow him.
blackout: yes sir!
captain zim: sleet gut the guns.

sleet: got ya captain.

blackout: wait up!

blackout: i didn`t know wookiees could run so fast.

captain zim: good now let`s if we can catch up to blackout and the wookiee.

captain zim: there they are.

blackout: hey guys we found the base.

blackout: but how to infaltrate it?

admiral crank: i`m worried general i haven`t heard back from the troops holding grevious.

jedi master zim: should i go check on him, i did feel a disturbance in the force a little while ago.

admiral crank: incoming transmission.
static: admiral your not gonna like this, grevious escaped.

admiral crank: i`m sending master zim down to investagate.
static: ok sir.

admiral crank: well thats just jolly grevious is lose on the cruiser.

static: hello general.
jedi master zim have you made any progress?

static: well not really.

static: one of our troopers is still alive.

staic: well i have..

static: that grevious is headed to the hangar.

jedi master zim: then let`s check out the hangar.

static: troopers listen up!

static: trooper take him to the hangar bay.
clone trooper: yes sir!

static: and you come with us.

clone trooper: yes sir!

jedi master zim: let`s go.

captain zim: let`s get down there.

blackout: go back to your village.

gggggg!

captain zim: you ready?

blackout: yep.

captain zim: in 3....2....1

battle droid one: did you here something?

battle droid two: negative.

captain zim: take that clankers!

sleet: come on blackout!

blackout: ok,ok.

captain zim: let`s move on.

nute gunray: there is a security breach in sector 8 go check it out!

battle droid three: rodger rodger.

captain zim: the ammo depot should be around here somewhere.

blackout: um...captain.

battle droid three: don`t move.

battle droid three: drop your weapons.

captain zim: ok.

sleet:this is not good.

captain zim: just don`t shoot.

captain zim: blackout use your jetpack to get out of here and go for help.

blackout: but sir..
captain zim: just do it.

blackout: ok.

battle droid three: hey get back here!

blackout phew!now to get back to the ship.

captain zim: her`s a little party favor droids.

sleet: great thinking,i just hope we don`t die.

BOOM!!

EVERYBODY: AAGGHHHHHH!!!!!

sleet: well at least i`m alive.

captain zim: see, my plan worked.

captain zim: now let`s get out of here.

blackout:i just hope i`m not to late.

sleet: here comes blackout.

sleet: i`m sure glad to be out of that one.

captain zim: yep.

blackout: hop in guys.

general grevious: ha! ha! i knew the republic could not hold me!

count dooku: hurry up grevious.

general grevious: i`m coming!

clone one: hold it grevious!

general grevious: by by jedi!

jedi master zim: no!

jedi master zim: i can`t believe we lost him that fast!

jedi master zim: well we`ll have other chances.

jedi master zim: but i wish we could have had him longer.

captain zim: let`s get back to the cruiser.

sleet: look!

sleet:there goes gunray.

captain zim: well at least we have grevious.

SWOOSH!

clone one: look!

static:well squad 17`s back.

captain zim: hey guys wh....what happened?

static grevious escaped.

captain zim: well that`s great!

captain zim: just great.
to be continued.



Comments

 I like it 
  December 16, 2010
Very nice work! I like how long it is and the custom Commandos, they are really impressive.
 I like it 
  December 9, 2010
can u use periods or commas? nice clones btw.hard to follow too because of no spaces between pics
 I like it 
  December 6, 2010
Nice work!Cool story!
 
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