The protagonists of my Sci-Fi story. The team is a highly trained task force, normally only given missions of the highest importance. Note: This creation was on the MOCpages front page under "Everyone's LEGO creations" from about 8:00PM on Sunday, November 7, 2010 until 8:00PM (presumably) Monday, November 8, 2010. Also, it made the top six most discussed on November 8.
About this creation

Name: James Char
Rank: 2nd Lieutenant
DOB: 2447
Age: 41
Primary Area of Expertise: Airborne Pilot
Secondary Area of Expertise: Heavy Assault
Notes: [CLASSIFIED]
POB: Odyssey, Ares Province, Praetoria, Helios System

Name: Thomas Lanson
Rank: Colonel
DOB: 2442
Age: 46
Primary Area of Expertise: Command
Secondary Area of Expertise: Stealth
Notes: [CLASSIFIED]
POB: Armstrong, Luna, Sol System

Name: George Thompson
Rank: Captain
DOB: 2452
Age: 36
Primary Area of Expertise: Communications
Secondary Area of Expertise: Grenadier
Notes: [CLASSIFIED]
POB: [UNKNOWN]

Name: Adam Hawk
Rank: 1st Lieutenant
DOB: 2461
Age: 27
Area of Expertise: Hot Drop/Reconnaissance
Secondary Area of Expertise: Stealth
Notes: Personality: Gruff, yet cares for his team; but I think that he would prefer it if they would stay out of his way and let him kill the enemy.
POB: Altar

Name: [REQUIRED]
Rank: [REQUIRED]
DOB (no later than 2464): [REQUIRED]
Age:
Area of Expertise: Close-Quarters
Secondary Area of Expertise: [OPTIONAL]
Notes: [OPTIONAL]
POB: [OPTIONAL]

Name: Zach Smart
Rank: 1st Lieutenant
DOB: 2464
Age: 24
Area of Expertise: Medic
Secondary Area of Expertise: Marksman
Notes: An excellent medic; record shows that everyone he has tended has lived.
POB: [OPTIONAL]

Name: Eric Mickle
Rank: Captain
DOB: 2453
Age: 35
Area of Expertise: Sniper
Secondary Area of Expertise: Reconassaince
Notes: Crack shot, talks too much
POB: Madrigal

Name: David
Rank: Private
DOB: 2464
Age: 24
Area of Expertise: Demolitions
Secondary Area of Expertise: Shwacking people with his Gauss cannon
Notes: [OPTIONAL]
POB: [OPTIONAL]

Name: Logan Spencer
Rank: Commander
DOB: 2461
Age: 27
Area of Expertise: Computers
Secondary Area of Expertise: Demolitions
Notes: He got that artificial arm from a ship crash, he never misses, and he never talks.
POB: Regency Province, Blowgoore

Name: D.Z's
Rank: Corporal
DOB: 2459
Age: 29
Area of Expertise: Heavy Weapons
Secondary Area of Expertise: Mechanics
Notes: Has a partly metal skull (under the skin)because he was hit with a grenade.
POB: [OPTIONAL]
NOTE: This is a sign-up page for my Sci-Fi story. Before anyone asks to have a certain character, there are four people who have already expressed a desire to be a part of this (and there are two others who are possibilities): #1 Night Hawk, #2 Zach Smart, #3 L.S. Productions, #4 3 and a half foot Sniper (formerly Jswish). Please do not ask for a place on the team until the above people have placed their dibs. @Night Hawk and co.: Your priority was based upon whoever replied first. Hence, Night Hawk first, Zach Smart second, etc.
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White Knight November 8, 2011 |
Wow !!>.....what a cool bunch !>....well done.... |
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March 27, 2011 |
Hey! One of them has my name! |
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December 11, 2010 |
The next episode of No Salvation will be out either Saturday or Sunday.(And your character has some pretty cool action parts in it). |
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November 10, 2010 |
Quoting fisher s456
ill take the close quarter name is charty fisher rank is private
dob is 2464 age is 24 second hobby is rifle man
notes;have stealth to get clean kills and loves the ladies
Well, seeing as you are one of about ten people who have asked for the spot, there will be vote (by the people already on the team) to decide who gets the spot. I am also most probably going to create another group of sign-ups. |
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November 10, 2010 |
This has made it to the explore page. |
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ill take the close quarter name is charty fisher rank is private
dob is 2464 age is 24 second hobby is rifle man
notes;have stealth to get clean kills and loves the ladies |
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November 9, 2010 |
Quoting Eric Mickle
Oh ya I picked that one. Kinda explains me a bit so I used it.
No problem. The character was under your care, I asked, you answered. I just wanted to clarify for everyone that these were your comments, your choices. |
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Oh ya I picked that one. Kinda explains me a bit so I used it. |
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L.S. Productions November 8, 2010 |
wait, does (REQUIRED) mean, we get t choose spicifics? |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting Max Watson
"Crack shot, talks too much"
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isn't that the EXACT SAME description for Jun from Halo: Reach?
EEENteresting...
I don't know. That was what I was asked to write. Their character, their notes.::shrugs:: |
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"Crack shot, talks too much"
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isn't that the EXACT SAME description for Jun from Halo: Reach?
EEENteresting... |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting Caleb Cutlass-Crocodile Blanchet
"D.Z's" reminds me of Jorge from "Halo:Reach"... I'm truly disappointed, though, no green colored sniper? Bummer.
Dang! Your right! I completely forgot! Oh well. I have a whole series (hopefully) in which to make up for that mistake! |
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November 8, 2010 |
"D.Z's" reminds me of Jorge from "Halo:Reach"... I'm truly disappointed, though, no green colored sniper? Bummer. |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting MC Renegade
Can i be in still? if so, i'll just take anyone
I have a tough choice ahead of me. You are one of about ten people who have asked (or been interested in) the team. What I will probably do is get an exact head count, post them in the group and as ask the already members to vote. It will be up to them to decide (unless there is a tie, in which case, I will either decide, or move up to a smaller pool of candidates until one is chosen). Sound good? |
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November 8, 2010 |
Can i be in still? if so, i'll just take anyone |
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November 8, 2010 |
white black/skull |
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my guy is 24 and a expert medic birth 2464 rank liuetenit and secondary expirtes is marks man |
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November 8, 2010 |
Can my secondary skill be stealth and my date of birth to be 2461 |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting Night Hawk _
Can my secondary skill be stealth
If you so desire, it can be! I have virtually no problem with duplicates, just so everyone knows! |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting Gondabuggan Draconfell the gnome arcanist
well, if its possible, i'lll be the medic if its still open.
just notify me then i'll fill it out if it's open. :)
Unfortunately, one of the people I was waiting for to make a choice, just chose the Medic. Sorry! However, I am considering making a second volley of characters. More info is in the group (which I think I invited you to). |
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November 8, 2010 |
well, if its possible, i'lll be the medic if its still open.
just notify me then i'll fill it out if it's open. :) |
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November 8, 2010 |
Name: David
Rank: private
DOB (no later than 2464): 2424 Oct. 24
Age:How about 20 years old?
Area of Expertise: Demolitions
Secondary Area of Expertise: Swacking people with his giant gun :P |
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sooooo have the people who have dibs chosen yet? |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting Emperor Warlock
Ill be computers (if not taken)
Can his POB be mars? and his secondary expertise tracking? you know footprints and that stuff
Actually, he was just reserved. Sorry! However, due to the high volume of comments expressing a desire to be a part of it, I will most likely whip up another sign-up for other characters (not main characters, but characters who will feature in the story at various points). |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting Quinn Humphreys
are there any spaces left for this? and is there a possibility of helping with the story?
To your first question, maybe (still waiting to hear from one person). And, to your second, yes, help and suggestions are welcome; I will send you an invite to the group (or you can sign-up): http://mocpages.com/group.php/14520 |
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November 8, 2010 |
Ill be computers (if not taken)
Can his POB be mars? and his secondary expertise tracking? you know footprints and that stuff |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting L.S. Productions
wait, does (REQUIRED) mean, we get t choose spicifics?
Exactly. The [OPTIONAL] is up to you as well. Basically, you provide as much info as you want, and I make note of it on the page (in order to help me remember). |
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November 8, 2010 |
are there any spaces left for this? and is there a possibility of helping with the story?
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November 8, 2010 |
If I had known it would be this popular, I would have made more figs! Of course, before I can open it up for everyone to have a go for a character, there are two people who had "dibs" back when I first expressed the idea, so after they respond, I will pick someone arbitrarily. Sound good? |
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November 8, 2010 |
Quoting vbxx upyv
a well built team i must say,can i have a place? seen as i am just some random guy that saw this and was like "awesome!"
It certainly is possible. Before I give a definite answer though, I need to hear back from two of the people who expressed an interest before I posted it. Okay? I will contact you if/when I get the green light. |
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November 8, 2010 |
I like Eric Mickle personally |
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November 8, 2010 |
Ill be medic. |
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November 8, 2010 |
Hey man can i be the close quaters combat guy?
Oh and by the way i think these are sick |
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November 7, 2010 |
Oddly enough, these remind me of Power Rangers. I love all of them, they definately have their own personality and character. Well done. |
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a well built team i must say,can i have a place? seen as i am just some random guy that saw this and was like "awesome!" |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting 3 and a half foot Sniper (formerly Jswish)
I can haz skull? awesome wmahahaaha ** cough ** thanks!
Of course, due to my hesitancy to use decals on heads (bad issue with one that went under a helmet; scraped it off), your character will have to make due with one of the Lego designed skulls for the moment. Do you want nice classic (no red eyes, looks kinda funny), white mean classic (eyes look evil, teeth look mean and sharp), black mean classic? Unless you want him to have the red eye disease... |
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November 7, 2010 |
I can haz skull? awesome wmahahaaha ** cough ** thanks! |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting Jake H.
Could I be demolitions?
Most certainly. I just need you to fill in the blanks, as it were. |
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November 7, 2010 |
Could I be demolitions? |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting Night Hawk _
Just a question isn't grenadier the same as demolitions?
In this case, no. He uses a grenade launcher as his primary weapon. |
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November 7, 2010 |
Just a question isn't grenadier the same as demolitions? |
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November 7, 2010 |
POB is Place Of Birth, by the way. |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting Vince Le
Date Of Birth...
If you would like, you may reserve a character (still waiting to hear back from one or two people). |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting Night Hawk _
Jeffrey this is on the home page. Just so you know.
I know! I just saw! Thanks for the comments everyone! |
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November 7, 2010 |
Jeffrey this is on the home page. Just so you know. |
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November 7, 2010 |
Date Of Birth... |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting Eric Mickle
Uh is it supposed to be in the 2 thousands? And What exactly is DOB?
EDIT: I forgot age so 35 for that.
Okay, that tells me his DOB. You just need to give me one or the other, I can figure it out from there (unless the arithmetic gets me!). |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting Night Hawk _
Can I change my dob I mistyped it can it be 2458 and I'd like his personality to be kind of like Emile's from Reach.
sure thing! I will say this for everyone: If there is something that you want to change, please feel free to! I don't think that the series will start (officially) until December, closer to Christmas (what with college and what not). |
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Uh is it supposed to be in the 2 thousands? And What exactly is DOB?
EDIT: I forgot age so 35 for that. |
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November 7, 2010 |
Can I change my dob I mistyped it can it be 2458 and I'd like his personality to be kind of like Emile's from Reach. |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting Eric Mickle
Uh is it supposed to be in the 2 thousands? And What exactly is DOB?
DOB = Date Of Birth. Understandable if you got confused, I get confused A LOT (especially when I am talking!). |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting 3 and a half foot Sniper (formerly Jswish)
(last person)
Name: D. Z's (pronounced disease)
Rank: corporal
DOB (no later than 2464): 2459
Area of Expertise: Heavy Weapons
Secondary Area of Expertise: mechanics
Notes: has a partly metal skull (under the skin)because he was hit with a grenade
Homeworld: [OPTIONAL]
Also, although you can't see it, his right arm is supposed to be robotic (remembered your request!). Also, if you want, I can have him wearing a skull mask under the helmet. |
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I'll be the hot drop trooper /
rank: Lieutenant /
Name: Adam Hawk /
dob: 2448 /
homeworld: if possible Altar if not you can choose |
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November 7, 2010 |
Quoting Eric Mickle
I'll be the sniper. Name: Eric Mickle// Rank: Captain// DOB: 327// Secondary Area of Expertise: Reconassaince// Notes: Crack shot, talks too much// Homeworld: Madrigal// This looks like it'll be awesome! >Eric
DOB: 327? Is that a misprint? Just want to check. |
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November 7, 2010 |
I'll be the sniper. Name: Eric Mickle// Rank: Captain// DOB: 327// Secondary Area of Expertise: Reconassaince// Notes: Crack shot, talks too much// Homeworld: Madrigal// This looks like it'll be awesome! >Eric |
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November 7, 2010 |
(last person)
Name: D. Z's (pronounced disease)
Rank: corporal
DOB (no later than 2464): 2459
Area of Expertise: Heavy Weapons
Secondary Area of Expertise: mechanics
Notes: has a partly metal skull (under the skin)because he was hit with a grenade
Homeworld: [OPTIONAL]
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