As the Toa of Time has told the odd team their mission, Nektann is living it up somewhere in time. But how much longer can he keep it up?
About this creation
After a long day filled with pleasure, Nektann has fallen asleep. You see, after he left Amtrox, he traveled time and picked up new armor and a new weapon, and is now using his power over the mask of time to keep his new servants in check. But not everyone wants to put up with his pride and power.
Mortic:(thinking) I can't believe I made it in here without being noticed. It's about time to free my land of this monster by taking the only thing that keeps his power. The powerful mask of time!
???: And you thought you could sneak through here. Times up. You lose.
Mortic: What?
Mortic is stabbed in the back.
Mortic: Argh! Uhhh.....
Mortic falls to the ground, dead. Nektann's sleep isn't disturbed.
Attakrahnus: That's the fourth one this week. Good thing that fool Nektann pays me well, or he would have met the same fate weeks ago.
Attakrahnus walks away. (IMPORTANT NOTE: Using the mask of time, Nektann found Attakrahnus at the dark hunters base. Attakrahnus immediately joined him to get away from his minions Rogi and Dogi.)
The Next morning:
Nektann rises for another day of relaxation(or so he thinks).
Nektann: I should have known. It happens every other night. Better get someone to clean him up.
Later in the day:
Nektann: I hope this is important Attackrahnus, because I have a spa I need to in ten minutes...
Attackrahnus: A spa? (Sigh) Well this is important. Some of your scientists were studying your mask of time as instructed, when they found something peculiar.
Nektann: What?
Attackrahnus: The mask of time is the most powerful mask in the universe next to the mask of Life. Which means just like the mask of life, it has a little mind of its own.
Nektann: So? Is this going to ruin anything for me?
Attackrahnus: Yes. It seems the mask has disproved how you used it, and it will stop serving you if you keep this up.
Nektann: So what should I do?
Attackrahnus: Use it one more time for the job you were going to do at first: Save Makuta and kill Mata Nui. Simple as that.
Nektann: You're right. This life has become a bore, lately. Let's both go kill Tahu and secure Makuta's victory.
Attakrahnus and Nektann jump through the portal.
Please comment and rate if you like this story.( And sorry guys, I've decided the villains will only be Nektann, Attackrahnus, and Kalder. Hope you guys forgive me.)
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October 26, 2010 |
Quoting Jonathan aka chopperskull
hey my moc ages buddy! i like your stories, mind reading my chapter 1 and tell me what you think? also if you want, can you give me ideas and suggestions? i have some but i also want to see what other people think.....
Not at all! Actually I already read it, but I forgot to rate. Sorry! |
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October 26, 2010 |
hey my moc ages buddy! i like your stories, mind reading my chapter 1 and tell me what you think? also if you want, can you give me ideas and suggestions? i have some but i also want to see what other people think..... |
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October 24, 2010 |
kool |
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October 23, 2010 |
Quoting AMT Guardian of Earth
cool one. made me laugh, XD. cool to see attackaranus in one. too bad those other guys can't be made for it, but thats ok :)
You can just add them in your version! Glad you like it! |
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October 23, 2010 |
cool one. made me laugh, XD. cool to see attackaranus in one. too bad those other guys can't be made for it, but thats ok :) |
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October 23, 2010 |
Quoting Sgamer 360
Cool! So is the next Frenzy in Time like the last battle or something? Because I LOVE ACTION!!!
I don't know if the battle is next. All I know is that their will be an AWESOME battle, and Singe will be a part of it! And thank you, everyone! |
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October 23, 2010 |
Cool! So is the next Frenzy in Time like the last battle or something? Because I LOVE ACTION!!! |
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October 23, 2010 |
Now i thinking of making my own series |
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October 23, 2010 |
sweet!!! i like the story so far!!! it leaves me in suspense every time!! |
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A.D Lord of Darkness October 22, 2010 |
Nice comic. Would you mind checking out the newest version of my self moc? |
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October 22, 2010 |
Thanks everyone! And I even have a reason for the name of the dead toa. Mortic is based off of "Morta", which is Italian for "dead". Clever, eh? |
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October 22, 2010 |
awesome story!!! |
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October 22, 2010 |
dun dun dun!!! |
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October 22, 2010 |
Sweet new chapter of Frenzy through Time! It was kinda funny when Nektann has a spa back in time. It's alright if Blackout, Jetflame and the other villians won't appear in FtT, as long as everyone can appear in your desicion. |
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