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F-22A Raptor
Hi, this my second raptor on Mocpages but now much bigger. My creation has working landing gear and two internal weapons bays on the sides of the fuselage.Hope you like it.
About this creation



Weapon bay







Working flaps and thrust vectoring nozzles

Nozzles also work as you can see here



















Comments

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  December 3, 2011
NIICE!!!!
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  January 29, 2011
Cool!
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  October 17, 2010
I like it!
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  October 16, 2010
It's Starscream!
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  October 16, 2010
Awesome!! I really like it! But the background isn't so good. I had problems with backgrounds too, so just take a photo in a sofa corner or cover the entire background with the same colour. Overall 4.9/5
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  October 16, 2010
This is great. The design is near perfect.
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  October 15, 2010
I like the detail you put into it.
  October 15, 2010
That's an improvement! I would recommend covering the ENTIRE background with something such as an ironed sheet, and using lamps to improve the lighting. Presentation is, honestly, half your builds success. Still, this was better than everything in the room. Secondly, the colors are still pretty random. I'm glad you're using mostly gray, but try to keep it almost ALL one color, with a few details in other colors. Third, you've got a great start. The shape is right, the proportions are right. Now let's take it to the next level. Go SNOT. That stands for Studs Not On Top, or in other words, incorporate tiles into the wings and smooth rounds into the body. With those three things done well, this build will go from good to excellent. You've got the stuff it takes, now blow me away. Good luck! This is a bit different deal, and I understand that, but here's a good example of a studless ship by Mark Stafford. http://mocpages.com/moc.php/112517
  October 15, 2010
hey mate i really like this raptor the shape and the missle system is great, but. no.1 make the same coller overall, or two of the same coller, the one coller, shall just be brighter then the other, like the real raptor no.2 add some more guns at the wings. no.3 an nice job
Krystek Pietrzak
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Chris Kruining
  October 14, 2010
well mate shapes-exelent, awesome and wow colors- not so good but overall okay
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  October 14, 2010
It beautiful! It;s the best raptor on the site!
  October 14, 2010
Overall you have a good creation. The shape is excellent and the details are superb. If you don't mind a tad of constructive criticism, in future I would recommend trying for a primary color, say, dark gray. Also, the background against which it is photographed distracts us from the build. We don't want that happening! It is much preferable to shoot against a clean and well lit sheet, or Photoshop the background. Well, I've had my say. Very nice build, and hope to see more in the future!
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  October 14, 2010
Very Nice! Mine doesn't even compare. Here are a few mistakes, the sidewinder missile bays are a bit back. The engines could be a bit smoother. The cockpit and nose could be a tad better.
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  October 14, 2010
that is AWSOME lol i like bthe cups :)
 
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