Quoting Chopperskull .
this really is NOT bad. some suggestions though is that you should work more on the arms and legs and make them with armour. tell me, do you have many bionicle pieces? because if you do, use them!!!! now a moc doesn't have to be big to be cool...this guy is really cool. i love the head. for a first bionicle, really cool job! the best way to improve: make more!
Thanks friend I am working on another and my hardest time is definitely on the legs and btw I do have a lot of bionicles but they are older