Nice :)

Very cool, i like the grave. Also, if you are going to compete in SWLC 2nd tournament, please sign up in the sign up topic.

3,3,3 - this could have been something, as it is, solid...

Originality: 3 , Presentation: 3 , Build: 3 = 9

Originality: 3 , Presentation: 4 , Build: 4 = 11

Nice job, love the bottom bit.

Not too spooky, and the story was extremely difficult to understand. As I told Fruit Toucan, it would have been better if you had relied more on the build rather than a confusing story. Originality is 3, build is 3, presentation is a 4 for a total of 10. Good luck with the other judges!

The story was a tad hard to follow, but the build was good. 11 points.

Hard to follow but the build and lighting kept my attention. My entry should be Piced and posted later today. Good Luck fellow competer! >Eric

I like it; itīs plain nice, though Iīm not sure if I really got it. Those are zombies down there and the headline "Donīt worry. He will come ..." is what they say/think. Is that right? Maybe you can explain a bit. Anyway, very atmospheric.

Nice vig for this hard competition! Good luck :D