Spastle Adventures!
About this creation
COMPLETED -- 10/03/2010
Round 4 Group 1
Category -- Spastle Adventures!
Opponent -- Stuart Delahay

The Spastle kingdom of Crend lies on the desert planet Breendest. It is ruled by Duke Leopold and is famous for its lush forest that is sustained by a gigantic bio dome.


"Sire, the Green Ooze Beast is once again nearing our shores."

"Train the ballista on it and fire as usual General."


"Gruuuu."

"Sire, there is an incoming message for thee, most urgent!"

"Bid enter the Teletrondus."

Chhh... chhkkk...

Hail ye Duke Leopold of the Spastlemen, I, Blacktronis, am here on a mission of conquest, thine castle is forfeit!

"Blacktronis! How dare thee intrude on holy Spastle land?! Forthwith the sting of the Spastle fleet will be felt in thee and thine haunches!"

Blacktronis's battleshipcastle, Horror Chunk, waits in orbit above Crend.

"Ha! The mighty Spastle fleet is much too occupied with a vile space dragon that I aroused against them. Prepare thyself for a spatapult barrage the likes of which even Shannoocean has not seen!"

"Blacktronis, you vile creature!"

"Dost thou not realize that my grand castle is protected by Shannoocean himself?"

"Check out this shrine I built in his honor!"

"That matters not! Nothing can save thee!"

"Hag, ready the spatapults and fire on my mark."

Vrooooooo, chkaaa. Vrooooooo, chkaaa. Vrooooooo, chkaaa. Vrooooooo, chkaaa.

"Oh great Shannoocean, creator of this universe, protect us now from the volley of stones that will fall on us from space."

"Neeeeeiigh." "Whiiiiinny."

"Behold! He sends us a herd of giant mechano stallions! For it is said that the troubled will call on his name and Shannoocean will, upon surveying the situation, send help to those he deems coolest!"

Kachiiiiiiiiing!

"It is I and I am Shannoocean. I'll tone it down a bit."

"Blacktronis, it is thee who has been chosenith by I. Duke Leopold has had it coming for a long time... my friend, the Green Ooze Beast, complains of out of control ballista abuse."

"Great Shannoocean, I will do thy biding, but why did you bestow upon the Duke magnificent, giganto stallions if it is not he whom thee chosenith?"

"Those are my unruly horses, they've been spreading dissidence about my mighty herd and must be punished."

"Resume with your conquest!"

"FIRE!"

SPLAT! KABOOM!

Neighs of anguish.

"And now, for the ultimate humiliation, CRUSHING SPEED!"

CRUNCH!
--THE END--
All I can say is wow. This was a lot tougher than I thought it ever could be. Building Spastle stuff is pretty hard already but trying to weave a story around it is insane! Stuart, good luck, can't wait to see what you built!
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November 21, 2010 |
Lmao! What a crunchy ending! |
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October 10, 2010 |
Fantastic entry,I really like it!Very entertaining! |
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October 6, 2010 |
hahaha once again you're proving that you're one of the few great space builder with a sense of humour :-) Great take on a uneasy theme ! Love the story and all the craaazy figs. The Blacktron ship is cool, and the use of the big trans-blue dome is very creative. Excellent, mate !
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October 5, 2010 |
what an interesting entry! Spectacular stuff dude... |
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October 5, 2010 |
Great builds and great story. I particularly liked the television-like communication devices. Great stuff. |
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That was pretty cool, but my vote went to your opponent. Lee. |
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October 4, 2010 |
An awesome entry! But sorry, my vote went with Stu. ~ Chris. |
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October 4, 2010 |
Many thanks to everyone and their great comments!
Quoting Shannon Ocean
OH MY GOODNESS!! ...
Shannoocean may be needed in the future...
Quoting Heath 'kik36' Flor
... I've never seen the torso you used for the Shannon Ocean shrine....mind if I ask where it's from?
I was lucky enough to find the SPIII Galactic Enforcer for $40 off and couldn't resist, it's meant to be a stolen statue.
Quoting Tyson Riczu
... however maybe a double rainbow ray could have made it just a weee bit cooler :P
I've been building a vertical starfighter in my Rainbowtron theme called "Double Rainbow" and I think, just maybe, it's starting to look like a triple rainbow. :)
Quoting Chuke Lapman
Is it pronounced SHAN-OO-CEAN?
Oh yes it is! Glad that's how you ended up reading it!
Quoting Stuart Delahay
... You appear to have gone down a more Classic spastle route, which has worked really well here... We'll have to see what the judges say, but good luck to you!
The first thing I built was a group of more custom minifigs but once a story for them came up dry I had to go with more recognizable factions. Great work on yours, such an 80's fantasy adventure! |
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October 4, 2010 |
If only more MOCs contained the sound effects 'Neighs of anguish' and 'Whinny'. Loving this. You appear to have gone down a more Classic spastle route, which has worked really well here. The Teletrondus is a very clever trick, as is the use of the two different scales. We'll have to see what the judges say, but good luck to you! |
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October 4, 2010 |
Is it pronounced SHAN-OO-CEAN? If not, that's how I was saying it in my head. Mixing of scales is great, especially for story telling purposes, so much else to comment on, but as usual it's all gone out of my head... Good luck! |
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October 4, 2010 |
Yet another awesome entry, your eye for detail is exceptional! I particularly like the Teletrondus, but everything else is excellent too. You and Stuart D have given the judges a real headache on this one, and if I end up facing either of you in the next round I'm quaking. |
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October 4, 2010 |
OMG... Best ever, this made my weekend. however maybe a double rainbow ray could have made it just a weee bit cooler :P |
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| Keith Goldman October 3, 2010 |
Brilliant work Uspez! The terrain, the dome, everything spot-on. |
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Pascal Schmidt October 3, 2010 |
Lol, full of win! Love the crushing ending. |
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Fun, fun! A very creative and humorous build. |
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October 3, 2010 |
Teletrondus. Spatapults. Neighs of anguish. AHAHAHAHAHAHAH! But enough of the chuckles. Creative MOC that's well-built! |
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October 3, 2010 |
Hahahaha! Am I the ONLY one to notice that the blacktron castle looks like a slug? =P |
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This is only to show I saw this. I will take the time later to tell you all the stuff I liked in this page, so prepare for a LONG comment (tomorrow I think lol). |
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October 3, 2010 |
Wow. I immensely enjoyed going through every bit of this page, creations and storytelling alike. The 1-piece biodome with foliage is quite spiffy. |
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October 3, 2010 |
WOW.....WOW.....and need I mention.....WOW!!!! Stu has a LOT of work today if he wants to knock you out of this round. I think he's laughing maniacally even as we speak though, so we can't count him out yet. I've never seen the torso you used for the Shannon Ocean shrine....mind if I ask where it's from? |
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October 3, 2010 |
Wow! Really great story and build. Good luck with the judges. |
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October 3, 2010 |
PS: That Blacktron castle is to die for!! |
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October 3, 2010 |
OH MY GOODNESS!! This has to be the funniest and also coolest creation ever! "Neighs of anguish"?!?! You sir, have outdone yourself, brilliant stuff, love the ending!! |
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October 3, 2010 |
beware the vengeance fassioia! |
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October 3, 2010 |
Very nice, great builds and awesome ending :p |
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October 3, 2010 |
Top-notch entry! The Great Shannoocean will find you cool enough, for sure, but it remains to be seen if that will be enough to win the day against Stu. Good luck with this epic battle!~H |
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October 3, 2010 |
Forsooth! Doth mine eyes decieve me? Yonder entry be awesome to behold! |
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October 3, 2010 |
Quoting Giovanni Seynhaeve
Really, man, EPIC! Love those spacehorses. I remember your entry for aquastlenauts last year, this is something right up your alley. Very curious on what Stuart pulled off too...Good luck with your judges. And yes, I'll be back to taste the story too!
I'm finally finished adding the story Gio, have a look! Thanks! I think I'm about to go unconscious for a bit, a few marathon build nights have worn me out! |
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Really, man, EPIC! Love those spacehorses. I remember your entry for aquastlenauts last year, this is something right up your alley. Very curious on what Stuart pulled off too...Good luck with your judges. And yes, I'll be back to taste the story too! |
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