This is a Work In Progress, I like it so far, but I need some advice and constructive criticism... thanks!
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November 24, 2010 |
Quoting Timmy Kid
What about my ideas?
Um, well, yeah, the deadline is sorta over and I didn't finish it so thanks for your ideas anyways ;) |
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Pony Lord7 October 16, 2010 |
Well to help out all bley will look bland try adding color to the bike and details like street signs, stop lights, blood spill... any thing to ad more color and intrest. |
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October 2, 2010 |
haha.. |
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October 2, 2010 |
;D I love me some carrots, but not from ol' Phipson. Niiiice one dawg. That base is so wonderful ;3 |
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October 2, 2010 |
Quoting Leda Kat
I'm not sure why you feel you need to make it better, it looks just fine to me! I love the design of the ground surface, really creative and the photography is excellent and Phip looks great with his guns out. And you don't need anymore story, its obvious what Phipson is going to do with that kid and that carrot...
Yeah, he's gonna force him to start eating healthy I guess :P Thanks Leda! :D |
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October 2, 2010 |
I'm not sure why you feel you need to make it better, it looks just fine to me! I love the design of the ground surface, really creative and the photography is excellent and Phip looks great with his guns out. And you don't need anymore story, its obvious what Phipson is going to do with that kid and that carrot... |
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October 1, 2010 |
looks good, maybe add a side walk for the granpa and make the road wider, plus thanks for the comment on my creation! |
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October 1, 2010 |
He should catch a western outlaw, I don't think anyone has done that yet. |
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October 1, 2010 |
Quoting Mister Bones
agreeance - 2 dictionary results
Main Entry: agreeance
Part of Speech: n
Definition: the act of agreeing
Example: Usage of the site constitutes agreeance with these terms.
Sorry Flare, it is a real word.
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To quote Luke Skywalker: "NOOOOO"
Sorry Matty Mason, thanks Bones. |
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Perry McShane September 30, 2010 |
make it bigger with a few onlookers on the sides, that'll spruce it up |
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Henry Tracey September 30, 2010 |
I like this moc so far, but maybe you should add more detail to gramps's wheelchair. I also woud suggest adding a bit more of a background. I love the ground idea! P.S. on the subject of carrotphippy, NO COMMENT!! |
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September 30, 2010 |
Nice technique - I just feel you should make it bigger on the sides and show WHERE/WHAT they are (on). If it's a street add a sidewalk or barrier or gutter. If it's rocks, add some plants... I just don't know where this is. Add something to show that. |
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September 30, 2010 |
I like it. If it's supposed to be futuristic, and that old dude has a lot of cash, maybe he should have robot servants. Oh and an safe that's been damaged/cut-open/that's been burnt to ashes. Or, if the stealer doesn't have weapons, try to make a... well, a thing that doctors use to hear your heart speed. I don't know what the word is. |
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agreeance - 2 dictionary results
Main Entry: agreeance
Part of Speech: n
Definition: the act of agreeing
Example: Usage of the site constitutes agreeance with these terms.
Sorry Flare, it is a real word. |
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September 30, 2010 |
i don't know what needs improving because its already awesome! but maybe you could add a tree, sidewalk,lamppost or something like that |
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September 30, 2010 |
I'm really liking what you did with the terrain. |
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I'm in agreeance with Matty Mason |
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September 30, 2010 |
This is really sweet! I think I'm going to redo my entry, I hope to make it soon. I like everything how it is, good job! |
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September 30, 2010 |
I like that technique you used on the vig! |
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September 30, 2010 |
bank building more spectators cars |
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September 30, 2010 |
I like Jack's hovercycle, but from his expression, it looks like it could also be a flatulence ignitor. |
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September 30, 2010 |
I love the technique on the road, but i agree that a background would be nice. |
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September 30, 2010 |
In total agreeance with Shifu, below me. Looks, so far pretty decent, maybe some burn marks caused by the hover bike? |
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September 30, 2010 |
I'd eat carrots but not one from Phippy ... |
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September 30, 2010 |
I actually like it the way it is, but maybe it could use a backdrop or something like that. ~Waff |
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September 30, 2010 |
I actually like it the way it is, but maybe it could use a backdrop or something like that. ~Waff |
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September 30, 2010 |
VERY nice! And I mean VERY. Wow...I just realized something. I have that exact design for the base on my desk. |
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September 30, 2010 |
Nice! The road is great, i agree with the others on the background. |
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September 30, 2010 |
Quoting Hans DendauwNPD
See, I comment on your stuff without provocation. THIS is what I was talking about on my last comment, action. The cool road technique gives the scene a sense of motion. As for background, maybe a futuristic lamppost or pillar to help break up the 'flat' feel of the base., but it's not really necessary for such a small scene. Motorcycle frame for a speeder? I wonder where I've seen that before...;^)~H
Thanks Hans, I appreciate your ideas. |
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September 30, 2010 |
This is pretty impressive, I really like the effect you used on the road. I do agree that it needs something in the background. |
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September 30, 2010 |
See, I comment on your stuff without provocation. THIS is what I was talking about on my last comment, action. The cool road technique gives the scene a sense of motion. As for background, maybe a futuristic lamppost or pillar to help break up the 'flat' feel of the base., but it's not really necessary for such a small scene. Motorcycle frame for a speeder? I wonder where I've seen that before...;^)~H |
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September 30, 2010 |
The idea for the street is awesome, I love that. I would alter the vechicles to be a slightly different color than the street, as they are a bit hard to see. Especially the one the Red dude is riding. Again, great idea on that street. |
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September 30, 2010 |
Looks good only try to add a building or make it so their are pedestrians being knocked out of the way.Or make them inside a building |
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September 30, 2010 |
Looks good to me! |
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September 30, 2010 |
Very Nice! I like the hover bike! And the detail on the ground is exquisite! Keep Buildin' -MOCrazy |
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September 30, 2010 |
Beware Phipsons carrot of death... `Ryan
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September 30, 2010 |
Quoting Henry Tracey
I like this moc so far, but maybe you should add more detail to gramps's wheelchair. I also woud suggest adding a bit more of a background. I love the ground idea! P.S. on the subject of carrotphippy, NO COMMENT!!
I like the idea of a background, and carrots are healthy, you guys don't seem to get that. |
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September 30, 2010 |
Quoting Ford The Oldies Man
awosme Flare but i think Phipson should have a banana instead he used one in a moc with himself.~Ford
1. I don't have a banana 2. Carrots are just as healthy as bananas :P |
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September 30, 2010 |
awosme Flare but i think Phipson should have a banana instead he used one in a moc with himself.~Ford |
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