Quoting Axel �
Well well well! This is a fairly good entry, and I might have to look over it before scoring it but anyways, here goes: Photography, was bad. I recommend getting a tripod.
Story, was OK. I guess.
Creativity, was good.
And the build, was good.
Last but not least, the background, well, kinda stunk. I give you six (6) points. Good luck!
Okay...how do I make a good background?