The Dimress Elite Strike Force comprises of only two members, Wraith (the main pic) and Porteii. They fight in Makuta Daitein's army occasionally but are used mainly for hunting down betrayers and spies, Makuta Daitein needs not to worry weather Wraith and Porteii will come back empty handed because they always get their man...
About this creation
Well it's been ages since posting a MOC so hopefully I havn't lost my edge ;) Thanks for checking this page out and, if you don't have time to comment, please still rate. Enjoy!
This is Wraith, a former guardian of the Twin Masks. The twin Masks were legendary masks of extraordinary power, one possess the powers of darkness, the other light. Both masks were identical and, if one were to select a mask to put on, there would be no way of knowing whether you would be lost to the shadows or have the power of light coursing throughout your body.
When Wraith was attacked by a horde of Makuta-twisted Rahi he was forced to make a tough decision, continue to ward off the over powering hordes of Rahi or take his chances with the Twin Masks. Wraith chose a mask at random, no prizes for guessing which one he took, the Rahi ran off with the mask of overpowering light and left Wraith, now struggling with the darkness within him.
Wraith was transformed when he gave into darkness and lost all emotions, but was left with many memories. The Great Beings came to an uneasy decision and banished Wraith to the planet Dimress, they first tried to save him but Wraith had been completely lost.
(Below) A nice lil' two piece pic.
He was an empty shell, no purpose, no destiny to fulfil. Makuta Daitein took advantage of the state that Wraith was in and trained him to be a deadly ally, Wraith towers above most on the battle field and is happy to cut anything bigger than him down to size. Wraith finds himself lost when he has not been given any orders and shows no mercy when carrying them out.
(Ok now enjoy the last couple pics of Wraith, sorry if the background story isn't great, I think I'm a bit tired and it might not be the best...).
Now for Porteii, the Porteii were a very advanced species that found and created amazing alien technologies. They have mastered the art of teleportation and stealth, many members of the Porteii of course used their powers for the wrong purposes and those that did were banished to Dimress. To this day there has been a steady flow of Porteii being banished, most of which choose to join Diatein’s army.
The Porteii make perfect assassins on the battle field, the one shown here has been specifically selected and trained for sabotage and hostage missions. He frequently does missions with Wraith and together they are practically unstoppable.
Nobody seems to know how the Porteii can teleport or what their purpose is, some think the secret of teleportation is hidden within the sphere on the end of the Porteii’s right arm while others think that the technology is built into their bodies.
(A closer look at the right arm of Porteii)
(The left dagger-like arm)
(And a cool pose)
This last bionicle is one that my little brother made, he asked if I could put it up for him and I just couldn't say no...
I've hoped you've enjoyed Wraith and Porteii, sorry if the story isn't that satisfying... I might update it when I'm not so tired. If you have any advice, constructive critisisim, ideas etc please let me know in a comment.
P.S. I was going to make some more members for Diateins army but have two contests to worry about. Link to Makuta Daiteins page: http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/180919
Keep MOCing! ;)
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August 28, 2011 |
AWESOME ! esp. the head..very cool design |
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May 16, 2011 |
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December 19, 2010 |
Quoting javier ramirez
these creations you make.... can you mabey post how tuild them um i mean i am a really big fan and...
We'll see... |
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December 18, 2010 |
these creations you make.... can you mabey post how tuild them um i mean i am a really big fan and... |
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October 8, 2010 |
Awesome! Both are great MOCs with amazing designs... Portreii's head is better, and it has more personality, but Wraith has a great design as well, specially with the arms and legs... So, I don't really know wich one I prefer... |
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October 8, 2010 |
Quoting Callan Lord of Fire
Total AWESOMENESS! Mind checking out some of my stuff some time?
Sure, I'd be happy to. |
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October 8, 2010 |
Total AWESOMENESS! Mind checking out some of my stuff some time? |
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August 28, 2010 |
JUST TOO COOL! :D |
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August 28, 2010 |
epic work... |
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August 28, 2010 |
really awesome |
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August 28, 2010 |
cool creations. keep mocing. |
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August 28, 2010 |
Both Wraith and Portei are great,but I sure prefer Wraith.I love his head and torso,and I agree with Gringat,your brother's moc is not half bad at all. |
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August 27, 2010 |
This is HUGE!! I love it! |
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August 27, 2010 |
Quoting Gringat the Repugnant
The story IS satisfying, the MOCs are simply AMAZING (as usual for you :) ), and tell your brother that he's not half bad with the Bio-MOCs himself.
Thanks, and that was some quick commenting! I'll let my brother know, he should be pretty happy about it :) |
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August 27, 2010 |
The story IS satisfying, the MOCs are simply AMAZING (as usual for you :) ), and tell your brother that he's not half bad with the Bio-MOCs himself. |
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