Oasis Duel (Comic): A LEGO® creation by White Sparrow : MOCpages.com

Oasis Duel (Comic)

Rate it

Add a comment

Zoom in

My first ever comic.

About this creation

White Sparrow. Raised on Korriban and taught the ways of the Sith. When he discovered how horrible the Sith were, he revolted. The Dark Lord Vader put a 20,000 credit bounty on Sparrow's head. That is when he ran into hiding.....And was found.

Found by a small group led by an Echani warrior by the name of Banour. His two mercenaries went by the name of Randi and Luki. The Story goes like such.

"We have finally found you, White Sparrow." said Banour. "We will have our 20,000 now!" said Randi. White Sparrow said: "If you think you can kill me......"

"You are very mistaken" Banour yelled: "KILL HIM!!!!!!!!"

White Sparrow dodged a shot from Luki and force jumped to the top of one of the broken pillar as Randi charged up his blaster rifle. "You will die!" Banour said.

Banour jumped with all his power to the top of another pillar as White Sparrow jumped down on Luki. Out of fear, Luki dropped his blaster and screamed words that cannot be repeated in front of little ones. Randi, the horrible shot, missed White Sparrow by a meter.

White Sparrow stabbed Luki right in the chest. In shock, Randi fires and misses by at least two meters. Banour jumps from one pillar to another, missing White Sparrow by 3 seconds.

Seconds later, White Sparrow and Banour meet on top of a pile of soil clashing swords together. Because White Sparrow killed Randi's friend, Luki, he runs up behind White Sparrow to kill him. White Sparrow uses his force push to send Randi flying backwards to his death.

During a pause in the battle, White Sparrow pushes Banour up and over the ruins.

"Please...*Cough*..let me live...*Cough*...please." said Banour. "This is for attacking me." replied White Sparrow.

White Sparrow brought down one mighty stroke and finished Banour. He turned and almost ran into a droid.

"Who the heck are you?" asked White Sparrow. "I am TK-57. I am..er..was a translation droid for my now deceased master."

"You have seen too much, TK-57." White Sparrow said as he pushed the droid into the water.

"There has been too much blood spilt here. I must go." he said as he walked away.

~--------------------------~
This was my first Comic. Please Comment

Comments