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UM - MOC Olympics R1 Psi Factor
R1 Eliminatories Entry
About this creation
COMPLETED -- 08/12/2010

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Town stuff like cars and houses scare me but I gave it a shot. I got "psi factor" as a category. The text is on top of its corresponding picture, that's an important bit of info. Enjoy!



My story takes place at the estate of the mysterious recluse, Sam Smythe.



Sam - "That's a good boy Dean, it seems the helmet is working fine, you aren't barking at me."



Sam - "Sarah should be here soon for our little celebration. I can tell she's pleased with what we've accomplished, the going will be much smoother now... we're finally done with this helmet!"



Sarah pulls up in her car.



Sam - "She's here!"



Sam - "Sarah, you look amazing, it's nice to see you in something other than a labcoat."

Sarah - "Well, I had to wear something I wouldn't mind spilling wine on. How's the helmet been so far?"



Sam - "Wha, Sarah!"



Sam - "Get out of here!"



CRASH!



Bad Guy - "Hold it, you two aren't going nowheres. We'll be taking that helmet, hand it over!"



Sam - "You pukes couldn't possibly have a reason to want this helmet, it's worthless to you!



Dorgan - "Heh, I want the helmet Smythe."

(Useful Info - Dorgan and his crew go around in their stolen Ambu-Walker stealing new technology and selling it to the highest bidder.)



Dorgan - "We've been monitoring insane levels of psionic activity, I'm guessing that helmet is some kind of psionic amplifier and I have some very interested clientele."



Sarah - "It's suppressing his psionic abilities you idiot, we've been working on it for months!"



Sam - "It's true what she says, I'm trying to suppress my mind here!"

Dorgan - "Hah, good story. Play nice this time and you may find some beneficial perks to being on my side in the future, decide to be uncooperative and my boys'll blast you and just take the helmet."



Sam - "Alright, have it your way."

Sarah - "NO SAM, NOOOOO!"



Sam - "They leave me with no choice Sarah."

Dorgan and Crew - "AAAH!"



Sam - "They sealed their own fates."



Sam - "What I do now can not be helped."




Sam puts the helmet back on to suppress his mind powers.

Sarah - "Oh Sam."

Dean - "Woof!"



Sam - "Until I learn to hold back my mind powers on my own, this helmet will be necessary."

Sarah - "Yes but don't worry, I'll be here to help."

Dean - "Woof!"



Thanks for taking the time to read this over! I hope the story comes across as sort of clear, it wasn't ever completely clear for me so.. oh well, haha.

PS. - I had Crimso's style in mind when I built the Ambu-Walker, that guy has a masters degree in radness.



Comments

 I like it 
  August 21, 2010
Heh heh, ah the delicious twist! I wouldn't mind seeing more of Mr Smythe you know. Great stuff matey :D
 I like it 
  August 15, 2010
So much to love about this!
 I like it 
  August 15, 2010
Wow, fantastic build and crazy story. Good work.
 I like it 
  August 14, 2010
Awsome build! The ending was a surprise. The helmet is very clever!
 I like it 
  August 13, 2010
Great build! That house design is fantastic. You are a good storyteller too!
 I like it 
  August 13, 2010
Thos Dragon hunetr curtains had me green with envy! Great Moc, love that car...
 I like it 
  August 13, 2010
waw! my supplies don't even reach to build half of that house! great stuff here!
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
Very interesting little story, love the house and the helmet is very creative to say the least
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
Cool stuff! Not much to say that the judges scores didn't, so see ya in round 2.~H
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
This is a great take on the theme and I love the builds and action! Good luck in round 2:)
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
LOL. Loved the Lawnmower on the guys head.. Classic. Good Luck!
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
You could have titled it "Being a Psionc and being bald". Awesome, very classic Psi-powered story! 9 points!
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
Excellent action! Nice part usage on that helmet as well.
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
Great builds! I liked the lawn mower hitting the guy >:)
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
Great build and a great take on the story! Loved it! 9 points! ~ Chris.
 I like it 
  August 12, 2010
Non-judge comment: That house did it for you in my book. Sweet build all around with great detail.
  August 12, 2010
Score = 9
 
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