Here is my first comic introducing Hero Factory star, Jimi Stringer! But he's in Bionicle territory, and they aren't too happy he's replacing them. Can he and Komart convince them he's a friend?
About this creation
AMT Guardian of Earth gave me the idea for these.(Don't I always copy him?)
Komart: Hello everyone! Today I'll be talking with one of the characters in the theme replacing Bionicle! From Hero Factory, please welcome Jimi Stringer!
Jimi: Thanks Komart. It's good to be here today. I've already been fitted with some minor upgrades and might go through more in the near future.
Komart: Interesting. But you seem to have a very weird name. I mean "Jimi Stringer"? It sounds like you sew for a living.
Jimi: Well it can't be as weird as Komart. It sounds like it's "Corporation Mart" which is obviously ridiculous. It sounds like your selling businesses.
Komart: Well let's not get into arguments, shall we? Hey look it's some of my Moc buddies!
Callan, Davix, and Vyron: Hey Komart! Who's your friend?
Komart: Why this is one of our successors from Hero Factory, Jimi Stringers!
Davix: ATTACK!!
Callan: Any last words, vermin?
Jimi: What did I do? I mean seriously!
Komart: Guys! This is no way to treat a guest! Besides, we are all Mocs, so we never had ACTUAL fame in the Bionicle universe.
Vyron: True....
Komart: Besides, he loves music.
Davix: MUSIC?!
Jimi: Yep.
Davix: We're about to be best friends!
Everyone is talking, having a great time.
Callan: Hey, look! It's Tahu Nova, Nektann, and Kalmah.
Tahu Nova: Hey guys. Who's this new short fella.
Komart: This is Jimi Stringer! He's a part of Hero Factory!
Nektann: Make one move and you'll never move again!
Jimi: Again?! You gotta be kiddin' me!
Komart: C'mon guys! You all knew that your fame would end eventually and should be thankful it lasted nearly 10 years!
Tahu Nova: You're right, Komart. Sorry, String guy. Hey Nektann! Point that thing somewhere else!
Nektann: Hmmph. If you all weren't protecting him, I'd have killing him before you could say, "It's the Stars all over again!"
Jimi: You need some manners, brute.
Nektann: Argh!!
Kalmah: Nektann's right, this guy is trouble. I mean look what he did to the Skakdi.
Davix: Might I remind you that you are both rude bad guys and a good guy can lose his temper when you act like jerks. Besides, it's not his fault he's as short as the...
Tahu Star: Stars. Yep, but I've been upgraded so much that I believe I can take you down. If I win, you will be forcefully taken apart. But if you win, I will pay you $100,000,000!
Jimi: You're on!
Tahu Star: Good. Komart will be the announcer, and I will whoop you!
Jimi: We'll see about that! But why do you wanna do this so badly?
Tahu Star: I have to regain my honor since I was beaten by Nektann. Now I'm gonna go kick his sleeping body until he wakes up.
Komart: Okay, looks like we have another fight, so I hope you watch it when it comes! See ya later! And Welcome Hero Factory!
Comments
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Jimi Stringer is the best. He is my favorite by far. I am definitely not one of those haters who think Hero Factory is bad. I love it! |
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January 10, 2011 |
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I made it |
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August 21, 2010 |
Quoting Aleura,keeper of air (formally ehlek3297)
Lol
i got jimi stringer today!
Im gonna make a vid of him then hes gonna be taken apart
Poor Jimi! Yeah, the heroes aren't the best by posability standards, but I still think they are cool characters. |
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I like it |
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August 21, 2010 |
Lol
i got jimi stringer today!
Im gonna make a vid of him then hes gonna be taken apart |
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I made it |
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August 16, 2010 |
Quoting Commander Spencer
Whoa, how did you get more than 8 pictures on your creation?
You just keep pressing the add photos button and u can add as many pics as you want. |
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Whoa, how did you get more than 8 pictures on your creation? |
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I like it |
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August 8, 2010 |
Even though Noah QWERTY is my friend, he did not say that. Another friend of mine said that. |
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Very funny! I LOL alot! Tahu: MAKE ONE MOVE AND THAT WILL YOUR LAST! |
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I made it |
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August 7, 2010 |
Quoting Peter Crasher
Funny when he says Komart sounds like "Corporation Mart" because when I once brought Komart to school, my friend said Komart is Walmart.
Well what I meant is Co. stands for Corporation, so I think that works better than Walmart. Oh, I accidentally deleted the comment you tried to leave in the group. But I did read it, so just make the moc of the story and Komart and Aquara are good to go! BTW Did Noah Qwerty say that? |
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I like it |
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August 7, 2010 |
Funny when he says Komart sounds like "Corporation Mart" because when I once brought Komart to school, my friend said Komart is Walmart. |
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I like it |
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August 7, 2010 |
its ok. just say that you got the idea from me and i'll be cool with it :), oh, and i want to do the group for frenzy through time also. |
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I made it |
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August 7, 2010 |
Quoting AMT Guardian of Earth
cool, that was funny. did you get the idea of comics from me? just asking, not sayign you stole my idea, i would just like to know please.
Yeah, I sorta did. I hope you don't mind. |
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I like it |
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August 7, 2010 |
cool, that was funny. did you get the idea of comics from me? just asking, not sayign you stole my idea, i would just like to know please. |
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