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#5 The strike against Totran Crater - Part two
The decimated Explorien strikforce makes a final assault.
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The decimated strikeforce makes a last go against their target; the alien regeneration chamber.



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   ”Get him off me!” screams Hjard, as the alien throws itself upon him, tearing at his head. Captain Yhid empties his blaster against the head of the alien, to no avail.



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   With the death of Hjard, the alien seems to have completed its goal and depleted whatever strength that kept it going.



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   It dies in a heap upon Hjards dismembered body, and Yhid stares in horror, for a moment stunned.



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   But he regains control of himself just in time to avoid being hit by the cannon tower wich has once again focused upon destroying the Explorien efforts to reach their target.



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   ”Yhid to base. I have reached the target.”



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   As Private Hyndel provides covering fire, and prevents any aliens to get close...



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   ...Captain Yhid grabs his detonator...



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   ...enters the building, and attaches it to the vulnerable power core.



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   And then he runs...



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   ...as the explosion destroy everything behind him.



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   ”Hyndel! Get down! We’re out of here now! The forcefield has been destroyed, we can get pickup straight awa....”



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   ”Yhid to air, Yhid to air. Requesting instant pickup.”



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   ”This is Dvekar two, I am going in against that huge freak again.”



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   ”This is Dvekar leader, Toran two, Dvekar three, keep the alien fighter busy, I’ll draw fire from those turrets!”



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   ”Dropship here, I am almost in position.”



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   With some last laserbeams blasting past his head...



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   ...Captain Yhid leaves Totran Crater and the bodies of his comrades behind.



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   Had he but commanded differently, he thinks, they would not all be dead.



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   ”Dvekar squadron, Toran squadron. This is Colony Command. The distraction seems to have been a partial sucess. A few evacuation vessels have been attacked, but we’ve also read a number of alien ships rerouting. Report in upon your return to Thintarr.”



Comments

 I like it 
  September 28, 2006
I like the FX alot. What program do you use?
 I like it 
  September 18, 2006
Luv the fx, love the story. Any advice for my comic would be helpful. Keep building!
 I like it 
  July 28, 2006
BRILLIANT! I REALY wanna see more of this kinda stuff.
 
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