Got on the #2 on "Most Discussed" :)
About this creation
Xax Squad
As part of the new Crimson Guard's new empire, High Commander Deviss decided to create as Special Ops Division. It was acceped, but they rivaled Commander Shcuz's marines. So as part of a test, Deviss created a single team to prove their superiority. That was the result for Xax Squad, made up of (left to right in picture) Ren, Lead, Blast, and Lew. Their first mission was to a crashed Crimson Guard capital ship on an unknown snowy planet of Devastiss. The CG has sent Shcuz's marines and standard Crimson Guards to investigate, but always lost contact. This area was known as Ground Zero, and has been standing there for nearly 5 years, near the climax of the Darx/ Crimson Guard war.
Members of Xax Squad:
- Ren: Squad Leader, has an "animal instincts" that keep him alive in the most dire situation, former Armored Guard. Unkown whether this was the reason he was chosen.
- Lead: Second in command, has a jokingly attitude even in the most terrible situations. Former Sky Guard.
- Blast: Standard, always has a serious attitude towards everything, usually throws back at Lead whenever he cracks a joke, even before in the Sky G
uard unit. Former Sky Guard.
- Lew: Often silent, but the most efficient killer out of everyone in the squad. Former Aqua Guard.
Lead's U.S.T.T. (Unarmed Single Troop Transport) I may give instrutions for this if enough people comment.
Tryouts
Now, even with the squad now, we need others, right? You can choose a position that's still available below, but you have to be part of The Crimson Guard to get a role. Don't worry, if it says you need to be accepted, I accept people daily. You can even ask for a role before you're accepted! Some roles are only for commanders/ high commanders, and I'll list the most qualified form the top to bottom! If those roles aren't filled, I might let normal guards fill those spots.
- Navy Fleet Commander: Commander Ryan
- Navy Fleet Lieutenant: Matt the Backward One
- Crimson Guard Training faciltity commander: Elite Commander Rogue
- Crimson Guard Lead Commander: Zylo
- Crimson Guard Archives Director: Klay
- Crimson Guard Training facility sergeant: Cyber ODST
- Crimson guard Gunship Sergeant: Cade.
- Crimson Guard: Commander Trixe
- Crimson Guard Pilot: ARC Commander Oblo
- Crimson Guard Archives worker: Josh B. (Yes, you'll have a very important role in the middle/ end..)
- Crimson Guard Archives worker #2: Fish Teeth
- Crimson Guard Archives Guard: Commander Fero
That's it! If there's anymore people and the roles are filled, I'll either create more roles or just find a way to fit you in the story. Get them while they last!
EDIT:
This got "Most Discussed" on June 8th, 2010 in #2! This is my first time on "Most Discussed" so thanks for your comments!
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October 29, 2010 |
Can I be a Crimson guard Gunship Sergeant? |
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August 13, 2010 |
um yeah no roof not enough pieces. i said why i did what i did, in the introduction. just to let you know :) thanks for the comment. :) |
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June 30, 2010 |
could i have a role as a hero?if not ill take any other spot. |
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June 11, 2010 |
Quoting commander Ryan
OK ill be navy fleet commander
Um, sure. Don't rate it more than once. |
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June 11, 2010 |
OK ill be navy fleet commander |
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June 10, 2010 |
Quoting Deviss .
No, there's limited space for "real" characters in this comic, since most are bein g held at the beginning/ end of the story. The middle only has one..but I'm not saying who it is yet. :)
Is it you Deviss? And na, i won't be any other character, just make sure i'm in there. Thanks for including my character, though is it possible to link my name to my page? XD Thnx |
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June 10, 2010 |
Quoting commander Ryan
Why are some not avaliable
Yes, they are.
N/A= Not Any. |
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June 10, 2010 |
Why are some not avaliable |
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June 9, 2010 |
Quoting Shcuz the Crimson Guard™
Nice. I guess i'm playing me then.
No, there's limited space for "real" characters in this comic, since most are bein g held at the beginning/ end of the story. The middle only has one..but I'm not saying who it is yet. :) |
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June 9, 2010 |
Quoting Blast .
Nice but why does one of the guys in the main picture have my name?
Umm, sorry, I couldn't think of any others. :P I'll remove it if you mind though. :) |
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June 9, 2010 |
Quoting Elite Commander Rogue
Reme,ber. Rogue does not die. He is also a leader of a CG Assassin Squad called Night Bandits.
Um, okay.. |
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June 9, 2010 |
Nice but why does one of the guys in the main picture have my name? |
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June 9, 2010 |
Nice. I guess i'm playing me then. |
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June 9, 2010 |
Reme,ber. Rogue does not die. He is also a leader of a CG Assassin Squad called Night Bandits. |
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June 9, 2010 |
Quoting Matt The Backward One
Is this the same universe that the U.N.E. is in? I know that we rejected the CG, but I'm a bit interested and I possibly might want a role. Thanks!
Zylo's answered it for you.
If you may want a role, you can simply ask for a position. :)
EDIT: I'm probably going to get you a role for Only commanders/ high commanders. |
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Fish Teeth June 8, 2010 |
I don't know if you will let me have it but I would like the second archives worker. Thanks. |
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You really like to ignore my comments, don't you? Please listen to my other comments. |
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June 8, 2010 |
Quoting Fish Teeth
You really like to ignore my comments, don't you? Please listen to my other comments.
Sorry, it's hard to be able to listen on "everybody". You're now archives worker #2. |
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June 8, 2010 |
i would like anything really like a gunship Sergent hey if you need a bad guy or something that would be nice. |
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June 8, 2010 |
Quoting Elite Commander Rogue
I would like to be Technology researcher and Physical Combat Trainer. I hope to have a role. If these are declined. I'll take Archives Officer # 2. I would like to have a huge role in dogfights and battles. As well as have my own ship.
You're now a training facility commander :) |
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June 8, 2010 |
I would like to be Technology researcher and Physical Combat Trainer. I hope to have a role. If these are declined. I'll take Archives Officer # 2. I would like to have a huge role in dogfights and battles. As well as have my own ship. |
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Quoting Matt The Backward One
Is this the same universe that the U.N.E. is in? I know that we rejected the CG, but I'm a bit interested and I possibly might want a role. Thanks!
No, the CG is in the Xalaraxius galaxy, I don't know where the UNE is in the universe. If you guys have any questions about the CG, ask me or one of the other admins, I invented it. BTW Deviss, I'm so glad this got on the explore page! maybe this will let more people know about the CG! I should make a MOC about the CG too, and try to get on the explore page! |
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Is this the same universe that the U.N.E. is in? I know that we rejected the CG, but I'm a bit interested and I possibly might want a role. Thanks! |
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June 8, 2010 |
These positions are going quick!
Quoting commander Ryan
Can i be in?
Hmm, the only position left is the archives worker #2. That seem okay? I might make more positions. |
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June 8, 2010 |
Quoting commander Ryan
Can i be in?
Ok, what person do you want to be? |
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June 8, 2010 |
Sweet thanks |
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June 8, 2010 |
Can i be in? |
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Fish Teeth June 7, 2010 |
Can I be the Crimson Gaurd? Thanks. |
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Fish Teeth June 7, 2010 |
Can I be the Crimson Gaurd? Thanks. |
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June 7, 2010 |
Quoting CC-1792 Commander Trixe
Oh I forgot to mention that I am a moderator in the CG does that mean i can pick a higher rank???
Yes, yes it does. |
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Okay, I kinda expected that. Oh well, maybe I could die in an epic explosion or something :P |
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June 7, 2010 |
Quoting Josh B.
Nice! I really like your characters, and the group actually sounds really fun. I would love to be part of the comic, no matter the role. However, it would be awesome if you still made my guy a beast :P Anyways, I would also like to return the favor if you wish to be in either of my comics. I look forward to getting to know you better, and participating in the Crimson Guard.
Ok, thanks! I'll work you into the script, but most will either die/get out of the plot by the 1st or 2nd Part, until the end..
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June 7, 2010 |
Nice! I really like your characters, and the group actually sounds really fun. I would love to be part of the comic, no matter the role. However, it would be awesome if you still made my guy a beast :P Anyways, I would also like to return the favor if you wish to be in either of my comics. I look forward to getting to know you better, and participating in the Crimson Guard. |
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June 7, 2010 |
Quoting Fish Teeth
Can I be the Crimson Gaurd? Thanks.
Hmm, can you please choose some one else? Thanks. ;) |
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um. ok ill just be crimson guard. |
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June 7, 2010 |
Quoting CC-1792 Commander Trixe
Hey deviss I haven't seen you in awhile! Could I be a training facilities sergeant??? Nice squad I would like to see the instructions for that vehicle it's pretty sweet!
Training facility's already taken I need to update the page.. |
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June 7, 2010 |
Hey Deviss.Can I be one of those sargents or whatever.I,m already in the CG. |
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June 7, 2010 |
Hey Deviss.Can I be one of those sargents or whatever.I,m already in the CG. |
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Oh I forgot to mention that I am a moderator in the CG does that mean i can pick a higher rank??? |
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June 7, 2010 |
Hey deviss I haven't seen you in awhile! Could I be a training facilities sergeant??? Nice squad I would like to see the instructions for that vehicle it's pretty sweet! |
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June 7, 2010 |
Quoting Commander Fero
I just joined the CG. I was wondering if I could be in this comic? also what is the crimson guard all about?
Alright! You can be a part of the comic. Who do you want to be?
Anyways, the Crimson Guard is sorta a fictional sci-fi group that Zylo? I think created. We used to be put against 5 other empires at the same time, or somewhere near that. I'll probably make you a commander, for you to get int the enviroment better ;) |
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could i be crimson guard pilot
and just write oblo if yes
:)
you are one of my favourite builders |
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Or training facility Sergeant. Oh, and I am in the CG, I was Vanguard Lieutenant Bonno. |
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June 7, 2010 |
Sounds awesome. Love the characters, and I'd like to be a gunship sergeant please. Awesome, keep up the good work! |
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Quoting Deviss.
Thanks! By the lead commander, I meant like Advisor for objectives, missions, etc.
Righto, mate! I'll take that role then! thanks! |
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June 6, 2010 |
@Klay and Cade: You get the parts!
Quoting Zylo ™
This sounds AWESOME!!! great idea Deviss! and when this comes out it'll add more creations to the CG, and it looks a little better than the other MOCs. BTW I'd like to be a CG lead commander! (or High Commander, however you mean it).
Thanks! By the lead commander, I meant like Advisor for objectives, missions, etc. |
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June 6, 2010 |
This sounds AWESOME!!! great idea Deviss! and when this comes out it'll add more creations to the CG, and it looks a little better than the other MOCs. BTW I'd like to be a CG lead commander! (or High Commander, however you mean it). |
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June 6, 2010 |
Quoting Cade .
Oh. It says ground zero on the title so I just thought...
Oh. I was creating the name when I adding it..I was deciding between Ground X and Point Zero, and I guess it got caught in the middle XP |
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I would like to be gunship sergeant. |
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June 6, 2010 |
I'd like to be archives director, please. |
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Oh. It says ground zero on the title so I just thought... |
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June 6, 2010 |
Quoting Cade .
Is this based off of my idea of a comic about a planet called Ground Zero?
Sort of, Mine's "Point Zero", and if you read the description, you would know how it's different :P |
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June 6, 2010 |
Is this based off of my idea of a comic about a planet called Ground Zero? |
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