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2010 Star Wars MOC-off Tournament R4: The Force Unleashed
This is my Entry fot the tournament. This is a pretty long comic that took me a while to come up with, so your comments will let me know that I succeded. Even though this scene was not shown in the game you might have, the story I tell here ss another mission. This is just the story. If you want to see inside the buildings or see more, check out my other creation, Mos Eisley. Thanks.
About this creation


Setting the scene, the bystanders see the Imperials and Starkiller. Fearing there will be a confrontation, they start to flee.



Too close by, this vendor jumps fo cover, his merchandise thrown about.



Droid vendor hurries to escape, his droids close behind.
Sunbather: "Oh what now! Can't a gal enjoy a nice tanning day?! Oh, I guess... I guess I should leave now!"



Here you can see a moisture vaporator, and a vendor selling what appear to be lights. Meanwhile on the roof, the bounty hunter in black has missed his assignment. His target, the guy in red, has seen the Imperial confrontation and is fleeing.



Trooper #1: "Who is that guy!"
Trooper captain: "Whoever he is, he ain't friendly! Blast him!"
The Stormtroopers open fire, Starkiller deflects the shots.



Here you can see Everyone else fleeing. Wait, Is that Han and Chewie?
Sunbather: "I am soo out of here!"
Rooftop Bounty Hunter: "Blast it! Yet another ruined chance to get my bounty!"
Vendor: "Wait! You haven't paid yet!"
Ewok: "Aiiieeee aaaahh!"



Starkiller throws his saber, impalling the captain.
Trooper captain: "Ahhhhhh!"



Trooper #2: "Keep firing!"



Starkiller force pushes a stormtrooper.



Knocked down trooper: "Uhhh...." (He dies)



Starkiller slices stromtrooper across the chest.
Trooper #1: "Aieeee!"





Trooper #1 bleeds to death, cut in half. The remaining trooper fires and his shot is deflected.
Trooper #3: (over comm) "Send reinforcements to sector 9!"



Starkiller force chokes the unfortunate stormtrooper, silencing him.



Starkiller stands over his fallen enemies, unaware of the danger behind him.



Imperial Officer: "There he is! Kill him!"



Imperial Officer: "And send in the Shadow troopers..."



The shadow troopers appear on scene



Shadow trooper #1: "Stay close to the buildings, wait for the signal"
Shadow trooper #2: "Roger"



Imperial Officer: "Blast him!"



The shadow trooper looks cautiously around the building.



Starkiller reflects a shot back at a stormtrooper, killing him.



Shadow trooper #1: "Follow me"



Trooper #5: "Bring him down!"



Shadow trooper #1: "Get into position"



Starkiller force lifts another stormtooper into the air.
Lifted trooper: "What the..?!"



The stormtrooper is thrown into a stall post, killed instantly.



Shadow trooper #1: "Get ready...."



Shadow trooper #1: "Fire!"





Starkiller preforms a quick backflip...



...and lands safely on the Cantina roof.



Starkiller then picks up part of the roof...



... everyone takes cover...



...except for 3 foolish stormtroopers.



Wham! Two stormtroopers are flatened.



The two shadow troopers resume firing.



Starkiller launches himself off the roof...
Trooper: "Oh,...crap..."



...and impales the stormtrooper.
Starkiller then runs forward...



...and begins to start to force repulse.





Kaboom! Starkiller unleashes the force and kills the Imperial Officer and the rooftop stormtrooper.



Starkiller then turns around and uses force lightning to finish off the two Shadow troopers.



Starkiller: "All in a days' work"
He walks off... unharmed...



Comments

 I made it 
  June 21, 2010
Quoting Justin L. Wait a second...if the dude is a Sith, shouldn't he be on the same side as the stormtroopers?
Have you played the game?
 I made it 
  June 21, 2010
Quoting Justin L. Wait a second...if the dude is a Sith, shouldn't he be on the same side as the stormtroopers?
Have you played the game?
  June 20, 2010
Wait a second...if the dude is a Sith, shouldn't he be on the same side as the stormtroopers?
 I made it 
  May 6, 2010
Quoting Evan D Cool comic. Nice force effects. Hey, I was wondering about my score in the tournament, 23/30. I was just wondering what I could do to improve, for future reference.
Go to the group, and ask there.
 I like it 
  May 6, 2010
Cool comic. Nice force effects. Hey, I was wondering about my score in the tournament, 23/30. I was just wondering what I could do to improve, for future reference.
 I like it 
  May 6, 2010
Cool comic. Nice force effects. Hey, I was wondering about my score in the tournament, 23/30. I was just wondering what I could do to improve, for future reference.
 I like it 
  April 24, 2010
Nice this is a rly good TFU story! ur mos eisly looks rly cool! theres allot of details in it!the only probleam is that the pictures look alittle dark..its suppose 2 be sunny on mos eisly(unless this is suppose to happen at nigth) other then that great job! btw can u plz give me ur opinion on this? http://mocpages.com/moc.php/199193
 I like it 
  April 11, 2010
That's so good story! I love everything around the TFU 'universe'... Good job!
  April 11, 2010
Wow Michael, this is nice! The whole diorama is quite impressive but the topic is video games so I don't think that the whole comic was necessary. Try make up something more interesting next time, like Starkiller bringing a roof down on some troopers, the action in your comic was a bit plain.
 I like it 
  April 10, 2010
I replied to your comment - http://mocpages.com/moc.php/194249#reviews
 I made it 
  April 10, 2010
Quoting Philipp the all mighty 3 letters: WOW this is just awesome, the whole diorama is so detailed really good job on this one, and the comic is very cool, man this round will be hard.
Thank you. I suppose this round will be hard.
 I like it 
  April 10, 2010
Cool! I would change the force lightning effect, like the lightning piece. I also have a request to comment on one of my creations, if you have the time. My group is near being the 2nd largest Star Wars group on here... So... Yeah...
 I like it 
  April 10, 2010
Cool! I would change the force lightning effect, like the lightning piece. I also have a request to comment on one of my creations, if you have the time. My group is near being the 2nd largest Star Wars group on here... So... Yeah...
 I like it 
  April 10, 2010
3 letters: WOW this is just awesome, the whole diorama is so detailed really good job on this one, and the comic is very cool, man this round will be hard.
 
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