Edited for...sense.
About this creation

Alliance of Striker Admiral: What is it, General?
AOS General: Darx is here.
Admiral: What? How can you be sure?
General: Look how close we are to Lareum, Darx's home planet.

Admiral: Hmm...it's true. But we have a secret weapon. Wait.. what was that noise!
BOOM!

General: What? What is the secret weapon?

Admiral: You'll find out soon enough.

Trooper: Sir, the engines are failing. Darx starfighters are attacking.

General: Admiral! Reverse thrusters aren't coming on!
Admiral: Prepare an escape pod. One for me, an done for my friend here.

Assassin: Admiral.
Admiral: Good to have you here.
General: Who are you?
Assassin: Hmmph.

Trooper: Sir, all stabilizers are destroyed. We're going down.
WHOOSH! WHOOSH! WHOOSH! WHOOSH!
Admiral: What were those noises?
Trooper: Sir, those were the last escape pods. We're the only ones on the ship now.

Assassin: YOU SAID YOU PREPARED US ONE!
Trooper: I did, but- AHHH!

Assassin: YOU TRICKED ME! YOU JUST WANT TO KILL ME!
Admiral: I did no such thin-

*silence* (there's no sound in space)


Darx Trooper 1: BOOM! Headshot.
Darx Trooper 2: Nice shot, General Clay.
Clay: Thanks, Barry.
FOURTH WHATEVER COMMENTARY: This is my first time doing a commentary. But I thought this MOC needed one, in order to clear things up. First off, this is in no way how I feel about the AoS. In fact, I am friends with Shock, so I wouldn't make a MOC about killing him. These are made up people! Except for the Darx guys. They are just cool people. Secondly, I used green screen to make this. Pretty awesome, huh? Also, here's the sets:

The minifigs! From left to right, Klay, Grey Warden, Barry Sand Cream.

Here's the special red AOS minifigs.

Now, the AOS flagship! I was very pleased with this!

Here's the cross-section.

Front of the control module.

And the back.
Please rate, comment, and hope I win!
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I made it |
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May 1, 2010 |
Quoting Michael Qoyawayma
Go to the group United Groups for Greater Protection. You are needed there.
I'm there. |
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Go to the group United Groups for Greater Protection. You are needed there. |
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April 15, 2010 |
Quoting ? E.K.O ?
what does the part with not friends anymore mean?!?
You're still my friend. |
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what does the part with not friends anymore mean?!? |
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April 15, 2010 |
Quoting ? E.K.O ?
why?!?
So I don't have to add EVERYBODY who comments on my MOCs. |
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April 14, 2010 |
Quoting £ E.K.O £
why do you keep removing me from your favorite builders?!
I changed my favorite builders list to only my favorite builders. Not friends anymore. |
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why do you keep removing me from your favorite builders?! |
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why do you keep removing me from your favorite builders?! |
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I like it |
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April 10, 2010 |
Nice. 5. |
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I like it |
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April 10, 2010 |
Oh wait after reading this again i realised that i didnt blow it up. But i complemented you and thanks for including me. |
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I like it |
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April 10, 2010 |
lol very good lol |
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April 9, 2010 |
I don't think your supposed to put this up yet..but still good job! But..if I was in the contest, I would've made something a bit lenghthy-er and maybe showing Crimson Guards too..4/5 |
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BTW, the CG needs more team members before we can compete and officially put our entries in the contest, that's when they count. |
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April 9, 2010 |
nice photoshopping! |
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April 9, 2010 |
Even if I didn`t do nothin` in it, still pretty good. But I don`t laugh at anything, and I didn`t laugh at this. I mean, it`s funny, but I tend to do things in my head instead of out loud. But it made me smile. ~R.A. |
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April 9, 2010 |
Quoting Barry Sand Cream
YES I FINALLY BLOW SOMETHING UP! oh and by the way great creation!
Thanks, Barry. |
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YES I FINALLY BLOW SOMETHING UP! oh and by the way great creation! |
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April 9, 2010 |
Quoting Zylo ™
Haha! nice! I don't even care about being blown up, that was funny!
Thanks, Zylo! |
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I like it |
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April 9, 2010 |
Haha! nice! I don't even care about being blown up, that was funny! |
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