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[BRC] Telossen
My tallest MOC yet! With MOVABLE EYEBROWS!
About this creation
Name: Telossen
Race: Bio-Racer
Location: Veloco-Nui




"The current reigning champion of the combat races, Telossen is both feared and admired by many. He wins through the unique style he's developed over the years. He always starts last and finishes first. He's neither the fastest or the biggest Bio-Racer, but he is one of the strongest. His specialty is creating and upgrading weaponry with the minimal number of parts, and getting the maximum result.

He's very competitive, and will start a race with anyone, so long as it is a combat race. Outside of the races, he's a pretty friendly guy, except when his work is insulted. Then he's a bit dangerous. One hand is a bit corroded due to an accident when making a weapon. He's actually pretty knowledgeable about Veloco-Nui, second only to the official chronicler of Veloco-Nui. If you need to know something, ask him."

-John the Imaginative's description of Telossen.


Telossen's Axe. This would cut a car in half. And let's not mention the missiles...

Fists! ((The tumbs click into the top of the hand))

Side view.

Back view.

Arm design. Vestigial folding action on the shoulder armour...

Foot design. Note the retractable toe-blades. Feet can be clicked into arched and flat modes by moving the cheeks of the Metru head inside or outside those Hordika feet.

Torso design. "Jacket" pieces move as his shoulders move.

The back. Note the shoulder-support. Please give me credit if you want to use that! (The secret is to use lightsaber/wand pieces instead of rods)

"Hrmm?"

"I'LL KILL YOU!"

Another full body shot.

Shaking Hands. Telossen dwarfs a toa or matoran - in this case Shadow.

((Credits to:

  • Brent Sakaki (Greyhein) for inventing the Bio-Racer line.

  • John the Imaginative for creating Telossen, and his V2.

  • Supreme Commander Gideon Fucci for bringing Veloco-Nui to the BRC.

  • Jake Riedke (The Abyss) for creating the BRC (and the bad guys in the story)

  • Yuri Fassio for the waist design.

    This Telossen is based more off John's orignial version. I tried to make it so he could transform (hence the folding shoulders and the wheels on his arms), but this is built at a size I have never acheived before. Making legs that could transform AND hold him up completely flummoxed me... I used those giant Exo-Force clicky joints in the knees.))

    Telossen is my biggest MOC to date, but a lot of his features are inspired by B-57 Achilles, my previous Opus Magnum. Achilles is my only other MOC to have movable eyebrows. Expression in a MOC is very important to me: I spend ages on heads.

    Achilles would come up to Telossen's hips... come to think of it, Telossen here dwarfs Aesphor too!))



    "Keep on MOCing!"



Comments

 I like it 
  September 24, 2012
How does this not have a lot more likes?!? This is a great moc, man! I love the fact that he has custom designs all throughout his build. Strangely enough even though I haven't seen this moc before I was developing a system similar for the shoulder to arm piston for my self moc revamp. If it ends up being too similar I'll give you credit. I'm not sure how it will come out.
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  June 4, 2012
Frightening. You're my inspiration! 5/5
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  January 3, 2011
This guy looks epic! Gringat, your MOCs are just awesome.
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  September 16, 2010
I came back to check this amazing moc of yours once again,and a really cool music started to play.What's the name of it?
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  June 23, 2010
Awesome! Would probably make most of my MOCs look Tiny by comparison! Nice use of minifig hands as eyebrows too!
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  May 7, 2010
looks like a over size sideswipe from transformers. very cool looking as well.
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  April 2, 2010
Amazing MOC, the build and the design are really great, congratulations!
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  March 28, 2010
OMG this is certainly you best moc!I love it all man,you did an amazing job on him!
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  March 27, 2010
Thats a great looking moc, The feet are excellent
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  March 23, 2010
Hey man, You have some pretty good mechs, we have a pretty Large contest going on, with some well known builders, and prizes as well, you seem like a good mech Builder, which is what this contest needs, you should check it out. http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/11063
  March 18, 2010
insane!
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  March 18, 2010
0_0 wow, this is awesome! I love how it has wheeled feet and the awesome battle axe :D
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  March 18, 2010
...That does indeed dwarf Aesphor. Incredible build, Gringat. Those adjustable feet blew me away when I first realized their functionality. Well done!
 I like it 
  March 17, 2010
Excellent! Bravo! I thought you didn't like building giant creations. Well, you are great at it seeing your Telossen. This has made me envy to make my own bio racer and a spheroid myself to compete against yours. hehe.
 I like it 
  March 17, 2010
This is your best creation yet. I love the color.
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  March 17, 2010
I appreciate the detail and posability. The arms' proportions are a little off, though, and it would be cool if you gave more detailed descriptions on the weapons. i also don't see why you decided he would be a revamp and not your own character? Anyway, nice build.
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  March 17, 2010
AWESOME! I want to do a Bio-Racer too! They have been in my to-do list since the 2nd Triathlon :(
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  March 17, 2010
Woah. That's awesome!
  March 17, 2010
O_O epic
 I made it 
  March 17, 2010
Quoting Supreme commander Gideon Fucci When you get around to finishing Yayap (I'm being really good about not pushing for you to do him because of the head) I think It would be cool for you to build Xenith
I have found an idea for a Hynak head (I got inspired by one of Juine's MOCs), but I haven't worked on the idea yet. I need to finish Trescipius before doing anything else. I may make Yayap next. I may not. All depends on which ideas come to me. No guarantees. I just make 'em what the Hxll.
  March 17, 2010
O_O epic
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  March 17, 2010
When you get around to finishing Yayap (I'm being really good about not pushing for you to do him because of the head) I think It would be cool for you to build Xenith
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  March 17, 2010
awesoem mocs! has alot of detail and does look like it could transform at any second. probally one of your best yet, and most certainetly your biggest yet. i added some ne mocs and this new thing called bionicle fihgt club, so check it out if you are interested.
 I like it 
  March 17, 2010
Gringat, you do more than just justice to Telossen. Fxxx, you make him just as epic looking as I imagined him.
  March 17, 2010
eyebrow yes but eyes...? lots of nice techniques used on this one i realy do like it. love the feet though...you`d realy want to wear a cup arround this guy :P music realy fits!...now for the god father! TACHYON!! MWAHAHAHAHA...i gotta make him...:P
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  March 17, 2010
:O .... Great! I`m not too sure about the claw hands though. Still, it was worth waiting for.
 
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