MOCathalon Entry for the Mech Category. Built by Total Annihilation.
About this creation
The mech itself.
The left wing.
The right wing.
The back of the mech.
Deep in the under-levels of Saneldia, the capital of Sanel IV, a C.O.P. Tormenter mech created by Sanel IV stalks through the courtyard and some terrorists try to stop it before it kills them and their cronies.
An AA unit (see more pictures below) is shooting CPF-136s, and them pilots are not happy. Under the barrels, a C.O.P. Counter Terrorism Unit was shot and killed, but not before arming his explosive on the AA gun.
An auto-turret has gunned down a C.O.P. Counter-Terrorism Unit and is now gunning for the mech. Though it too, will soon not fire again.
The only living terrorist alive, the leader too, is trying to shoot the mech. Pity he'll probably end up like his buddy.
Might recognize thissun if you have a Flickr and look at my photos. A dead person lies on a pile of rubble.
A fountain spews flame where water once sprung, and a dead body is laying in it.
A C.O.P. Tormenter-class Mech walks done the courtyard, scaring the crap out of terrorists, civvies, drunks, druggies, C.O.P. Marines, U.N.E. sissies, and school girls since 2281.
An auto-turret. Yea, it sucks, but I needed something that would add to the MOC that wouldn't look crap.
Some weird old AA gun I made to fit on the dio. It shoots some kind of projectile, that got super-heated so it turned blue. Yea, we all make mistakes.
"D'ya hear about the new leader?"
"Get this, he used to bag groceries for Wal-Mart."
"What a loser!"
Finally, it's over. I've had half of this mech sitting in my room since Valentine's Day and I am happy to get rid of it. I stayed with it for almost a month, I don't even want to have a baby for 9 months, that be like self-inflicted head explosions.
No need to apologize for anything you build! Just because you get a low score doesn't mean you're doing anything bad, just that it needs improving. I'm sure that part of the problem for you is a limited amount of bricks, something a lot of young builders have to deal with. I can see you doing the best you can with what you have and that's what matters! Keep plugging away, collecting LEGO and improving your technique by studying what other people do. I'm glad you joined the contest and hopefully what you learn now, will help you in the future.~H
March 6, 2010
It's good. I like the body, great SNOT work and other small details. The only thing that REALLY bugs me is the legs. There just bricks stacked on top of each other. Try adding some joints and some feet to it, and then it'll be good. 3/5.
In reply to all who have commented on the Legs:
I apologize for the lack of awesome in those legs. I tried for four to five hours trying to make a technic leg, but in the end, I didn't have enough technic to finish it or it wouldn't stand, so I just went the easy way out and made block legs. Again, I'm sorry.