Awesome chapter! I liked the music. Do you mind if I use it in one of my comics? I hope you will continue to use music in your future chapters.

Awesome chapter! I liked the music. Do you mind if I use it in one of my comics? I hope you will continue to use music in your future chapters.

Awesome! Nice conclusion to the first part.

I'm still impressed by the forest effect. Oh and i like the mix of action and comedy.

Poor Moris. See ya next episode. garth

Ice job, great action!

Hm... the action was good, but I think the music was a bit unfitting this time around. Try to look for less cliche songs. This one feels like it should have been a little calmer than it was, some parts more than others. The choir was kinda overkill :( Here's my advice: look for songs that dont keep the same tone and feel the same throughout the whole thing. Have some variety in it, and make sure that the tone follows that of the comic.