hmmm i think a name for the planet could be arnardah [prnounces are nah dar] and the battle could be "the battle of beidoe" as beidoe could be the capital city [beidoe prnnounced be dough]

Well, it could be alot of planets. Use wookiepedia V http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Main_Page for reference for planets. Just look up "Planets" in the search box. Anyways, onto the MOC, it's okay... Some work and you could make some pretty good dios!

I was originally making Christophis, but I decided to make it a bit different, so It can be water or ground.

I think it looks a little like christophsis...unless that blue is water?