I just asked for constructive criticism.

cool! i liked the greebles and fireturret the most! you got a comment from mark kelso?! your lucky...

Not too bad - I like the detail, but I felt like the 2nd pic looked a bit too "crowded".

Nice concept for the build. I've left a few tips for next time back in the Advice group, but I might also suggest putting your creation in an area with some natural light if you can.(not direct sunlight, but in an area where it's reflected) I think that will help your presentation some. Meanwhile, good work, and keep building!

For one, it's good to have a central focus on the MOC, otherwise it's hard to tell what's going on. Keep it up!

Awesome battle scene, great detail in it. I loves the detail. Especially the flickfire piece of metal. Amazing moc! ~Waff