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Team Juvenile delinquents MOC Athalon entry to the Short story Category
About this creation
The year is 2050, the earth is a ravaged place, after years of fighting, Zombies, ad alien sightings, the earth is finally returning to normal. As normal as it gets after all those things. The earth is populated with Creatures, of hideous, and beautiful sorts. Most of them are seeking after one thing. The ARK Reactor. ARK stands for: Andronuis Rexo Kolinite. Created form rare substances still felt on earth this reactor produces power enough to run the entire worlds electric system for 100 years. It is a source of unspeakable Wealth and power. But now the Baron of Cycronuis Has discovered its hiding place. The underground laboratory of Doctor Hybrminide, he is willing to do anything to get it. Along with his faceless clones, he will get it, or die trying, this is the story.



Upon arriving in the Laboratory, The baron, gets right to the point. "Doctor Hybrminide, we know you have the ARK reactor, and we want it". "Is there anything you would be willing to part with it for". "Baron, if the ARK Was to fall into the wrong hands, the world could be destroyed"! Said the Doctor as he backed against the wall. "This is no use" Said the Baron he input the commands through his chairs thought interface control. "Kill him". The clones upon receiving the message, took his gun, and shot the doctor through the chest throwing him against the wall and onto the floor. Blood was every were.



"Shoot his computer" was the Barons next plan, the guard pointed his gun at the computer and pulled the trigger..



The bullet ricocheted of the Impenetrable substance of the computer and hit the guard in the chest, he fell to the floor blood shooting out of the deadly wound.



"Find it the baron hissed at the other guard" The guard walked up and kicked the bodies out of the way, the injured guard moaned, the second guard ignored him. He started to go through the files of the computer, "here we go" he said to the baron as he walked over to the computer on the opposite wall.



Typing through the files, "Come to papa" The guard whispered to himself as files started to flash across the screen faster and faster, until *beep*, *beep*. "FILE FOUND" The computer chirped out to him. "And it should be right here", he said as automatic locks slid away from a small balck circle object. "Is this what you wanted baron?" "Yes, please slide it into the slot in the back of my chair".





"Amazing" the Guard said as he stared at the Barons hover chair slowly rise from the ground. "Were to next Baron sir"? The Guard asked as he stood by the computer. "Sorry, but you aren't going anywhere" The Baron said as he whipped out an automatic pistol,a and shot the guard through the chest. "The guard slumped to the floor and looked pleadingly at the Baron. "I didn't want to have to kill you" The Baron said. "But If you knew there would be more of a chance of the secret getting out". "So I'm sorry, but this is the end of the line for you". Said the Baron as he Zipped the chair out of the laboratory door. Leaving the laboratory covered in crimson.




Shots of the Lab without min-figs or blood or heads in jars. =)

Sorry judges, I still haven't found my camerae, and to Dave, I put it one something this time to steady it, not much of a difference I can see. Its really weird when I hold it, the screen looks perfect but when I take the photo its super blurry, any Ideas?



Comments

 I like it 
  March 24, 2010
Wow, I really like it, a good MOC that also tells a great story, very nice work mate!
 I made it 
  March 24, 2010
Quoting Bernardo BLITZ Silva very awesome, super well built vig and the story is not to shaby either, nice work dude
Thanks man!
 I like it 
  March 24, 2010
very awesome, super well built vig and the story is not to shaby either, nice work dude
 I made it 
  March 10, 2010
Quoting kallo mavak I like it.4/5.By the way,could you check this out please? http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/191097
Thanks, and sure
 I like it 
  March 5, 2010
This one is also great.
 I like it 
  March 5, 2010
Excellent work! I like it.
 I like it 
  February 27, 2010
I like the MOC, but I didn't agree much with the whole story represented in only one set. 2 points.
 I made it 
  February 27, 2010
Quoting -Condor - Great job, but how come theres a shredder Megablock head? For that i must give you a 4/5
I thought it was bioncle, oh well, sorry
 I like it 
  February 26, 2010
Yeah, the other judges are giving good advice on the pictures. For me to award more points, I need to see a larger set, or at least one more at the level of this beautiful set. 3 points.
 I like it 
  February 26, 2010
Great job, but how come theres a shredder Megablock head? For that i must give you a 4/5
 I like it 
  February 26, 2010
At least it sounds like you are trying to fix your photography issues and are aware that there are problems. Nice build and a readable story. Three (3) points. Lee.
 I made it 
  February 26, 2010
Quoting Chris Phipson I really liked the holding cell and the chair. Nice work on the story too! Good one! ~ Chris.
My first comment from Chris, How Exciting! Thanks Chris!
 I like it 
  February 26, 2010
I really liked the holding cell and the chair. Nice work on the story too! Good one! ~ Chris.
 I made it 
  February 26, 2010
Quoting Farhan Salman Woa. Awesome green thingy details.
Supposed to be an electric holding cell for subjects to be tortured electrocuted etc.
 I like it 
  February 26, 2010
Wow, really werid.
 I like it 
  February 26, 2010
Woa. Awesome green thingy details.
 
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