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2010 MocAthalon, Group, The Underdogs, Category, Clonewars- Name, Battle of Wiskypeak
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Time for an attempt. Well, I guess genaric... My camara has yet to light up more... FUDGE! I FORGOT ABOUT LARGE PHOTOS! @$#%$@%$#^$%^@$#%$^@$^@%$^%$#^@$^@34
About this creation

This is me. I am part of the 435th squadron. We are in charge of defending this outpost until reinforcements arrive.

This turret is outta ammo, so we have very few supplys...

Commander: "Incoming raider attack! Battle positions!"

*THAP!!!!* Me: "Commander's down!" Clone behind me: "Here they come!"

We beguin to mow down the first attackers.

The clone behind me gets revenge for the commander...

And another one bites the dust...

Me: "ENEMY HEVEY! TAKE 'IM OUT!"

Raider with black cap: "GAK!"

Waves after waves of enemies advance... One Raider shoots the guy by the turret, but-

His comrade gets revenge! PWNED111

But it was futile, for more just kept coming...

*FWOOOSH . . . . -KA-BOOM!* Raiders: "GAK!" "GARRA!" "ARGGG!" "AAAAAAAA"

YES! REINFORCEMENTS!!!

435th regulars

435th spec ops

Raiders


Diorama



Comments

 I made it 
  February 23, 2010
Quoting Lee Jones Blurry, out of focus, and grainy pics - I have to ask: are you using a web-cam for these pics? For once, I am not docking any points for the picture quality, just on the off chance you are using a web-cam. As for the build, there are some nice elements in there (like the first gun), but the rest was all jumbled together, and not in a good way. One (1) point. Lee.
It's a DSX something 7000 I think.
  February 22, 2010
Blurry, out of focus, and grainy pics - I have to ask: are you using a web-cam for these pics? For once, I am not docking any points for the picture quality, just on the off chance you are using a web-cam. As for the build, there are some nice elements in there (like the first gun), but the rest was all jumbled together, and not in a good way. One (1) point. Lee.
 I made it 
  February 20, 2010
Quoting A Member Since December 7, 2007, Jake Parkinson ...Hey Keith, He still has two. two, two, and two average out closer to two, so he has two.
... -.-"
 I like it 
  February 20, 2010
...Hey Keith, He still has two. two, two, and two average out closer to two, so he has two.
 I made it 
  February 20, 2010
Quoting Keith Goldman Score of 1. You predicted my score correctly, this is a mess Noah. I see what you were trying to do, but i think you should have taken more time and added both detail and variety to this MOC. Battle scenes are difficult to make both interesting and clear.
And I do belive I wasted your time, eh?
 I made it 
  February 19, 2010
Quoting -Condor - Great Job! I'm glad your one of the few people who use the line "And another one bites the dust" Great job! I hope you do well! And when you have a moment could you check this out?- http://mocpages.com/moc.php/187258
Ok, cool. ;)
 I made it 
  February 19, 2010
Quoting Yuri Fassio You managed to build in theme, unlike some others in this category, and the dio/story also has a certain raw appeal to it. I thought about giving it more, but since you come from an english-speaking country and already are a TFOL, perfectly capable of using the necessary skills and technology to build, shoot and upload your MOC, you're getting 2 points from me. And I'm not talking about the small pictures, they didn't influence my rating.
YAY!!1!! Anywho, thanks for the vote, too. Now, I am worried about Keith's, probbably a one.
 I made it 
  February 19, 2010
Quoting Dave Kaleta The build is of decent quality, and the pictures are fine. I was a little disappointed with the story. Star Wars is usually narrated in a third-person over-the-top melodramatic way (just look at some of those ridiculous crawls). If the writing had been stylistically different, I could see awarding more points. As it stands, I award 2 points to this creation.
Oh, I guess I could have tried harder, but alas... Thanks for the points anywho.
 I made it 
  February 19, 2010
Quoting Commander Calle (a.k.a. Tyler Halliwell) . Cool. Good job Finn. I don't know if this is the moc athalon caliber the judges are looking for, but I like it. Good Job. I am working on my mech now.
Good, and, the story was rushed, cause I was leaving for somewhere, oh well...
 I made it 
  February 19, 2010
Quoting A Member Since December 7, 2007, Jake Parkinson Very nice diaroma, I like those raiders.
Thanks
 I like it 
  February 19, 2010
Great Job! I'm glad your one of the few people who use the line "And another one bites the dust" Great job! I hope you do well! And when you have a moment could you check this out?- http://mocpages.com/moc.php/187258
 I like it 
  February 19, 2010
You managed to build in theme, unlike some others in this category, and the dio/story also has a certain raw appeal to it. I thought about giving it more, but since you come from an english-speaking country and already are a TFOL, perfectly capable of using the necessary skills and technology to build, shoot and upload your MOC, you're getting 2 points from me. And I'm not talking about the small pictures, they didn't influence my rating.
 I like it 
  February 19, 2010
The build is of decent quality, and the pictures are fine. I was a little disappointed with the story. Star Wars is usually narrated in a third-person over-the-top melodramatic way (just look at some of those ridiculous crawls). If the writing had been stylistically different, I could see awarding more points. As it stands, I award 2 points to this creation.
  February 19, 2010
Cool. Good job Finn. I don't know if this is the moc athalon caliber the judges are looking for, but I like it. Good Job. I am working on my mech now.
 I like it 
  February 19, 2010
Very nice diaroma, I like those raiders.
 
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