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Star Wars: The Clone Wars Episode 4 "Criminal Minds"
Qua-Cor learns of his unknown heritage...
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A long, long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...





You will only find what you search for.


As war spreads, innocent planets are taken by the evil Separatist droid army who are resolute in their fight for the upper hand. After loosing his Clone Commander and apprentice, Qua-Cor Peala leaves Geonosis to save Master Eeth Koth.

After being called away to the farm world of Dantooine, Qua-Cor's fleet is attacked by the droid army. Eeth Koth is captured and eventually rescued by Master Adi Gallia and Anakin Skywalker.

General Anakin Skywalker's fleet arrives at the world from Saleucami to help fight off the droids. After being captured by the dreaded droid general Grievous, Qua-Cor escapes and heads toward the planet to help lead the attack that general Kenobi is forcefully commanding...





The battle rages on Dantooine...






A clone soldier is pushed backwards by a blast...


A swamp speeder arrives carrying General Peala...





Obi-Wan Kenobi: "It's seems you've finally arrived."
Qua-Cor Peala: "I thought you'd need a little help."
Obi-Wan Kenobi: "A little?!"


Qua-Cor Peala:"Well, maybe a lot."
(Qua-Cor slices the droid commander)
OOM 45:"No! Please, no!"








Qua-Cor:"That wasn't so bad was it?"
Obi-Wan Kenobi:"You weren't here for most of it."


Qua-Cor Peala:"What about Grievous? Did he escape...again?"
Obi-Wan Kenobi:"Well yes. Me and Captain Korbel here, saw him flying away from a small farming community. We went after him but he was reinforced."
Qua-Cor:"This brings us back were we started."
Obi-Wan Kenobi:"I don't suppose your going to help me clean up this mess?"
Qua-Cor Peala:"I would but I have to report to the Council."


Obi-Wan Kenobi:"Ah, the Council report. I suppose I'll see you later then?"
Qua-Cor Peala:"You bet! Farewell Obi-Wan and may the Force be with you."



Obi-Wan Kenobi:"May the Force be with you too my friend."



(Coruscant a few hours later)

Ahsoka Tano:"Thanks for taking me out for a while Master Peala."
Qua-Cor Peala:"Your very welcome young one, I needed a break from fighting."
Ahsoka Tano:"A few days ago, I got back from a medical faculty orbiting Ord Cestus."
Qua-Cor Peala:"So I heard, you had to save your friend?"
Ahsoka Tano:"Sort of."


Qua-Cor Peala:"Ahsoka, how many battles have you been in?"
Ahsoka Tano:"I'm not really sure. I know I've been in over twenty."
Qua-Cor Peala:"Would you agree with me that the droids are easy to destroy?"
Ahsoka Tano:"Well yes, but the reason they win battles is because they are dispatched in large battle groups."


Qua-Cor Peala:"Ahsoka the Separatists aren't a very big threat. There is a threat greater than any. If they joined this war, we would be fighting for a very long time."
Ahsoka Tano:"Who are they?"
Qua-Cor Peala:"They are the Mandalorians. A few months ago, before the war, me and a few other Jedi were sent to destroy what was left of the Mandalorians. A few survived but most of them died. I've been dreaming about that day for days now."


Ahsoka Tano:"Let's hope they never get involved."
Qua-Cor:"The council has told me that a criminal named Roroth Geath has been buying items black market. He's been buying mostly large loads of death sticks. He even ordered DC 15S blasters from Kamino. He's also been speaking to corrupt senators right here on Coruscant."




Qua-Cor Peala:"He's a Zabrak and wears a durasteel cap."
Ahsoka Tano:"I think that's him over there."


Qua-Cor Peala:"Excuse me sir, could I speak to you for a moment?"
Roroth Geath:"I guess."


Roroth Geath:"Listen do I owe you credits or something?"
Qua-Cor Peala:"No but you do owe the Republic some blasters."
Roroth Geath:"Ah! Your a Jedi aren't you. I didn't mean any harm, Pre Vizsla promised he would pay me fifteen thousand if I shipped the weapons to him!"
(Qua-Cor looks at Ahsoka and she shrugs her shoulders.)

(Qua-Cor grabs Geath's wrists and pulls them behind his back)

Qua-Cor Peala:"So...who was the last Senator you spoke to Geath?"
Roroth Geath:"Passel Argente."
Qua-Cor Peala:"Ah, the leader of the Corporate Alliance."

(Geath pushes Qua-Cor back and takes his lightsaber)

Qua-Cor:"AAH! My lightsaber!"


Ahsoka Tano:"Don't worry Master, I'll get it back."


Ahsoka Tano:"I know what it's like to loose a weapon."





(Ahsoka knocks the lightsaber out of Geath's hand)

Roroth Geath:"All right, I give up. But this isn't the last time you'll see me. Vizsla will hear of this!"

(Qua-Cor walks Geath down the street to a prison complex)




(The next morning)

Qua-Cor Peala:"Captain Korbel, you should have seen her, she beat him like a Rokarian dirtfish."
Captain Korbel:"This apprentice? Sir, I don't believe you."
Qua-Cor Peala:"She did, you ask her yourself."


Shop Owner:"Can I get you something?"
Qua-Cor Peala:"We don't drink."
Shop Owner:"Anything, food, intelligence, anything you'd like. I saw you last night...good work."


Qua-Cor Peala:"Well, what can you tell me about Roroth Geath?"
Shop Owner:"He used to come here all the time. I made lots of credits off him. He worked for a crime lord I think. One of his friends also worked for the lord."
Qua-Cor Peala:"Where does this guy live?"
Shop Owner:"He lives on Dantooine, but his boss sends him here often. He told me yesterday that he was evacuated for some type of battle."


Qua-Cor Peala:"Thank you sir."
Shop Owner:"Your very welcome...Jedi."


Qua-Cor:"Admiral Yularen."
Admiral Yularen:"Yes General Peala?"
Qua-Cor Peala:"Tell General Kenobi to stay at that homestead we were fighting on. The man who lives there can provide some valuable intelligence. I'll be there soon."
Admiral Yularen:"Yes General."

(The homestead on Dantooine)

Obi-Wan Kenobi:"Hello?"
(knock) (knock) (knock)


Unknown Man:"What is it, what is it?"




Obi-Wan Kenobi:"You are under arrest sir, for working with a criminal found on Coruscant."
Obi-Wan Kenobi:"I'd like you to show me around your...strangely large home."


Unknown Man:"Well, this is my stable, I use it to house my eopies and nerfs."

(Qua-Cor arrives)

Qua-Cor Peala:"That's enough Obi-Wan, you go back home and rest, I was assigned to this case and I'll ask the questions."


Qua-Cor Peala:"Remember your friend Geath?"
Unknown Man:"Geath? He wasn't my friend, I worked with him."
Qua-Cor Peala:"I sense you are not lying. I sense nothing evil in you."

(A rolling sound is heard a few meters away)



Unknown Man:'Hurry! Hide in my shed!"
Qua-Cor Peala:"What? Why?"
Unknown Man:"I'm trying to protect you. Just wait until I call."





Unknown Man(muffled):"Governor Vizsla, how are you?"
Governor Vizsla:"I've had enough Peala. I heard that the Jedi have discovered your work you've done for me."
Unknown Man:"yes, but I'll send them away so you don't have to worry."
Governor Vizsla:"AAAAh!"

(A strange sword sound is heard)

Ahsoka Tano:"Oh no!


Qua-Cor Peala:"Are you ok sir? What happened?"
Unknown Man:"Son, I am your father. I never thought I'd see you again."
Qua-Cor Peala:"Father? Somehow I knew."
Jacob Peala:"Son, looks me up in your Jedi archives, I (gasp) Death Watch."


Qua-Cor Peala:"Father...if only I knew. I could have saved you."
Ahsoka Tano:"I'm so sorry."

(Qua-Cor and Ahsoka lift up Qua-Cor's father)


(They bury him at his homestead)




The End

Staring Qua-Cor Peala as Qua-Cor Peala, Ahsoka Tano as Ahsoka Tano, Jacob Peala as Jacob Peala, and Governor Vizsla as Governor Vizsla.

This episode was originally going to be shorter, but at the last moment, I took more pictures.

Read, rate, and comment!

THIS SEASON IS FINISHED! I AM THINKING OF STARTING ON A NEW ONE! YAY!



Comments

 I like it 
  September 5, 2010
where is episode 5
  June 12, 2010
cool. whens the next comic coming? i saw this comic in febuary and i keep checking back hoping for it to come. i hope you post it soon.
 I like it 
  May 18, 2010
Hey dude no offense but we waited a long time for episode 5 season 2 is already over I'm not rushing you but every month I cross my fingers and pray that you have episode 5 up and running, and when I see you don't, I feel dissapointed. So please hurry, but I'm not rushing you. Remember that. I can tell you are still thinking of ideas.
 I like it 
  May 8, 2010
make more,please!
 I like it 
  May 4, 2010
Great job! I liked this episode. And, it's episode V all over again, Death Watch form! lol
 I made it 
  March 16, 2010
Quoting Billy Bob Are you going to make an episode 5?
There's a whole more 19 episodes left in this season!
 I like it 
  February 28, 2010
Wow, thats amazing! You should make the next episode with Pre Visla fighting Qua Cor with his darksaber. PS check out my MOCs
 I made it 
  January 31, 2010
Quoting Tyler Evans great job man, gee your camera skills have improved alot. and im guessing that the dark piccs were supposed to be night time. please check out my stuff, and keep em coming.
Actually it can be bright outside on Coruscant and it be dark in the underworld. Those large skyscrapers cast a large shadow. Thanx.
 I made it 
  January 31, 2010
Quoting Juan C. Cool comic, but I must protest aboyt 2 things: "The separatist's aren't a very big threat" apparently they are big enough of a threat to rally (to quote Wookieepedia) at least ten thousand star systems, and jedi don't bury the dead, they cremate them (Qui-Gon, Anakin Skywalker) But it's a pretty good comic, although the farmer being tQua-Cor's father seems a bit like a last minute adition. P.S I really like those custom minifigs.
Well Qua-Cor's father, was actually made first. I wanted him to meet his father. But I wasn't able to make the story I wanted. Qua-Cor was going to talk more and investigate his fathers house.
 I made it 
  January 31, 2010
Quoting swash buckler Very good comic- you kept the logic with canon very well- however those two things Juan already mentioned- jedi cremate dead not bury them and Separatists are big threat- not for the jedi but army of original Battledroids can easily win the small army- as seen in episode 1- there is droidekas and now there is Sbd:s and stuff and seps are very powerful so they underestimated them and overestimated the mandalorian threat- mandos are very powerful but their numbers are low...
I know they cremate them, but Anakin burried his mom. In Attack of the Clones, you see Anakin standing in front of two stone tablets. One is his mom, and the other is I don't know. Well, the Mandalorian warriors are very skilled, but they are more powerful than a separatist droid army. And those lines were supposed to introduce the Mando's and also tell you that Qua-Cor's dream of the day he fought the Mando's was to alarm him of what's to come.
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  January 30, 2010
lol! Roroth Geath has a drug probleam(death sticks) :p and I c uv been watching allot of clone wars episodes :P hehe...
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  January 30, 2010
really a good story at least better then mine!! :)
 I like it 
  January 30, 2010
Very good comic- you kept the logic with canon very well- however those two things Juan already mentioned- jedi cremate dead not bury them and Separatists are big threat- not for the jedi but army of original Battledroids can easily win the small army- as seen in episode 1- there is droidekas and now there is Sbd:s and stuff and seps are very powerful so they underestimated them and overestimated the mandalorian threat- mandos are very powerful but their numbers are low...
 I like it 
  January 30, 2010
Cool comic, but I must protest aboyt 2 things: "The separatist's aren't a very big threat" apparently they are big enough of a threat to rally (to quote Wookieepedia) at least ten thousand star systems, and jedi don't bury the dead, they cremate them (Qui-Gon, Anakin Skywalker) But it's a pretty good comic, although the farmer being tQua-Cor's father seems a bit like a last minute adition. P.S I really like those custom minifigs.
 I like it 
  January 30, 2010
great job man, gee your camera skills have improved alot. and im guessing that the dark piccs were supposed to be night time. please check out my stuff, and keep em coming.
 I like it 
  January 30, 2010
This comic is really awesome, Good Work!
 I like it 
  January 29, 2010
man,thats awesome!!!!!I like the twist at the end.Im guessing you've watched season 2s episode 11.Anyway,keep up the good work!!!!!
 I made it 
  January 29, 2010
Quoting Commander Fero Wow awesome story but I think this could be split into like 3 parts. other than that I love all the fighting!
Yeah, I just like my stories to have more story in them. I like them longer. I can't wait until Mandalore Plot! I heard that they are showing the first black bladed lightsaber.
 
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