Quoting James Theodore
The guy below me is right. That face is for a male fig. Try adding some red as if she used lipstick :)
Not bad, but one star less, since you could come up with a background story.
A- She hates makeup. I figured the torso and hair was enough to show as female. B- As for backstories
http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/171049 http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/159284 and there is more but I'm not telling the whole story just yet.