I like this alot, but you should try to use commers and full stops.

i like this thing! it's a cool little transport and you used pieces in unusual ways. and one final thing, more pictures is usually a good thing, details and side/top/back views help show off all the great parts of the moc, i know that with small mocs lots of pictures can get repetitive, but a few more wouldn't hurt. good job!

Neat SP, though some feats of your 1st are missing, it still looks good :)

thanks im just about to put it on the group

Pretty cool! It reminds of the STAP from Star Wars, which I happen to have a Steampunk version of. Nicely done, and nice use of bionicle parts. Love too see this in All MOCs Steampunk.