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A War Torn Planet: Episode 1 "The Beginning"
My Moc-Off entry against Juan C.
About this creation
Moc-Off Round: 1
Opponent: Juan C.
Category: Comic


The year, is 2050. The Earth has been torn by war, and healed by sucess. Technology has been created that was never thought possible. Hover cars, jetpacks, weapons. Unfortunately, extremists and terrorists have been searching for weapons and power. Terrorist gangs and groups have found what they wanted, and the US Government is out to put an end to his.



Inside a captured terrorist base, US technicians work on new technology.

Sergeant Ryan: (Holding tool) "Well Liuetenant, I think the war is on it's turning point here."
Liuetenat Blake: (Behind Ryan) "Why Sir?"



Ryan: "Take a look at this."
Sergeant Ryan shows Blake up a robotic piece of technology.
Blake: "What does it do?"
Ryan: "This willl change warfare as we know it. This is part of a robot, this is basically it's brain. If we can manufacture these, than we can change the outcome of the war."



Blake takes a look at some other pieces of technology.



Blake picks a piece up.



Ryan nods at Blake, he knew this was going to put an advantage over the terrorists.



It's 2075 now. War has torn across the world, but the US has finally manufactured its key weapon.



Soldier: (Standing) "Ahh! Private? Private! Are you alright?"
He gets nothing from him, he is dead.



He makes a break for the edge...



But the turret almost hits him.



Soldier: (Talking into comlink) "Commande, this is MK25. Please send backup. I'm hit, and they have reinforcements!"
Terrorist (Yells) "Watch it, one more word and your dead."



Command ship: "Initiating drop sequence...now."



Mech: (Fell from ship) "Commencing termination."



The US was in the lead, but they had a long way to go to win the war.



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Comments

Awe .
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James Hawke
  February 4, 2010
Is this the Marines or Army? I think Marines but it's your story!
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  January 8, 2010
Awesomeness!
 I made it 
  December 30, 2009
Quoting Timothy VS Wait! Awesomeness, I have an idea for episode 2! The enemy (red) sends in there OWN mech! Double battle. The enemy's flamethrower is stronger then the USA's mech, so the mech exploded for over-fire. But then A soldier from the US (green) comes in and is holding a Glock 26 (futuristic verson of the Glock 17) and shoots it at a wing of the enemy's (red) commander ship! Then it lands on the mech, but strangely, no explosion. Then in 2076, before the US do anything, they go to the funeral of the dead soldier. Then the enemy is research the depths of secrets of the USA soldiers. They find out about the robot brain, then they make a satelitte that turns all US robots to the enemy. The US thinks it is just a glitch in the brains, but then they figure out the imperial satelitte. They decide to make brand new weapons, and of course, make robots with a DIFFERENT brains that can't be sabotaged by the enemy! Then they pick up there weapons and vehicles and get to the war, but both teams wonder if they both are ready. The End.
Wow, great idea! But I have my own ideas. Thanks anyway!
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  December 26, 2009
The soldiers are absolutely great. Though they look like they belong to the same team. The action shots are sweet. All in all, great job! ~M
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  December 25, 2009
Please add this to the MOC-Off. Also, I think you should spell-check the title. Plus, tell Juan (I don't have alot of time) that judging of all MOCs (to make things suspenseful) would be after the THIRD round.
  December 20, 2009
Wait! Awesomeness, I have an idea for episode 2! The enemy (red) sends in there OWN mech! Double battle. The enemy's flamethrower is stronger then the USA's mech, so the mech exploded for over-fire. But then A soldier from the US (green) comes in and is holding a Glock 26 (futuristic verson of the Glock 17) and shoots it at a wing of the enemy's (red) commander ship! Then it lands on the mech, but strangely, no explosion. Then in 2076, before the US do anything, they go to the funeral of the dead soldier. Then the enemy is research the depths of secrets of the USA soldiers. They find out about the robot brain, then they make a satelitte that turns all US robots to the enemy. The US thinks it is just a glitch in the brains, but then they figure out the imperial satelitte. They decide to make brand new weapons, and of course, make robots with a DIFFERENT brains that can't be sabotaged by the enemy! Then they pick up there weapons and vehicles and get to the war, but both teams wonder if they both are ready. The End.
 I made it 
  December 20, 2009
Quoting Rayce Gunnar I like the story! Truly creative! And to Rusty, I believe the Mwch is supposed to be flimsy due to the fact it's the first of it's kind.
Correct!
 I made it 
  December 20, 2009
Quoting dudecoolperson s how do you stick the visor to the shoulder?
Look at the terorist with the red armor and you should be able to figure it out. http://www.mocpages.com/image_zoom.php?mocid=173078&id=/user_images/28362/12612339912 Hope this helps!
 I made it 
  December 20, 2009
Quoting Timothy VS Excellent, great story, but why did you have to call out the year? It just gives me the creeps.
Yeah, thats true... it is a little creepy!
Awe .
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James Hawke
  December 19, 2009
I love this storyline!
Awe .
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Commander Inferno
  December 19, 2009
Amazing.....
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  December 19, 2009
Excellent, great story, but why did you have to call out the year? It just gives me the creeps.
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  December 19, 2009
I like the story! Truly creative! And to Rusty, I believe the Mwch is supposed to be flimsy due to the fact it's the first of it's kind.
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  December 19, 2009
nice! I love the robot! 5/5
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  December 19, 2009
The storyline is interesting and the sets are awesome. My only complaint is that the Mech seems a bit flimsy. Overall, great job!
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  December 19, 2009
The mech is really cool, also the storyline is awesome, my favorite photo is the first, good job.
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  December 19, 2009
sweet, Good luck.
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  December 19, 2009
Nice, interesting comic! I think this can become a very cool series, Im looking forward, good job!
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  December 19, 2009
This is an amzingly cool comic Awesomeness! I like the Mech so much!
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  December 19, 2009
Epic
 
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