Well, since this is still a WIP, I won't be too critical of it. The lava pool looks best of the various elements so far, though I would like to see use of more rounded and curved pieces to enhance the look. Also, using the curved pieces for the legs of the bed was a nice idea and makes it look more contemporary-style. As for the rest of it, I encourage you to find interesting ways to make the table, chair, walls, etc. True, a simple plate spanning 2 bricks works, but in general, the more intricate the design, the more it gets noticed. Look at some designer furniture and art websites and look for interesting designs to inspire you. BTW, is that a lava-lamp next to his bed? Oh, and please remove the scrolling text - it's just distracting.