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War of Garlak Nui Part One:The Finding
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War of Garlak Nui Part One:The Finding


On the island of Garlak Nui an evil darkness was spreding, to fill the city with evil shadows. Until a group of Toa formed a group and fought against the Makuta that plot to take over the city. One of these Toa was a Toa named Vorthok. He was one of the strongest on the team. Although, one awful day he was killed by Makuta Azcor. When his sister, Toa Malik found out about this, she was dipressed for months. "Don't worry Malik, we can help your brother" said Toa Melak. Toa Melak and Malik have been best friends since they were matoran."How do you know that? We was killed. And now the Makuta are doing;who knows what to them!" replied Malik."You know what? We have to go get him!" said Melak."How?"asked Malik."I think the Makuta killed him to bring him back to life so he can fight against us!" awnsered Melak. Malik stayed silent for a moment then she said"Okay, I'm with you, lets go.

And so the two toa of water went to the Makuta base to rescue Malik's Brother. When they were in, they looked for a room that a dead body would be. "Hey!" Melak exclaimed quietly."The Lab Room?" questioned Malik,"You think he's in here?" "I'm sure he is." replied Melak. So the to Toa went into the room. They found alot of strange objects like posions and experiments."Wow. What alot of equipment." said Malik,"I wonder what they do in here." They kept looking until they stumbled apon a strange, lifeless object."What's this?" asked Malik. Then she saw some writings on the wall next to the object.
"Melak....I think I found him..." said Malik in shock. The writings had said that the object they were looking at was a puppet, but was origonaly Toa Vorthok."Stone of Life?" asked Melak. The writings had also said that he can be brought to life by The Stone of Life."We have to find that stone." said Malik, you look on that side and I'll look on this side." "Okay." replied Melak. And so they looked everywhere around the room looking for the stone of life, until Melak stummbled apon a strange object covered in dust. "What's this?" Melak asked to herself. So she blew off the dust, coughing on the dust, she had found a strange translucent stone."Amazing! Malik! I found it!"exclaimed Melak. Malik came rushing over to look at it."Oh,wow! Are you ready to bring my brother back?"said Malik. So the two water Toa went to the puppet with the stone. When they had gotten to the puppet, Melak put in the stone. They both waited for a moment. Then they saw a fingure move."W-w-where am I?" asked Vorthok dazed."Vorthok!"exclaimed Malik."Malik! Melak! You came to help me!" exclaimed Vorthok. "We have to get out of here, who knows when a Makuta might come in."declaried Melak."I agree."said Vorthok. And so went off the three Toa. Until they were stopped at the door.

"HEY! HALT!" declaired a Makuta Gaurd."RUN!" yelled Vorthok. So they ran to the nearest room trying to hide. But their atempt failed, the Gaurd along with two other guards had found them. And so a battle had begun in the room. Although Vorthok was then pinned against the wall, but luckaly next to a scythe. Vorthok then grabbed it and started to fight with the Guard. The gaurd were then knocked out, but some of their armor had been destroyed. The Toa know that Makuta Guards can rebuild themselves so they hurried back to the base before they got rebuilt.

With sighs of releaf the three to where back at the base. "We made it." said Melak panting. "Lets go tell Zorman what had happened." said Malik. After they had told Zorman what had happened, it was quiet for a while."Hmmmm I see." he finally said,"Well Vorthok, we're glad you're back!" "It's good to be back." replied Vorthok. "Well we better start resting, because the Makuta are getting stronger. And so Vorthok was back on with the Toa. Although, there is something that the Toa will not see coming their way. They are strange creatures that are formed, from a simple leech....


End of Part One




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 I made it 
  December 6, 2009
Quoting Harvey Cu Great story and interesting characters. Since you are such a fan of bionicle, the administrators of Bionicle Display have sent you an invitation to join the biggest most active pure bionicle group at mocpages. If you accept the invitation, check out and participate in the new contest the Bionicle Tribute Contest in honor of the end of the bionicle theme line: Its been awhile since your last post. Hidrar for a small moc looks cool. Btw, the bionicle display group is holding its Bionicle Tribute Contest in honor of the end of the bionicle theme next year. Check it out and join. http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=28&topicid=38310
Hmm I'll have to think about it. It's a group right? Well the thing is that when I join a group I don't really participate in it(idk why). But as I said before I'll think about it.
 I like it 
  December 5, 2009
Great story and interesting characters. Since you are such a fan of bionicle, the administrators of Bionicle Display have sent you an invitation to join the biggest most active pure bionicle group at mocpages. If you accept the invitation, check out and participate in the new contest the Bionicle Tribute Contest in honor of the end of the bionicle theme line: Its been awhile since your last post. Hidrar for a small moc looks cool. Btw, the bionicle display group is holding its Bionicle Tribute Contest in honor of the end of the bionicle theme next year. Check it out and join. http://www.mocpages.com/group_conversation.php?id=28&topicid=38310
 
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