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Vengeance Chapter III " First Kill"
FINALLY Chapter III!
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Separatist forces have made a daring assault on the planet Kuat, however things have'nt gone well for the Confederacy as the seemingly unbreakable blockade has withstood even the heaviest fire, only a few boarding crafts where able to get past...


On a republic base on Kuat jedi master Nadil Nadon watches as the aproaching boarding crafts deploy their troops, but that is only one of his worries, as he felt a negative urge in the force as the last boarding craft entered the planet's atmosphere.


Thrak Ryo silently came in to the room "Master, here are the plans you asked me to bring"
"Well done my padawan" he responded, he then remembered a separatist base that had been set up, "Have you heard anything from T-LO yet?" "Yes, master; he and Jagger succesfully destroyed the outpost" somewhat glad to hear the news, he responded almost nervously" good, then we are one step closer to beating the separatists off of Kuat"

Buty as Nadon conforted himself with lies of hope a clonetrooper arived bearing terrible news "Sir, there is an intruder in the base!" "An intruder? Sargeant, just one?" "A jedi, sir." "Deploy all available reinforcements to stop his intruder at once!"

As the robed figure silently made his way across the cold corridors of the base he silenced all in his path, there was not a single witness of the cold-blooded ferocity in which they were all slain,

Using the force to unleash a wave of energy, Vane killed the last line of guards standing between him and his target.

He slowly walked through the hallway avoiding the corpses that littered the floor, each step felt to him like another stab in his back, another duel with a jedi...

But perhaps not all were dead, one clone who had somehow managed to survive Vane's ferocity rallying the last of his withering energies reached for his blaster,


and hoping to end this carnage once and for all fired at the young assasin's back

however the plasma bolts only manage to alert the aspiring sith of the clone's precense...

fiercely retaliating he holds the clone on a chokehold, pondering for a second on how to end his victim's life,

Vane throws his lightsaber at the soldier out of frustration and anger at not being able to use the force to choke him,

at last none stood in his path, all the obstacles had been cleared at last he would be able to prove himself to the sith, he walked away not even contemplating the lives he had coldly destroyed,

back at the command bridge of the facility, the jedi are alerted to the current position of the assasin, "You must leave Thrak, this assasin is too powerful for you, you'll surely be killed"

"Farewell master" said Thrak, not knowing that that would probably be the last time he would ever see his master "May the force be with you, Thrak Ryo" he responded sadly.

"Do you think the kid will be allright sir?" asked a clone trooper, "Yes, I trust he'll make it out of this battle alive" reassured the jadi master, who was more sure about Thrak surviving then himself.

A pitchblack lightsaber flew through the curious clone's back, instantly ending his life.

Alerted to the assasin's precense Dab=nil ignited his lightsaber as the only other survivor fired at the dark figure,

only to be struck with his own fire.

"Now that you have no one else to shield your self with, I'll at last be able to prove myself worthy to my master!" "That's not what you want, boy. You don't want to be Dooku's pawn, it's not too late, there is still time turn back!" "I am sick of your lies, jedi." "Then it is already too late..." responded Danil at hearing this.

Danil was the first to strike, surprising Vane with his speed, and superior strength.

Vane moved aside as Nadon overpowered him,

using this to his advantage he struck at the jedi once more, only to have his blow parried.

Danil stepped back, preparing to strike at Vane once more. He quickly formed a plan to end with his enemy...

Before Vane could react he hurled the dead clone at Vane knocking him down.

Taking advantage of Vane's distraction Nadon rushed to kill Vane

Vane used the force at the last second to hold his opponent's lightsaber

he then pushed it out of his would-be killer's hand

but he was prepared for that and used the force to summon his lightsaber again,

In an act of desesperation Vane pushed Nadon out the window of the bridge,

he however, much to Vane's dismay, landed on a passing shuttle.

He recklessly jumped after his target

he was able to hold on to the edge of the shuttle, but he was slowly losing his grip as Danil Nadon came closer...

Vane quickly jumped over the top wing, narrowly dodging Nadon's lightsaber.

As he landed behind the jedi master he struck once more.

"Give up, you won't win this fight while on this shuttle!" taunted Danil Nadon.


Vane's answer was far from what anyone expected, "You're right" he puled out his colink" OOM-49, order all your tanks to shoot down shuttle number 3375" "What are you doing, you'll be killed too!"

But none of that really mattered to OOM-49 as he ordered the shuttle shot down. His troops mindlessly obeyed, firing at their own craft.

"You are mad!" screamed the jedi as the shuttle was hit, Vane was silent and did'nt move, even as the shuttle rapidly decended...

Did you know...
-that Danil Nadon was originally an ithorian?
-that I had to reuse my "Sabotage" vig for this episode?
-that the blood effects were just to add a dramatic effect?
-that the reason Vane was unafected by the clones laser bolt is the fact that his cloak is made from kama-anti blast material?
-that if you say Shakespeare five times in front of a mirror it's very likely you'll be sent to a madhouse?






Comments

 I made it 
  December 30, 2009
Quoting Moodswim . Very cool! This series keeps getting better! I implore you, set your pics to the "large" setting! It's not hard and it would make viewing this alot easier.
Okay, I just forgot this time ;)
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  December 25, 2009
Very cool! This series keeps getting better! I implore you, set your pics to the "large" setting! It's not hard and it would make viewing this alot easier.
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  December 16, 2009
Awesome! I liked the part with the duel on the shuttle, it was very original!
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  December 6, 2009
"-that I had to reuse my "Sabotage" vig for this episode?" Hey reduce reuse recycle is what its all about. Nice builds and story. I also like fights atop flying ships. 5/5 ~Parker
Juan .
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Commander Hawke
  November 29, 2009
OK I had a dream where I saw part 4!
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  November 29, 2009
Quoting Darth Vader#/ CC-2139 Commander Cunning Great job. I really like this. It's a bit violent, but I like the sets. Great idea about a battle atop a shuttle. Did you get the idea from Fero?
No, I've always liked the idea of lightsaber duels on top of flying vehicles, the real inspiration however was from a part cut from the Force Unleashed, where Kota continues to duel Starkiller on top of the Rogue Shadow.
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  November 29, 2009
Great job. I really like this. It's a bit violent, but I like the sets. Great idea about a battle atop a shuttle. Did you get the idea from Fero?
Juan .
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Black Hawk
  November 27, 2009
"that if you say Shakespeare five times in front of a mirror it's very likely you'll be sent to a madhouse?" LOL Anyway I knew that was Sabotage!
 I made it 
  November 26, 2009
Quoting Nate 000 This is the best chapter yet! Have the jedi look like he gets killed but the wing deflects most of the blast allowing him to survive, while Vane jumps off and fataly injures himself. Due to the extent of the injury he becomes half robotic and Dooku refuses to take him as his apprentice in his mechanical state. Hence Vane is replaced. In anger Vane becomes an enemy of both the republic and the seperatists. Good for the next chapter?
Vane is already part cyborg, but I have different plans for him...
 I like it 
  November 26, 2009
This is the best chapter yet! Have the jedi look like he gets killed but the wing deflects most of the blast allowing him to survive, while Vane jumps off and fataly injures himself. Due to the extent of the injury he becomes half robotic and Dooku refuses to take him as his apprentice in his mechanical state. Hence Vane is replaced. In anger Vane becomes an enemy of both the republic and the seperatists. Good for the next chapter?
  November 26, 2009
To all of you out there, what happened with the clone is that he cut off his head by THROWING his lightsaber at him. The blade cut off his head, but the lightsaber hilt came with such force that it PUNCTURED the lower jaw and caused the clone to bleed profusely.
 I made it 
  November 26, 2009
To EVERYONE who disagrees with the blood lightsaber thing READ "Did you know..." number 3!
Juan .
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Black Hawk
  November 25, 2009
Love it! Anyway Im posting my new shadow sniper storm fig on your group sometime!
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  November 25, 2009
Theres too much blood, lightsabers dry up and char the wound.
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  November 25, 2009
awesome! clones get owned, what isn't there to like?
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  November 25, 2009
awesome! clones get owned, what isn't there to like?
 I made it 
  November 25, 2009
Quoting Commander Hess Great story line! The vigs are really nice! But I would suggest putting gray base plates in the back round of the vigs, and in the hanger if you have some. :) By the way, I'm working on my Jedi starfighter!
Cool, can't wait to see it finished BTW there's no hanger in this chapter, but yeah I should have used a green base plate when the AAT fires on the shuttle.
 I made it 
  November 25, 2009
Quoting Seph . Cool,I JUST GOT A FLICKR!I'm "Seph" of course. =D
Yeah, I noticed, but I won't name him Barney!
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  November 25, 2009
Cool,I JUST GOT A FLICKR!I'm "Seph" of course. =D
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  November 25, 2009
Dramatic.Good job.
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  November 25, 2009
Great story line! The vigs are really nice! But I would suggest putting gray base plates in the back round of the vigs, and in the hanger if you have some. :) By the way, I'm working on my Jedi starfighter!
 I made it 
  November 25, 2009
To anyone that likes this series, please join this group: http://www.mocpages.com/group.php/7683
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  November 25, 2009
nice. can Tarban-Agul My Jedi Be In A Comic
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  November 25, 2009
sweet, can I be in youre series?
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  November 25, 2009
Wow! The BEST one yet! I really love how this came out, when the Sith jumps out the window, that's very well done. Overall, great job! Can't wait for #4!!
 I made it 
  November 25, 2009
Quoting swash buckler Not bad- but lightsaber wounds do not bleed- at least humans....still 3/5- nice sw-moc
I know, it just looked bad without the blood.
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  November 25, 2009
This is very nice Vig/story,I love the custom jedis in this story.Check out my creations if you get the time~Noah
  November 25, 2009
Not bad- but lightsaber wounds do not bleed- at least humans....still 3/5- nice sw-moc
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  November 25, 2009
Nice work here! Love the floor in the room where the Sith confronts the Jedi.
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  November 25, 2009
Wow, this must be the best chapter yet! I love all the action, and the builds are great. Again, thanks for including me in the episode. =]
 
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